Holt Educational Consultant
Dec 17, 2017
Writing Feedback / It's an essay about leadership summit. What makes my presence there imperative? [2]
Nagham , this is not a proper explanation essay as to why you wish to attend this summit. Since you are limited by a word requirement, you will need to write a totally new response to the question. This time, you need to better explain how your objectives with regards to alleviating the plight of the women in your country ties in directly with the summit. Consider what the theme of the summit is this year. Then think of what the objectives of the foundation or organization that is mounting the summit are. Think about the relevance of these information to your ultimate goal or objective in terms of helping the women in your country. Consider what benefits you will gain from attending the summit in terms of networking assets of enlightening others about the plight of human rights inequality in the country you come from. Discuss those in the essay. These are the correct answers to the question being posed. These will be the reasons why you want to attend and why it is imperative that you participate in this summit.
Nagham , this is not a proper explanation essay as to why you wish to attend this summit. Since you are limited by a word requirement, you will need to write a totally new response to the question. This time, you need to better explain how your objectives with regards to alleviating the plight of the women in your country ties in directly with the summit. Consider what the theme of the summit is this year. Then think of what the objectives of the foundation or organization that is mounting the summit are. Think about the relevance of these information to your ultimate goal or objective in terms of helping the women in your country. Consider what benefits you will gain from attending the summit in terms of networking assets of enlightening others about the plight of human rights inequality in the country you come from. Discuss those in the essay. These are the correct answers to the question being posed. These will be the reasons why you want to attend and why it is imperative that you participate in this summit.