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Statement of Objectives (Supply Chain Management department)

4 - AS I often advice people posting in these forums, try using stronger verbs. Your main verb is often a...

Graduateasap - Jun 28, 2009EF_Sean - Jun 30, 2009
'Bournemouth University has one of the most advance educations in the world' - BU scholarship essay

31 - thank you very much simone and sean... i really appreciate your help.. yes i've learnt a lot.. and definitely...

Scholarshipcvani - Jun 28, 2009cvani - Jul 2, 2009
"Going overseas for the university" essay

7 - Why thank you. I'm afraid it doesn't bode well for the essay, though. When your reader's first thought is...

Writing Feedbackzeny - Jun 27, 2009EF_Sean - Jun 30, 2009
The direction I want to take my education; UWashington Bothell - PS/software systems

8 - In general, "kid" should be avoided. And I agree. You're ready to send it in, which I expect...

UndergraduateCharlie221133 - Jun 27, 2009EF_Simone - Jul 1, 2009
"I want to attend Chapel" - provide advice on how I can better my essay.

5 - Interesting read. Try to cut down on the double statements, 'unsafe and unstable' . They're unnecessary, and they slow...

Undergraduaterpwal7 - Jun 27, 2009Charlie221133 - Jun 30, 2009
Libraries are not just a collection of books: Are public libraries important?

4 - People still do this? I thought going off-line would result in a horrible death by some form of...

Writing Feedbackiris1 - Jun 27, 2009EF_Sean - Jun 27, 2009
'The dean and the award ceremony' - common app essay- open topic

5 - Especially in conjunction with "trembling." This highlights a wider problem with your use of language -- you tend...

Undergraduatecutestchloe - Jun 26, 2009EF_Sean - Jun 27, 2009
The death of Ophelia in Shakespeare's Hamlet: how and why it maters - prompt

22 - Could you put the summary first regarding the Ophelia's death? it wasn't clear...

Book Reportskdodom - Jun 26, 2009Budak88kampung - Feb 27, 2013
IELTS essay: Newspapers will soon become a thing of the past

7 - For this sort of essay, a completely one-sided argument is generally okay, and easier to write. In general, though,...

Writing Feedbacktrangquynh - Jun 26, 2009EF_Sean - Jun 26, 2009
1st essay in 13 years. Disadvantages that working mothers give to their children

12 - I wasn't offended by your essay. I was trying to point out that it is not a black...

Writing Feedbackdhachem - Jun 25, 2009Notoman - Jul 9, 2009
Topic for my personal statement (characteristics, family history, culture)

3 - A lot of people have this problem, but really, there is no need to worry. No one in...

UndergraduateFoxyKittie14 - Jun 25, 2009EF_Sean - Jun 26, 2009
"My Hidden Treasure" - University of Illinois Essay

9 - Followed shortly thereafter by "there is" and "there are," though this will require some rephrasing rather than simple deletions....

Undergraduatedblaze98 - Jun 25, 2009EF_Sean - Jun 26, 2009
Georgetown School of Foreign Service Transfer Essay

11 - Thanks again, Simone and Sean! :)...

UndergraduateEalgian - Jun 25, 2009Ealgian - Jun 28, 2009
how to reply an letter of acceptance

18 - Dear Moderators, I see what you mean. It is meant to say " "I write in reference to the...

UndergraduateMchonos - Jun 24, 2009bretta49 - Jul 20, 2009
Management Essay - Self-chosen topic: "Power - Strategic Management Tool".

16 - Dear Moderators, Thanks for the tips. Will do so and be in touch in due time. Shalom...

Essaysbretta49 - Jun 24, 2009bretta49 - Jun 27, 2009
Death of a Salesman - symbolism and American dream

5 - when is this due alice?...

Book ReportsAlice2009 - Jun 24, 2009MoeMoe1 - Jul 11, 2009
Show how my university studies affect my career future?

11 - Thank EF_Sean for your suggestions so much. I will repair and complete my essay....

Undergraduatephanphuongngan - Jun 23, 2009phanphuongngan - Jun 25, 2009
"How will this program help me accomplish my academic goals?

6 - I think this is a good start, but you have to be specific of what program you are applying...

UndergraduateNickT - Jun 23, 2009kw106 - Jul 3, 2009
In Need Of Writing Resources!

12 - Economist . . . you were the person asking about vocabulary building as well . . . right? ...

Grammar, Usageeconomist - Jun 23, 2009Notoman - Jun 29, 2009
I'm having some trouble understanding my teacher's directions. [About theses]

13 - Ah, yes -- adding the name of the story and author seems like an excellent idea, even if the...

EssaysSuzyMartin - Jun 23, 2009EF_Sean - Jun 24, 2009
"No! Not another disgusting lizard, Grandma!" - Medical Personal Statement

26 - For introductory clauses, just remember that the modifier always, always, always modifies the noun that comes directly after...

Undergraduatevietfun2k - Jun 23, 2009EF_Sean - Jun 24, 2009
Re-admission appeal statement (Reasons for Unsatisfactory Performance)

10 - When it was obvious that I couldn't fight my addiction, I should have sought counseling but I did...

Undergraduategodlyatheist - Jun 23, 2009EF_Simone - Jun 26, 2009
Describing a bombing.

5 - @Rajiv, Well I do not live in, nor have ever visited, Afghanistan. I thought I changed the country...

EssaysLiebe - Jun 23, 2009Liebe - Jun 24, 2009
Sample of combining sentences; Need advice.

14 - You can use either one of the sentences and you don't need the other one. Ex. "The woman...

Grammar, UsageLeighspire - Jun 23, 2009Didgeridoo - Mar 25, 2013
Your decision to enter the education field - CBEST Essay pratice

10 - I'm not so sure: Mark Twain wrote several humorous essays in the first person voice of a wrong-headed narrator....

Writing Feedbackrolandj727 - Jun 23, 2009EF_Simone - Jun 25, 2009
Need help with question - news story that will shape my future

11 - Of course, if CarlosGarcia19 is the sort of person who is specifically interested in related research questions, then...

UndergraduateCarlosGarcia19 - Jun 22, 2009EF_Sean - Jun 23, 2009
my essay on King lear's progress in Act 2 from denial to rage to isolation

14 - Indeed. Glad to hear you did well....

Book Reportskai - Jun 22, 2009EF_Sean - Jun 30, 2009
Graduate Mechanical Engineer; Recommendation Letter for John Doe

10 - Instead of the 1, 2 list, perhaps you could integrate your examples into the preceding paragraph, and elaborate a...

LettersEsun - Jun 22, 2009EF_Sean - Jun 23, 2009
"Where there's a will there's a way" - help me revise the Statement of Purpose

5 - You are from Iran? Cheetori? Khobam? That is as good as my Farsi gets....

Graduatemarzieh - Jun 22, 2009Liebe - Jun 26, 2009
"experience or achievement in your life" - Untitled Personal Statement

7 - It all so seemed superficial to me. I always saw it as everything television had portrayed it to be....

UndergraduateFoxyKittie14 - Jun 21, 2009Liebe - Jun 26, 2009
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