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SOP help - what am I supposed to write?

2 - Good evening :) A SOP is a detailed description of the career the applicant intends to pursue after...

UndergraduateAkvsp - Nov 25, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 25, 2008
"dreamed of becoming a singer" - UC personal statement - prompt #1

2 - Hello, I would like to see if you can express the idea that BEING AN ENGLISH TEACHER would...

Undergraduatechipmunk - Nov 25, 2008kevin02720 - Nov 26, 2008
Short answer, reasons for applying to Wellesley - need help editting

2 - Good evening :) Your first paragraph is clean; I wouldn't change anything. In the second paragraph, make...

Undergraduateluv4evr - Nov 25, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 25, 2008
How Will This Scholarship Help Me Attain My Career Goal essay.

2 - Good evening :) Mechanically, make sure you are only capitalizing proper nouns and the first words of sentences;...

ScholarshipBenunu - Nov 25, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 25, 2008
Each country has taught me things - UC Prompt 2 Three Cultures

3 - For some reason i had the feeling that i didnt answer the question. Thanks a lot Gloria...

Undergraduatethagg - Nov 25, 2008thagg - Nov 26, 2008
"my parents to teach and groom" - short 150 word response.

7 - Yes, it is very thoughtful and meaningful. You can improve it by adding an opening sentence that sums up...

Undergraduatejenf3r - Nov 25, 2008EF_Kevin - Nov 30, 2008
Computers have made life becomes easier or difficult? Discuss

2 - I suggest that you add a sentence to the first paragraph to say what your opinion is: although computers...

Writing Feedbacklayaili - Nov 25, 2008kevin02720 - Nov 25, 2008
Panorama City + I cried - Improved UCI PS Prompt #1 & #2 - Help me out

2 - Good evening :) Mechanically, make sure that you aren't using contractions in formal academic writing; for example, "it's"...

Undergraduatekobenit4eea - Nov 25, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 25, 2008
Trip to Europe: my curious traits - UC essay

5 - omg thanks! you guys are awesome. i will definitely be using this. and yes the repetition was done to...

Undergraduatehmirza - Nov 25, 2008hmirza - Nov 26, 2008
"My high school experience was different" - UC Undergraduate Prompt #2

5 - hello again! thanks for the advice btw def helped me. now to return the favor... need to fix...

Undergraduategchoi363 - Nov 25, 2008hmirza - Nov 26, 2008
UC Admissions Essays (for transfer) - Keeping it Simple

6 - the third prompt is not a prompt. They don't want to see another essay....

Undergraduatevanillakokakola - Nov 25, 2008Nickle - Nov 25, 2008
Marching band - common app short answer

NEW - Required In the space provided below, please elaborate on one of your activities (extracurricular, personal activities, or work experience)(150...

UndergraduateErocknroll212 - Nov 25, 2008 -
"want do anything without parents' permission." - UC prompt#2

2 - Greetings! I'll do my best to make helpful suggestions... This is a run-on sentence: Working as...

Undergraduatephraephet_oh - Nov 25, 2008kevin02720 - Nov 25, 2008
"Born in France" - UC prompt 1 and 2

8 - All you need is one good introductory sentence that says something like: The world that has shaped my dreams...

Undergraduatemerodir - Nov 25, 2008EF_Kevin - Nov 30, 2008
UC prompt#2 - eating disorder, courage

3 - Thank you so much for your advice!! I love the way you changed the paragraphs around a little, I...

Undergraduatekimharvey992 - Nov 25, 2008kimharvey992 - Nov 26, 2008
I am writing an essay about radio and international communications

2 - Hello! In order to come up with the main themes, I suggest that you search for books and...

EssaysMiss Loloa - Nov 25, 2008kevin02720 - Nov 25, 2008
UC prompt#1 - transfer student, econ major

3 - wow, i must agree, a very well written paper. the only thing that i might want to point out...

Undergraduatekimharvey992 - Nov 25, 2008hmirza - Nov 26, 2008
"Key Club" - Help on my UC Personal essays

3 - Good afternoon :) How has Key Club changed your dreams and aspirations? You should delve into that a...

Undergraduatemichellezonk - Nov 25, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 25, 2008
UC prompt #1 - trouble figuring out the topic about the world I came from

7 - Good evening :) Excellent changes! I think this is ready to submit; I wouldn't change anything. I think...

Undergraduatelyndn21 - Nov 25, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 26, 2008
"martial artist" - UC prompt help???

4 - This is a nice essay. I would like to mention that Dr. Yang Jwing Ming has important things to...

Undergraduatekabyak - Nov 25, 2008EF_Kevin - Nov 28, 2008
sport called Badminton - my uc prompt 2 essay

5 - cool thanks, your opinion on grammar/syntax matters. ALright thanks, I'll try to find yours....

UndergraduateNOkiaT - Nov 25, 2008NOkiaT - Nov 28, 2008
"what do you want to do when you grow up?" - UC Prompt 1

7 - No, describing the world you come from is exactly what you have done here. I think you did answer...

UndergraduateNOkiaT - Nov 25, 2008EF_Kevin - Nov 30, 2008
'living and schooling in different countries' - world you come from family, community

2 - Good afternoon :) I have edited your first paragraph and made some general comments also: "After another...

Undergraduatecloudone - Nov 25, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 25, 2008
A four-paragraph essay about The True Meaning of Courage

4 - Dear Gloria, Thanks so much for your suggestions. They were helpful! :)...

Writing Feedbackkarroll - Nov 25, 2008karroll - Nov 25, 2008
"born in the rural area of Chin" - pls. help revise: My background

3 - thanks, it is a great help...

Writing Feedbacktonydengcnu - Nov 25, 2008tonydengcnu - Dec 9, 2008
"My father" - pls. help revise part of my P.S.

NEW - My father works as a senior IT researcher in RICOH, a prestigious Japanese company. Under his influence, I learned...

Writing Feedbacktonydengcnu - Nov 25, 2008 -
'studies, sports or other things' - Tell about a personal character

4 - In regards to the above piece, watch your random capitalization and excessive use of the period; make sure you...

Undergraduatetonydengcnu - Nov 25, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 25, 2008
The Peking Opera - Describe your activities

2 - Good afternoon :) In regards to the first piece, one suggestion: 'hip, and cool' Should be...

Undergraduatefabxx - Nov 25, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 25, 2008
Question: Why we have to write personal essays?

2 - In our society, the written word is a very important way of communicating. Individuals are judged not only in...

UndergraduateZephyr003 - Nov 25, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 25, 2008
Capitalism, Jainism - UC prompt #1

2 - Good afternoon :) Some mechanical corrections: "...venturesome businesses of lemonade stands, babysitter clubs, and..." In regards...

Undergraduateshahindian2009 - Nov 25, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 25, 2008
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