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Diligent and perseverance are the most important qualities - my statement

NEW - Diligent and perseverance are the most important qualities that are necessary for me as a student. For the past...

Undergraduateawakenlion - Oct 18, 2008 -
[Analysis of Issue] Humans are becoming subservient to machines

4 - No, I don't think you lack examples; in fact, I think quite the opposite. My concern is that your...

Writing Feedbackfranklamparden - Oct 18, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 19, 2008
"favorite quotation from an essay or book" - Princetone University (needs revision)

4 - Thank you. Now it makes a more complete picture for me as well as others on this site, and...

UndergraduateTLaw88 - Oct 18, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 26, 2008
It's Not All About the Sticks - extracurricular essay

3 - Much better; you tie up the title to your content making the whole piece fluid. Nice work....

UndergraduateBeast53 - Oct 17, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 20, 2008
Essay about my weekend activities

3 - Hello Gloria, I really don't have words how much appreciated your comments and feedback. I wish I knew about...

Writing Feedbacksol - Oct 17, 2008sol - Oct 18, 2008
Cigarretes has been banned from public environment. Agree or Disagree?

NEW - Essay topic: Cigarretes has been banned from public environment. Agree or Disagree?? Around the world people are concerned...

Writing Feedbackvipao - Oct 17, 2008 -
essay about myself, when/where I was born, my study, hobbies, etc.

2 - "...I am the baggiest one." What does "baggiest" describe here? Do you mean biggest? I'm not sure... :) ...

Writing Feedbackcrawling - Oct 17, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 17, 2008
Essay: On Artificial Intelligence

8 - As in, being worth studying in schools in the US ? If that's the point, I see that...

Writing FeedbackRajiv - Oct 17, 2008Rajiv - Oct 19, 2008
how has your family influenced who you are? UCF admission essay

NEW - Please, tell me all i'm doing wrong in my paper. I have to submit my application for xfer today....

Undergraduatefernaj13 - Oct 17, 2008 -
"College was the best time of my life." -UCF APPLICATION ESSAY

3 - thanks!!...

Undergraduatevivalavida - Oct 17, 2008vivalavida - Oct 17, 2008
this paper significantly transformed me - pls edit this common app essay

2 - "...freshman ..." "...editor-in-chief ..." In regards to content, you are very concise and organized. Your piece is...

Undergraduateds816 - Oct 17, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 17, 2008
Take advantage of every moment ; Colombia Essay/ Rutgers

NEW - Take advantage of every moment is what my older sister would always tell me. When I was 14 years...

Writing Feedbackcynthia180 - Oct 17, 2008 -
Private Eloquence/ PAST EXPERIENCE

3 - I like the changes. It is more streamlined and much cleaner. A good response to the prompt....

Writing Feedbackcowman809 - Oct 16, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 17, 2008
my summer trip to Trinidad & Tobago - UF Essay Evaluation

2 - Good morning. Please note your other posting for mechanical and grammatical suggestions, as they still apply to this...

Undergraduateking723 - Oct 16, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 17, 2008
'Love is the answer to world's questions' - Essay on why love is important in life?

8 - You're very welcome. Feel free to post here not only for feedback on essays, but any general language...

Writing Feedbackvipao - Oct 16, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 18, 2008
GED Practice: Discuss the influence of rock music on young people

2 - "Because rock music is good entertainment for everyone, especially young people, it influences good physical condition, improvement of exercise...

Undergraduatefisherman - Oct 16, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 16, 2008
Management class Research paper

7 - Thanks for the feed back. Yes, I have citations to insert but I am not really familar with the...

Research Papersevette - Oct 16, 2008evette - Oct 19, 2008
CORNELL COMMON APP ESSAY; To feel desired is a primary biological need in life

2 - Good afternoon. My only suggestion is to make sure you are only capitalizing proper nouns and the first...

Undergraduateakhan11 - Oct 16, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 16, 2008
What experiences have led you to select your professional field?

2 - "Zip, zap, zoom! " went my..." "...does my Play Station give way every..." I suggest wrapping the...

Writing Feedbackkimaya - Oct 16, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 16, 2008
"struggling to comprehend my nemesis" - a significant experience

2 - Good afternoon. This is an excellent essay! Mechanically and grammatically clean, organized, fluid, with a great story for...

Undergraduatecaliforniagirl - Oct 16, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 16, 2008
Land for human's purpose or left in its natural conditions ?

NEW - In your country, is there more need for land to be left in its natural conditions or is there...

Writing Feedbacknezzaru - Oct 16, 2008 -
The Art Institute Essays..

2 - Can you look over this and tell me what you think? Thank you Section removed, as I have...

Undergraduateseven321 - Oct 15, 2008seven321 - Oct 19, 2008
What must we do to truly understand ourselves? Difficult for people to judge themselves evenhandedly

6 - In regards to usage, I suggest one of the books from the "Prentice Hall Guide for College Writers" series...

Writing Feedbackhelenalqy - Oct 15, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 20, 2008
"Congratulations! You are going to be a mother!"

9 - OK, I'm assuming the above is the new conclusion. One suggestion: "...talented, a natural leader, and overall...

Undergraduateccn7 - Oct 15, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 18, 2008
'true inner being' - MY UF admission essay

2 - Good afternoon. One mechanical suggestion: "...including soccer, which I had never played before. By my senior...

UndergraduateHelena - Oct 15, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 16, 2008
IT achievement - University of Miami Admission Essay

2 - Good morning. My mechanical suggestions are as follows: First, make sure that you are capitalizing only proper...

Undergraduatelfmasieri - Oct 15, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 18, 2008
Three Hovering Doormen--Four sonnets forming one poem

2 - Good afternoon. OK, let's start at the top. A sonnet is a poem of fourteen lines, traditionally speaking....

PoetrySimone - Oct 15, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 16, 2008
"I manage all of this", I would love to be a part of this place - FSU Essay - critique and ideas...

2 - "...say I have not, nor plan to, give in when these times occur." "...problems, and depend only on...

Undergraduatemoochykk33 - Oct 15, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 16, 2008
'My determined and independent grandfather' - person who had a significant influence

2 - Good afternoon. Just a couple of suggestions. First, "Grandfather" should not be capitalized, unless it is the first...

Undergraduatelist00 - Oct 15, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 16, 2008
'Being a pharmacist will help me help others' - Why I chose UCF?

6 - okay! thank you so much!...

Undergraduatexoxoheartx3 - Oct 15, 2008xoxoheartx3 - Oct 20, 2008
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