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2 - It was raining, and fog spread across the windows of the car. Provided by Boston University, The Modular...
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NEW - What is an academic experience, project, class or book that has influenced or inspired you? Here is my essay...
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2 - The story itself is well-written. The only thing is that it is a bit crowded, and seems to say...
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|Campus / Let love speak - Tufts Supplements
9 - admissions.tufts.edu/?pid=203 i'm not sure what the maximum is but it says here 50 words so i'm not so...
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|'Cape Cod Sea Camps' - Summer Camp Essay
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|SOP question confusion: explanation of your proposed field of study
4 - In addition to what Sean suggested, I also think that, as sublime guessed, they are definitely looking for WHY...
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5 - Great essay. Impressed on how you got something after having nothing so quickly. And to Kevin...nice quip...haha....
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|'Seriously interested in business from a very young age' - CALS - Cornell Essay
6 - Yes, that is a tough challenge... write something that stands out and is not superficial, you need to say...
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2 - For family reasons, I have visited New Zealand on many occasions, and have savored a distinctive cultural atmosphere. ...
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|philosophers and their effect on society, essay for my final assignment
2 - Hi, great essay. Just a few small suggestions: The main goal of philosophers is to obtain truth. ...
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3 - Yes! great advice from Sean. It seems to pack a harder punch... if you say it with fewer words....
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