|Personal statement for NUS: The big day
Undergraduatefaizan_abidfaizan_abid - Dec 27, 2008
|Is Sociology/AP Psychology considered core academic subjects?
Undergraduateyeeyee - Dec 27, 2008
|essay about Setbacks, I'm a foreign student,need help
7 - I think it would be good to write about cultural conflicts with your host family and how you overcame...
Undergraduatehanson3566yfung91 - Dec 27, 2008
|BU Supplement (I have many connections with Boston)
8 - Ohh okay thank you! I see what you're saying. Do you think that my essay sounds too much like...
Undergraduatechristineg711christineg711 - Dec 27, 2008
|Common App Essay ("Grazie! Grazie!")
Undergraduatecrissy1251christineg711 - Dec 27, 2008
|I chose to go to Kenya for my school trip - Travelling to other countries
UndergraduateIvy_91Ivy_91 - Dec 27, 2008
|I need some quick help on a tense question (i.e. past vs. present)
Grammar, UsagerathrbswimEF_Kevin - Dec 27, 2008
|Grinnell Supplement essay - what makes me an individual
9 - well, I just said that I first learnt Grinnell from Grinnell students in a foreign forum. And I then...
Undergraduatejustinwangjustinwang - Dec 27, 2008
|"Do you feel like you are part of the local community?" u of michigan
Undergraduatekaka0525kaka0525 - Dec 27, 2008
|After-school activity - Role playing
4 - I would change the first sentence because it sounds like role-playing is your only after school activity. I would...
Undergraduateowen92217EF_Constance - Dec 27, 2008
|The click of a camera shutter; NYU short answers [all five]
5 - thanks so much for the feedback!!! SUPER helpful.. Yeah -- music business or music industry is a major...
Undergraduatex soundclashx soundclash - Dec 27, 2008
|"Why architecture?" essay - Rice
3 - Thanks! I just want to make sure it's coherent and I don't sound like I'm jumping from place to...
Undergraduatepriscileungpriscileung - Dec 27, 2008
|Nerd at heart - Why UChicago
4 - Oh, I'm sorry about that, but there is no changing posts, just editing that everyone can see. We need...
UndergraduatexperceptionxEF_Kevin - Dec 27, 2008
|'political science and Obama's field office' - Cornell- college of arts and sciences
3 - i just got access to a computer here and Mexico, and I read through your response. I had corrected...
Undergraduategmailblows31gmailblows31 - Dec 27, 2008
|'I can contribute tons in college' - Lehigh University Supplement Questions
NEW - As you researched and visited colleges and universities, why did you decide to apply to Lehigh? Please give specific...
|What is your favourite word and why? - Uni of Virginia
16 - hmm... i think i almost liked your first version better... the second version makes you "haha" outlook on life...
Undergraduatewongxymbhaire - Dec 27, 2008
|My father said my essay sucked (Why Engineering? Why Cornell)
6 - Engineering reminds me of the particle accelerators that smash atoms together to make extraordinary products. If we put the...
UndergraduatechuliuxiangEF_Kevin - Dec 27, 2008
|Alex and Su essay (the Monkey King and Alexander the Great) common app
6 - I applaud your extra effort. When you feel inspiration come over you, always use it! Put the comma...
Undergraduatejenf3rEF_Kevin - Dec 27, 2008
|[BYU] What to write in a brief biography?
6 - Good! It's funny how, in order to achieve your goals, sometimes you need to be smart and tell people...
UndergraduateAmyRemusEF_Kevin - Dec 27, 2008
|Should we hide feeling or not?
2 - I am very above-board and talkative. I tend to express what I think . However, hiding emotions also has...
UndergraduatePuckEF_Kevin - Dec 27, 2008
|'disciplinary lessons' - Tufts - Short Answer
6 - Yes, I second that! You guys are great! To all of you who offer such meaningful peer reviews, please...
Undergraduatehello123EF_Kevin - Dec 27, 2008
|Essay: "What is art for me?"
Writing FeedbackPower_HammerAngela629 - Dec 27, 2008
|Thesis - For Baby boomers
4 - Try looking at articles on Google Scholar, and use a word search for "baby boomers" and "behavior." be sure...
EssayssarahmkEF_Kevin - Dec 27, 2008
|'I began to finalize my own college list' - Why Carnegie?
12 - Cornell harbors brilliant professors and a diverse student body that I know will stimulate me to be my best....
Undergraduate123abcEF_Kevin - Dec 27, 2008
|common app short answer (work at the hospital)
3 - Having worked at the hospital for almost two years has helped me prepare for the real world, at least...
Undergraduatejoke0611EF_Kevin - Dec 27, 2008
|Common App-Significant Experience- To jump or not to jump (suggestions pls)
5 - I was not the kind of girl who enjoyed going without showers for a week, surviving on the staple...
Undergraduatecutiepotutie25EF_Kevin - Dec 27, 2008
|As inventory and supply manager of the restaurant, such is a typical work day for me.
3 - It had been a long tiring walk to the restaurant from the Port Authority. I finally reached the restaurant...
UndergraduateakashnegiEF_Kevin - Dec 27, 2008
|Biomedical Engineering at the McCormick School of Engineering and Applied Science - NU essay
Undergraduatechuliuxiangchuliuxiang - Dec 27, 2008
|'I came from a past marked by war and political corruption in my homeland' - UVA supplement essay
3 - My parents, during the Salvadorian civil war, belonged to two opposing political factions, embodying the spirit of Romeo &...
UndergraduategmanzEF_Kevin - Dec 27, 2008
|U of wisconsin essay - "knowledge is boundless"
3 - Heyy...I wrote another one...i felt this answers more of the question... The University of Wisconsin values an educational...
Undergraduateprincetongirlprincetongirl - Dec 27, 2008