|Writing Creative Essays
NEW - Creative Essays "The girl slowly walked into the room where she saw her dream date. She smiled and...
|'Homeschool' - Personal Statement for Common App
2 - Greetings! I think you have a very good start here. With just a little tinkering here and there,...
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|'Mass communication today' - University Ca Essays
6 - Greetings! You have written a wonderful essay! I have only a few small corrections to suggest: "the...
UndergraduaterosadiaEF_Team2 - Dec 31, 2006
|short essay for review for police test
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|'Japan anime' - Common App. (Wash U in St. Louis, Cornell, + Syracuse)
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UndergraduateChiisanahimeEF_Team2 - Dec 29, 2006
|'international student and academic atmosphere' - Boston University Essay
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UndergraduateskitzzEF_Team2 - Dec 28, 2006
|Repaying a kindness; My aunt was an epitomy of goodness.
2 - Greetings! This is a compelling story. It just needs a little tweaking. I lay flat on my...
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|Keeping cool - Essay revise
2 - Greetings! I like the way you begin with your own personal reaction to the heat. Your description in...
Writing FeedbackayshaEF_Team2 - Dec 28, 2006
|A a system to think without system; Opinions on an unorthodox approach essay?
2 - Greetings! You appear to have the mind of a philosopher! I think this is a very creative essay,...
Undergraduaten0nl33tEF_Team2 - Dec 21, 2006
|Minority Report Shortstory Vs. Minority Report Movie
NEW - Hello, I am currently in high school grade 10 level and we are supposed to write an essay about...
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|"Nobody gave me a chance!
2 - Greetings! I'll be glad to help with proofreading your essay. Let's take a look: "I had seen...
Writing FeedbackayshaEF_Team2 - Dec 19, 2006
|PUBLIC UNIVERSITY OR A PRIVATE ONE?
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|Stuck with my essays. Can anyone help me out?
2 - Hi Fred, Sorry to hear you are overloaded with your work. Yes, the Christmas season doesn't allow too...
EssaysfredyEF_Team - Dec 18, 2006
|oral history project essay / gender theme
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Writing FeedbacksuperkayteeEF_Team2 - Dec 17, 2006
|ROLE OF THE MYSTIC UTTERANCE "OM"; Herman Hesse's Siddhartha
2 - Greetings! Boy, does this take me back! I read Siddhartha about a gazillion years ago. I think you...
Book ReportsAdamskiEF_Team2 - Dec 17, 2006
|Research paper on Science fair project. Help fast due tomorrow.
NEW - Well, it's not much of a research paper. I been procrastinating lately because winter break is just 2 days...
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|Essay about rising divorce rate in Turkey
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|FBI CRIMINAL PROFILER; Statement of Goals and Purposes
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Graduatecjjackson11EF_Team2 - Dec 15, 2006
|Essay: From ARPANET to the Internet
4 - You're welcome--I was glad to help! Isn't the thesaurus a great tool? I love mine! I use the...
Writing FeedbackbubbledesignsEF_Team2 - Dec 15, 2006
|A SMALL STEP - Evaluate a significant experience or achievement - Essay
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UndergraduatebernatEF_Team2 - Dec 14, 2006
|Personal Statement (applying for Development studies)
8 - thank you very much for your feedback.. bests, Muhiddin...
UndergraduateMuhiddinMuhiddin - Dec 14, 2006
|Tim O'Brien question
2 - Greetings! I couldn't quite tell from your post just what your questions are. Can you be more specific?...
Book ReportssamsungEF_Team2 - Dec 13, 2006
|differences between men and women in a relationship
2 - Greetins, Paola! Sounds like you'll be doing a "Men are from Mars, Women are from Venus"-type essay, eh?...
EssaysPaolaSalcedoEF_Team2 - Dec 13, 2006
|Essay about the career opportunities
2 - Greetings! I think your essay does a fine job of meeting the criteria for a "logical division of...
Writing FeedbackbernatEF_Team2 - Dec 12, 2006
|Thesis - Relations of French and English Canadians
3 - Awesome! Thanks for the advise, I'll take it from here....
Dissertationsdgolverkdgolverk - Dec 11, 2006
|Burst of Rainbow. Compare contrast essay: skittles and starbursts
5 - one girl wrote a 4 page paper. returned it sayin it was to long and then she put it...
Writing FeedbackBadAngel299BadAngel299 - Dec 11, 2006
|How to Write a Case Study?
NEW - Case studies can be used in any academic discipline. The purpose of a case study is to provide a...
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|Position Paper on Kids and the importance of grammar
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|My College Writing final: Process Essay
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|"wake up call" - Evaluation of myself
NEW - I am new to this kind of writing and I don't believe I'm very good, especially when it comes...
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