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The importance of vocational guide in secondary school

4 - Thanh you two very much ^^! I'm not good at using tenses....

Writing FeedbackAlamanda Bud - Sep 18, 2010Alamanda Bud - Sep 28, 2010
My Morning Cup of Coffee essay - check for grammar, and spelling!

2 - Hi Hannah, I don't really get what you said in this sentence. "The only thing worse than not...

Writing Feedbackhannah16 - Sep 27, 2010Tomomi - Sep 28, 2010
"Entrepreneurship" - The Essay about intellectually excitement

5 - Kevin, thank you so the amazing advice!...

Undergraduateljrtan - Sep 23, 2010ljrtan - Sep 27, 2010
"Maturing from your mistakes" Topic of choice essay

3 - I really like the story you chose to back up your essay on maturity! My favorite part is...

Undergraduateserenesky - Sep 27, 2010taytayy - Sep 27, 2010
"A soothing oasis - Why Swarthmore?" - Swarthmore Supplement

9 - I do not understand the first sentence, who is the subject? And just a suggestion, but maybe...

UndergraduateMichael48304 - Sep 20, 2010sambo595 - Sep 27, 2010
Narrative: an exciting protagonist in Toy Story 2.

2 - The story is built around the protagonist in that the protagonist is always taking the initiative. ------This is a...

Writing Feedbacksoul9 - Sep 24, 2010EF_Kevin - Sep 27, 2010
TOEFL; Decisions should be made alone or not

6 - You take a step, but you MAKE a decision. ...if they are not made after careful thought. ...

Writing Feedbackjag - Sep 24, 2010EF_Kevin - Sep 27, 2010
a one-page essay (how you relax after getting home from school or work.)

5 - What I Do When I Get Home When I get home every day from my school at 1:30,...

Writing FeedbackZubaida - Sep 24, 2010EF_Kevin - Sep 27, 2010
It's time to do what you have been working towards for 11 years. Peabody admission

4 - ...so old and stale for me that it wasn't getting any better; i t was getting worse. One...

Undergraduateninja1992 - Sep 24, 2010EF_Kevin - Sep 27, 2010
My struggle with teamwork and leadership

5 - Thanks for all the great feedback! After reading your comments I realized that my essay doesn't clearly answers...

Undergraduatetoast93 - Sep 23, 2010toast93 - Sep 27, 2010
My life has been much less of a straight line ; Peace Corps/ Different cultures

4 - Try to be more efficient by using fewer words when it will not detract from the meaning. Like...

ScholarshipJay007 - Sep 24, 2010EF_Kevin - Sep 27, 2010
Malaysia, Philippines, USA - Biography essay... am I on the right track?

4 - I think it will be better and more interesting if you cut out the first part: This may come...

Writing Feedbackkmango - Sep 24, 2010EF_Kevin - Sep 27, 2010
"serving others can change your life" - Presbyterian College Essay.

3 - Right here, I wish you would add one more sentence before ending the paragraph. It needs a sentence...

Undergraduateshelbyesteward - Sep 24, 2010EF_Kevin - Sep 27, 2010
"to get good grades" - Personal statement on academic performance

5 - I don't understand this sentence... Maintaining an above average GPA had taken a toll on my mind, but...

Undergraduateserenesky - Sep 24, 2010EF_Kevin - Sep 27, 2010
My resiliency: personality you are most proud of, and how has it impacted you

2 - More words than necessary here: find myself among experience, I always manage to find ... my way to...

UndergraduateItalianOpera - Sep 24, 2010EF_Kevin - Sep 27, 2010
"Promoting bilingualism" UT Issue for Admission

3 - This whole essay is very well-written. I just hope your AO reader is not someone who identifies with...

Undergraduatejustlikekathy - Sep 23, 2010EF_Kevin - Sep 27, 2010
Aspects Of My Life A University Wants - Essay '10

2 - Hello Suranjan! Whenever you post an essay, include the prompt. This seemed like a really obvious observation...

UndergraduateSuranjan - Sep 25, 2010ershad193 - Sep 27, 2010
"Perfect and plain life" - factors that have most shaped your life and aspirations

4 - It is better to not use the sentence fragment. Make it a complete sentence: Life was perfect to...

Scholarshipskysblue - Sep 23, 2010EF_Kevin - Sep 27, 2010
UNEDUCATED Vs EDUCATED (WHO TEACHES WHO?)

7 - I agree...people learn from experience as well as education, so obviously uneducated people CAN teach educated people. Google...

Writing Feedbackupul - Sep 24, 2010EF_Kevin - Sep 27, 2010
essay about how do you think that studying economics will help you in your major

4 - Yeah! That's what I think, too! What is your major, Judy? I'm glad you joined EssayForum....

Undergraduatejudy abbott - Sep 24, 2010EF_Kevin - Sep 27, 2010
applying for Police officer (essay about an policeman carrying an educational book)

3 - Hello, It sounds like we need a descriptive essay. Is this for a class assignment, or are you in...

Graduatefrostedlime - Sep 23, 2010EF_Kevin - Sep 27, 2010
"About Tan" - Learn to be Independent (influential person)

3 - But when I was eleven years old, everything had change, because my mother was giving gave birth to my...

Undergraduatehungluu2009 - Sep 27, 2010mea505 - Sep 27, 2010
"the relationship i have with my parents" - Personal Statment for colleges

3 - Hi Shelmar: You have the workings of a good essay here, but I really do think that you...

UndergraduateShalma - Sep 26, 2010mea505 - Sep 27, 2010
The Shins, Organization, Canon, Sandals, Grades, Yoga -Letter to your future roommate

4 - Thanks, this will really help me when I eventually need to cut it down to the 250 word max...

Undergraduateetron - Sep 21, 2010etron - Sep 27, 2010
for essay on impact of second grade talent show

2 - I simply loved the descriptive essay you wrote. You are a good writer. I did make one correction, as...

Undergraduatewurmgirl09 - Sep 26, 2010mea505 - Sep 27, 2010
"my interest for entrepreneurship grew more" - reasons why you want to transfer.

NEW - >>Please provide a statement (250 words minimum) that addresses your reasons for transferring and the objectives you hope to...

Undergraduatesabs - Sep 27, 2010 -
"good and bad consequences of my own curiosity" - commonapp essay.

11 - If there's a favorite button somewhere, I'd have pressed it. =D The entire essay flows really well. Although...

Undergraduateahchong - Sep 24, 2010zengrz - Sep 26, 2010
"What don't you know?" seahorses

6 - Thank you so much for you feedback! I think with a bit more editing- I'll definitely take your suggestions...

Undergraduateampa - Sep 22, 2010ampa - Sep 26, 2010
Management and Economics: Meaningful event moving to Florida - UF Essay.

4 - Thank you both for your input. @shofa nefertete-I worked on the sentence flow some more, it was slightly...

Undergraduateskimonawhim - Sep 21, 2010skimonawhim - Sep 26, 2010
Luxury goods market is on the decline: GRE argument essay

2 - The argument argues...this doesn't sound right. How about 'The argument is that...? that due to the declining state...

Writing Feedbackradwa - Sep 24, 2010EF_Susan - Sep 26, 2010
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