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working with children - UF ESSAY; situation which ignited something inside of me

4 - i think its a very well written and good essay. a few points: i feel you should, in...

Undergraduatevirginia - Aug 9, 2009tal105 - Aug 9, 2009
"My dream America" - common app essay draft..

5 - thanks all for the advices. its true that the beginning part is very confusing. and the replies were helpful...

Undergraduatejso1226 - Aug 9, 2009jso1226 - Aug 9, 2009
Summary-Response Essay - Celebrating Nerdiness by Tom rogers

5 - Your summary is okay. Your thesis should probably include a summary of the reasons why you agree with...

Writing Feedbackkingdomcome - Aug 2, 2009EF_Sean - Aug 9, 2009
Paired Text essay on Nineteen Eighty-Four and Brave New World... where to start?

3 - Well, you seem to know that the "big difference" lies in the fact that BNW portrays a world that...

Book ReportsMrBlack - Aug 9, 2009EF_Sean - Aug 9, 2009
Quote "we get older.." - how to cite it? Correct usage of "we."

5 - If you really want to avoid it, you could go with "the company." Also, simply adopting a more concise...

Grammar, Usagefabxx - Nov 3, 2008EF_Sean - Aug 9, 2009
I want to write an essay for the art institute in Chicago and I really need help

4 - Yep. You should always supply the exact prompt when asking for help on these sorts of essays. As to...

Undergraduatetiod - Aug 8, 2009EF_Sean - Aug 9, 2009
"hard work leads you to success in your life" - need help in correcting my essay

5 - Your logic here isn't very tight. Overwhelming evidence suggests that hard work is in fact the key to...

Writing Feedbackpelaru - Aug 8, 2009EF_Sean - Aug 9, 2009
"Core values" - FSU essay. good? bad?

4 - I am applying to FSU and also have to write the same essay! I think you're on the...

Undergraduatekellyb - Aug 8, 2009sarahstu - Aug 9, 2009
Cover letter for postdoc application

5 - Thank you guys. All suggestion is highly appreciate....

Lettersgoldlaid - Aug 1, 2009goldlaid - Aug 9, 2009
poem review [the wounded soul]

8 - Right, and as the poet, one must live with the possibility that readers might take away from the...

Poetryimt - Aug 1, 2009EF_Simone - Aug 9, 2009
The Limerant, caught, so voluntarily; Like melody drawn nightingale

3 - Devotion is the core of love; I think you should emphasis it more in this poetry. Ambiguity arises from...

PoetryRob My Heart - Jul 23, 2009imt - Aug 9, 2009
Traveling, my Grandparent's accomplishments - FSU Undergraduate Essay

4 - "Pretty" is a vague modifier. You need a lot more detail. Saying that you love baseball and...

Undergraduatewells - Aug 8, 2009EF_Simone - Aug 8, 2009
AUT Physiotherapy essay - need review

11 - 4wheelz Granted I do well this semester, studying Physiotherapy could be a possibility and if so, this will give...

Undergraduate4wheelz - Aug 8, 20094wheelz - Aug 8, 2009
UC entrance essay #2:special personal quality

7 - I look forward to reading that....

Undergraduatemzn528 - Aug 3, 2009EF_Simone - Aug 8, 2009
"Winter Day", "Fall" - Review My Poems.

8 - Several things. In the poem titled "Fall," who is the speaker in the poem, also, who is the "we?"...

PoetryHoNoRStudent - Jul 21, 2009sarlis - Aug 8, 2009
I feel like an idiot writing this - Fashion Institue Essay

9 - yea, they're kind of corny lol...

UndergraduateCarter1700 - Aug 5, 2009Carter1700 - Aug 8, 2009
The day I met her will shine like a beacon in my memory forever

31 - Tikhai, sounds like a smart plan :) x...

Undergraduatekritipg - Jul 26, 2009Liebe - Aug 8, 2009
How you gained respect for social differences (University of Michigan)

15 - Share an experience through which you have gained respect for intellectual, social, or cultural differences. Comment on how your...

UndergraduateLlamapoop123 - Aug 6, 2009Liebe - Aug 8, 2009
'idea of learning / isles of Trinidad and Tobago' - UCF Personal Statements

12 - ^Yes I did, because you were not clear. There really is not that much of a difference...

UndergraduateRheaV - Aug 3, 2009Liebe - Aug 8, 2009
"Lights, Camera, Action" - edit this admission essay for content, grammar

4 - "I have been acting for my whole life butandrealistically speaking I have only performed for five of those years."...

Undergraduatealyse - Aug 4, 2009Llamapoop123 - Aug 8, 2009
"Saying Goodbye"

4 - Thanks a lot for the help. I always have a problem with tenses. I'll try to take note of...

Writing FeedbackFearlessDare - Aug 2, 2009FearlessDare - Aug 8, 2009
The difference between: can/could, may/might, will/would, that/which

5 - Sounds like something you could probably just ask the overmind. Wikipedia has a pretty good discussion of auxiliary verbs...

Grammar, Usageescritor - Aug 8, 2009EF_Sean - Aug 8, 2009
critique - facing problems sometimes in writing

6 - Why don't you post a sample of your work here? Your posts have not exactly been the epitome of...

Grammar, Usagestuti - Aug 6, 2009EF_Sean - Aug 8, 2009
Common application - Question regarding essay content

8 - Agreed. But it's really difficult for me to express how I really feel about this without having you...

Essayshope123 - Aug 8, 2009hope123 - Aug 8, 2009
Are established rules too limited to guide people in real-life situations?

4 - I suggest that you can make the topic more specific. For example, confime it to a specific kind of...

Essayscheeryy_cake - Aug 5, 2009mathsam - Aug 8, 2009
"people should "stick with their own kind" - University of Michigan essay

26 - ^Hey Simone. When I said that, I was not making a statement based on my own opinion. I was...

Undergraduatetal105 - Jul 28, 2009Liebe - Aug 8, 2009
How to write a book on "The causes of the way you behave"?

5 - And you might mention whether publication is your ultimate objective, or whether you are writing primarily for your own...

Grammar, UsageDonsenator - Aug 6, 2009EF_Sean - Aug 8, 2009
At this summit of world leaders, tensions were high; avoid falling into cliches.

6 - Either way, you should still return to the simulation at the end of the essay. You need to close...

Undergraduatechahn375 - Aug 3, 2009EF_Sean - Aug 8, 2009
Classification and Divison Essay on different "sources of energy."

6 - Natural fossil fuels, yes. Biofuels are universally considered renewable, as you point out. So, if petroleum becomes a biofuel...

Writing FeedbackReborn - Aug 3, 2009EF_Sean - Aug 8, 2009
Causes and Solutions for increasing traffic congestion

6 - I'm sorry, but we cannot tell you what your score might be as we are not trained IELTS scorers....

Writing Feedbackrosamond00 - Jul 30, 2009EF_Simone - Aug 7, 2009
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