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IELTS essay: Newspapers will soon become a thing of the past

7 - For this sort of essay, a completely one-sided argument is generally okay, and easier to write. In general, though,...

Writing Feedbacktrangquynh - Jun 26, 2009EF_Sean - Jun 26, 2009
Re-admission appeal statement (Reasons for Unsatisfactory Performance)

10 - When it was obvious that I couldn't fight my addiction, I should have sought counseling but I did...

Undergraduategodlyatheist - Jun 23, 2009EF_Simone - Jun 26, 2009
Cover Letter for internship with a Member of Parliament

5 - ^I agree with Sean. 'I perceive an internship in Westminster to be an exciting and useful enrichment.' ^You...

LettersPhiliboy - Jun 20, 2009Liebe - Jun 26, 2009
"Where there's a will there's a way" - help me revise the Statement of Purpose

5 - You are from Iran? Cheetori? Khobam? That is as good as my Farsi gets....

Graduatemarzieh - Jun 22, 2009Liebe - Jun 26, 2009
"experience or achievement in your life" - Untitled Personal Statement

7 - It all so seemed superficial to me. I always saw it as everything television had portrayed it to be....

UndergraduateFoxyKittie14 - Jun 21, 2009Liebe - Jun 26, 2009
I have studied intensively, especially maths and physics for the past twelve years - scholarship

38 - "This scholarship will allow me focus on a career that no other university in Vietnam can do." Um, I...

Scholarshipthaihanguyen74 - Jun 13, 2009EF_Sean - Jun 26, 2009
Topic for my personal statement (characteristics, family history, culture)

3 - A lot of people have this problem, but really, there is no need to worry. No one in...

UndergraduateFoxyKittie14 - Jun 25, 2009EF_Sean - Jun 26, 2009
Show how my university studies affect my career future?

11 - Thank EF_Sean for your suggestions so much. I will repair and complete my essay....

Undergraduatephanphuongngan - Jun 23, 2009phanphuongngan - Jun 25, 2009
Your decision to enter the education field - CBEST Essay pratice

10 - I'm not so sure: Mark Twain wrote several humorous essays in the first person voice of a wrong-headed narrator....

Writing Feedbackrolandj727 - Jun 23, 2009EF_Simone - Jun 25, 2009
"tip the waiter" essay - what have you learnt from a mistake?

9 - Should we tip the waiter?". "Okay.", he said. Outside the restaurant, we (me and my 4 friends) were...

Writing Feedbackchintan - Jun 21, 2009Liebe - Jun 25, 2009
Can't think of an essay topic that is the most common topic ever

11 - Indeed, it's a very original topic, and I look forward to reading your draft when you have it....

Essaystau - Jun 19, 2009EF_Sean - Jun 25, 2009
FSU addmissions essay ("I believe your University will give me the knowledge")

10 - It sounds like it was your father who was not there for you, even though the rest of your...

Undergraduatebugie09 - Jun 14, 2009EF_Simone - Jun 24, 2009
"No! Not another disgusting lizard, Grandma!" - Medical Personal Statement

26 - For introductory clauses, just remember that the modifier always, always, always modifies the noun that comes directly after...

Undergraduatevietfun2k - Jun 23, 2009EF_Sean - Jun 24, 2009
I'm having some trouble understanding my teacher's directions. [About theses]

13 - Ah, yes -- adding the name of the story and author seems like an excellent idea, even if the...

EssaysSuzyMartin - Jun 23, 2009EF_Sean - Jun 24, 2009
CBEST: Technology today has been positive or negative impact?

16 - Actually, I think you have done a very good job of showing that the creation of the atomic bomb...

Writing Feedbackbubuvio - Jun 10, 2009EF_Sean - Jun 24, 2009
Describing a bombing.

5 - @Rajiv, Well I do not live in, nor have ever visited, Afghanistan. I thought I changed the country...

EssaysLiebe - Jun 23, 2009Liebe - Jun 24, 2009
Need help with question - news story that will shape my future

11 - Of course, if CarlosGarcia19 is the sort of person who is specifically interested in related research questions, then...

UndergraduateCarlosGarcia19 - Jun 22, 2009EF_Sean - Jun 23, 2009
Graduate Mechanical Engineer; Recommendation Letter for John Doe

10 - Instead of the 1, 2 list, perhaps you could integrate your examples into the preceding paragraph, and elaborate a...

LettersEsun - Jun 22, 2009EF_Sean - Jun 23, 2009
"Growing up and self-improvement" essay - how can i write a topic?

7 - If you have actually tried writing the essay, you might want to post a draft here for more feedback....

Essaysnuocmatcuada - Jun 9, 2009EF_Sean - Jun 23, 2009
Any good topics for classification essay? similar to compare and contrast essay

4 - thank you=)...

Essayscrazypnai_008 - Jun 17, 2009crazypnai_008 - Jun 22, 2009
Common App- Reasons for Transfer (is it TMI? it's not completed or edited yet)

11 - That about sums my own view of the matter, too. I suspect that the vast majority of application...

UndergraduateItaly - Jun 20, 2009EF_Sean - Jun 22, 2009
When I first heard the news that I was moving to Brooklyn, I felt overwhelmed with anger - challenge

8 - It depends upon the criteria used to select scholarship recipients. If they are looking for someone who has accomplished...

Undergraduateatikin - Jun 19, 2009EF_Sean - Jun 22, 2009
'study methods required to survive in college' - Statement regarding GPA

11 - Yes, it would only take a sentence or two to specify your new study habits. It is, of course,...

UndergraduateDrudoy - Jun 19, 2009EF_Simone - Jun 21, 2009
'I joined a worldwide leading service oilfield company' - SOP for Master in Petroleum Engineering

4 - You need a stronger intro, too. "Since I was in High School I had a profound interest for Science...

Graduatemune - Jun 19, 2009EF_Sean - Jun 20, 2009
'20th century hero' - Research Paper on Franklin D. Roosevelt

9 - I love the English language. I don't think we disagree here. That Roosevelt was overly socialist and inclined to...

Research Paperssound10kp - Jun 19, 2009EF_Sean - Jun 20, 2009
Essay about "Hope" - what to write?

8 - True enough. Since the topic given was "hope" though, I stand by my assertion that an essay that looks...

Essaysqing - Jun 19, 2009EF_Sean - Jun 20, 2009
Essay on the Types of Germs - bacteria

22 - I like the quotation you used. Perhaps you should cite it, according to whatever format you are supposed to...

Writing FeedbackHaya - Jun 4, 2009EF_Sean - Jun 19, 2009
Law School Personal Statement ("I am a fighter.")

11 - You seem to want to do something involving human rights. That's nice. In fact, it is like the concept...

Graduatejeyz - Jun 10, 2009EF_Sean - Jun 19, 2009
Statement in support of application for a Research Technician

3 - Aye, the content of these sorts of essay tend to be fairly standard. You have to talk about certain...

LettersSpellbound - Jun 19, 2009EF_Sean - Jun 19, 2009
TOEFL - modern society has become more complex, so it is essential for the young people

10 - Hmmmm . . . it seems that you are writing to a formula, in which you use the same...

Writing Feedbacklibo_for - Jun 10, 2009EF_Sean - Jun 19, 2009
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