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people set the goals in the life which they think they can achieve

6 - Thanks a billion Kevin, I will surely do these things. No I don't have to write sepecifically about...

UndergraduateIndian - May 19, 2009Indian - May 21, 2009
English Comprehension Clep exam - essay to practice

2 - Maybe the tasks other people give us to do are just as difficult . In the next few paragraphs,...

Writing Feedbackakfir - May 19, 2009EF_Kevin - May 21, 2009
Admission Letter to a master program of Logistics and Supply Chain Management

NEW - This is my admission letter draft to a master program.There is no word limit, and it is 723 words....

Graduatepia - May 20, 2009 -
nothing wrong - Young people are less interested in studying than in earning money

5 - Thanx for the feedback guys!...

Writing Feedbackceberus - May 17, 2009ceberus - May 20, 2009
Memorising beautiful phrases to learn English

7 - I would discourage memorizing certain phrases because using them may sound awkward compared to the rest of your writing....

Grammar, Usagemdnetit - May 1, 2009TheAnswer - May 19, 2009
Paragraph Elements

4 - You might also wish to avoid random capitalization: "Eggs, milk and cheese where just a few of the...

Writing FeedbackPeterV - May 15, 2009EF_Sean - May 19, 2009
Fashion is unique, it's the walking art. Short Essay for Art Institute in Seattle

4 - I am excited about workin g for a company that not only supports their employees ' imagination and creativity,...

UndergraduateMari_Jo - May 17, 2009EF_Kevin - May 18, 2009
"financial industry" - need Help in Polish my SOP

4 - I think you should cut the first sentence and start with the second one. The first sentence is boring,...

Graduaterohit12 - May 17, 2009EF_Kevin - May 18, 2009
Letter to Director of Financial Aid

7 - thank you for your help. I gladly appreciate it. and not to sound obviously, that mistake in the second...

Letterschelisajk - May 11, 2009chelisajk - May 18, 2009
self theme in Night by Elie Wiesel and The Princess Bride by William Goldman

3 - There are so many good quotes about the self in Night. I haven't read The Princess Bride so I...

Book ReportsSn00ty - May 17, 2009Notoman - May 17, 2009
Mercutio's importance to the plot and theme - Romeo and Juliet

5 - Kevin is right, you need to focus a bit more on a single key idea (your thesis). You might...

Writing FeedbackGebraroest - May 16, 2009EF_Sean - May 17, 2009
'manned spaceflight and education' - CLEP TEST ESSAY

3 - Your essay seems to focus more on what happened before your trip into outer space, and on how...

Writing FeedbackPeterV - May 15, 2009EF_Sean - May 17, 2009
The A. & B. of the I. Intoduction in an outline of an Informative Essay

2 - A would be interesting if it was more specific. Can you give a scenario that SHOWS what you mean...

EssaysLondyn64 - May 16, 2009EF_Kevin - May 17, 2009
Need your corrections for agumentative paragraph ("my supervisor")

4 - Thank u -Sean and Kevin. and Kevin, yes it did help me..thank u again.=D...

Writing Feedbackkyleighgrace - May 14, 2009kyleighgrace - May 17, 2009
Will You Buy a House or Start a Business?

9 - I think if you take advantage of most of the suggestions and changes offered, your essay will be just...

Writing Feedbackadalumi - Apr 27, 2009Londyn64 - May 16, 2009
Contributions to the Field of Sonography

10 - Guys, I wanted to thank all of you millions! I have received the scholarship. Could not have done it...

Scholarshipfuzzy - Mar 22, 2009fuzzy - May 16, 2009
Statement Of Purpose for Imperial university U.K.

2 - ...to provide me and my brother with good educations . Well, to improve it you need to give...

Undergraduatearsene_g2000 - May 14, 2009EF_Kevin - May 15, 2009
BA in gaming, how to start a paragraph?

3 - The opening paragraph should be a psychological attack on the senses; it should surprise the reader with something unexpected,...

Undergraduatemudasirmnm - May 13, 2009EF_Kevin - May 15, 2009
CHANGE or AVOID CHANGE? Which is better?

4 - It's interesting that you are honest and not at all ashamed about being mediocre. Since you said something interesting,...

Writing Feedbackkirin - May 10, 2009Mustafa1991 - May 15, 2009
sample size and defining variables

3 - Or is that you have to design an experiment of your own? The last part of the post sort...

Essaysbiggie11 - May 9, 2009EF_Sean - May 14, 2009
"The Heights"; summer school program

3 - Hopefully you'll outgrow this on your own because my telling you it, won't from here on spur you to...

UndergraduateJackSmackle - May 14, 2009Mustafa1991 - May 14, 2009
Hopsital Soap Opera - college classification essay

3 - I really like the gallery of people you introduce. However, if this is meant as a college admissions essay,...

Undergraduatesophiacelise - May 10, 2009EF_Sean - May 14, 2009
Do you support it or not? A mall construction in your neighborhood

6 - I don't think because it is your neighborhood, you necessarily own own your living space. What if you're renting...

Writing Feedbackadalumi - May 12, 2009Mustafa1991 - May 14, 2009
Violence and the youth - two reports

3 - Here are some quick revisions you could make to the essay in your latest post. I'll do 1 line...

Writing Feedbackttc1234 - Apr 28, 2009Mustafa1991 - May 14, 2009
Essay about violence and violent behavior in the Media

3 - I notice you seem to use a lot of paraphrasing in your essay, with few direct quotations. Some direct...

Writing Feedbackttc1234 - May 13, 2009EF_Sean - May 14, 2009
Non-native English speaker: SOP in English

5 - Oh, I see what you mean now. You could try "Though I chose not to complete them, I...

Graduatelea947 - May 12, 2009EF_Sean - May 14, 2009
What are the differences between life in America and life in Third World nations

14 - Great, they'll be lucky to get your feedback. I had a Spanish teacher once who pointed out how much...

Writing FeedbackRhadames - May 12, 2009EF_Kevin - May 14, 2009
Performed art is a mirror for human society and the converse - MFA (Acting) Essay

6 - Thanks for all your feedback. I have made the changes and submitted the final draft. So we will see....

Graduatekarizma15 - May 10, 2009karizma15 - May 14, 2009
Intermediate Level in science stream

4 - "I want to proceed further in my studies in the same stream at a foreign institution." "I have...

Undergraduateharry - May 7, 2009EF_Sean - May 13, 2009
Query Letters to Publishers? Need advice

3 - Some excellent advice from Eric. You might also want to head to your local library and check out some...

Letterswriterchick555 - May 12, 2009EF_Sean - May 13, 2009
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