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"high regards on my education" - Need Imput/Editing on My Statement

4 - Your last paragraph seems a bit desperate. I think you should focus less on the hopelessness of the situation...

UndergraduateWritersBlock - Mar 18, 2009flight23 - Mar 21, 2009
Bachelor's degree in Nursing - my background, attitudes, and interest essay

5 - I agree with Kevin -- the first paragraph should go. Apart from that, the essay looks good....

Undergraduatedenndj1 - Mar 20, 2009EF_Sean - Mar 21, 2009
Term paper based on "Brave New World, Nineteen Eighty-Four, and our World"

3 - You might also want to focus more on the main difference between the two novels, which is that the...

Essayskahadi - Mar 20, 2009EF_Sean - Mar 21, 2009
Motivation to Business Studies; Degree at JKP

4 - essay to demonstrate your interest to study at JKP Prompt:. Motivation to business studies and taking the degree...

Undergraduatetaodo - Mar 19, 2009taodo - Mar 21, 2009
Cause and effect essay: 1 introduction, 2 cause, 2 effect and 1 conclusion

9 - No i believe you better go with cause 1 , effect 1 ..cause 2 , effect 2..so that the...

Essaysalfonzoww - Mar 5, 2009menamilad - Mar 21, 2009
University of Hartford (future businesswoman)

11 - If accepted I will establish what I am capable of, I believe the University of Hartford will help me...

Undergraduateanibete11 - Feb 18, 2009EF_Kevin - Mar 20, 2009
Essay on 'Power of Organizations'.

6 - If you're going to focus on an organization that should really be feared, why not choose AIPAC, the Israeli...

Essaysbungy2000 - Mar 8, 2009Mustafa1991 - Mar 20, 2009
writing about gay couples, need ideas

4 - You might want to decide which aspect of the topic you want to write about. You could argue that...

Essaysvictorialeann - Mar 19, 2009EF_Sean - Mar 20, 2009
Characteristics of a Dramic Script

3 - You could write a story about an experience of comparing a script to a novel... or writing a script...

Essayskimstroug - Mar 19, 2009EF_Kevin - Mar 20, 2009
Viktor Frankl's words; MSc in Human Resource Management

3 - Today, I take pride myself in being an extrovert. ..."helping me secure the 3rd rank in the school...

Graduatesaloni - Mar 19, 2009EF_Kevin - Mar 20, 2009
A short story draft - dirty job, "Dear Diary" comment

7 - tnx sean, but i dont get ur question....

Writing Feedbacknewsha31 - Mar 18, 2009newsha31 - Mar 20, 2009
"three unique factors" - Is my short answer response too weak?

7 - These all seem like strong factors to me. And literature is definitely a good one -- nothing shapes a...

Undergraduateflight23 - Mar 18, 2009EF_Sean - Mar 20, 2009
Summary and Personal Response "Hills Like White Elephants" grammar check

4 - At some point you might want to think about the two main meanings of the phrase "white elephant." It...

Writing Feedbackkinghippo - Mar 18, 2009EF_Sean - Mar 20, 2009
Need some help with research "Comics in Education"

3 - Comics are all about archetypes and invented mythologies, so that gives you a couple of subjects they could be...

Research PapersMurdoc113 - Mar 16, 2009EF_Sean - Mar 20, 2009
Unique Factors That Have Most Shaped Who You Are

6 - Just wondering, since I have to answer the same questions/topic above, but is it okay to use something that...

UndergraduateTabiaa - Mar 8, 2009jihui_go - Mar 19, 2009
Thesis Statement About My Goals (semi-pro football)

6 - I revised it a bit and shorten it some what. Dear Professor, Growing up in Bronx, New York,...

Writing FeedbackGHouse - Feb 17, 2009GHouse - Mar 19, 2009
Admission Form - General Admission Questions

6 - Thanks Essay Forum. Thanks Everybody for sharing the knowledge....

Graduatekasun - Mar 17, 2009kasun - Mar 19, 2009
"What did you want to be when you were a child" - 5 paragraph essay

4 - However, when I got older, I realized that being a dancer was not my top goal anymore, because I...

Writing Feedbackanzgurl - Mar 18, 2009anzgurl - Mar 19, 2009
Writing an essay about anything we feel dear (graphic design)

3 - Great! Can you look at how art associated with Hinduism is being used on the Internet? Look at websites...

EssaysPriya Nayer - Mar 18, 2009EF_Kevin - Mar 19, 2009
"The Right To Have an Abortion" - my argumentative paper

20 - Yes, that's right! Good insight. A good essay is at least a little argumentative, in the sense that it...

Writing Feedbacklatror - Mar 13, 2009EF_Kevin - Mar 19, 2009
"Lithuania Environmental problems" essay - correct my mistakes

3 - Nevertheless, Lithuania has problems involving the quantity of garbage, car ... Yeah... you need to be more specific. What...

Writing Feedbackjurgita - Mar 18, 2009EF_Kevin - Mar 19, 2009
Using personal pronouns and personal examples and opinions in an essay

5 - Thank you soooo much :)...

UndergraduateChidem - Mar 18, 2009Chidem - Mar 19, 2009
Being Me is Special - Essay Help

8 - This should be a lot easier than you thought. Think of things that you feel are special about youeself....

Essaysalwin - Feb 18, 2009plugging_along - Mar 18, 2009
psychological phenomena in shrek 2 - essay question

4 - Oh man! Isn't that the one where he is having to deal with the donkey played by Eddie Murphy?...

Essaysbabsushe - Mar 18, 2009EF_Kevin - Mar 18, 2009
Student Government Speech

4 - In the first two paragraphs, get rid of all those uses of the word "I" because, whenever you are...

Speechescowman809 - Mar 18, 2009EF_Kevin - Mar 18, 2009
Focault Methodology for research on contemporary mobilization of the GLBT

2 - I think it will look more "solid" if you merge these two paragraphs: will be utilized... Michel Focault...

Research Papersreciprocal - Mar 17, 2009EF_Kevin - Mar 18, 2009
SMU Essay; Achievements and Volunteer Work

9 - hahhah, you are the same like me, SMU is also my back-up plan , and I don't prepare to...

Undergraduatekofpower2411 - Mar 14, 2009technogirl - Mar 18, 2009
Essay to Compare your Two Teachers

10 - i agree with snowman...when I make outlines of a subject I'm about to write on, I find that I...

Writing Feedbackchubbybear - Mar 3, 2009sharkbait09 - Mar 17, 2009
Explain why you feel you merit consideration as an applicant for an award or scholarship

11 - hey molly! Not once, in my whole high school career, have I said to myself, "Self, what you...

Scholarshipmolzeeee - Mar 1, 2009sharkbait09 - Mar 17, 2009
need help in psychology essay on attribution

5 - hi has anyone found anything?...

Essaysmizza12 - Feb 24, 2009naz_sayed - Mar 17, 2009
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