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Billy Budd Essay Final (AP English)

2 - Greetings! I think you've done a marvelous job with the essay, and have followed the prompt very well!...

Writing Feedbackbizkitgirlzc - Oct 8, 2007EF_Team2 - Oct 9, 2007
How to use QTFairUse - process essay

2 - Greetings! I think your essay is easy to read and the directions sound simple to follow. I'd have...

Writing Feedbacksamuraitom - Oct 8, 2007EF_Team2 - Oct 9, 2007
'Clubs and school activities' - Why did you choose to apply to UCF?

2 - Greetings! I'd be happy to help with some editing advice! The main problem I see with it is...

Undergraduateucf4me - Oct 8, 2007EF_Team2 - Oct 9, 2007
"Children of the trash" - Concise narrative - UF campus community

3 - Thanks again!...

Undergraduatenicamsgb - Oct 6, 2007nicamsgb - Oct 8, 2007
New freedom and Nationalism - expositive essay

NEW - Prompt was to explain New Freedom and Nationalism, explain the differences between them, and how these two movements were...

Writing Feedbacksamuraitom - Oct 7, 2007 -
use of Extrensic rewards for classroom management

3 - thanks sarah for your comments. Anyone else who could add their opinions/thoughts. Your help will be greatly appriciated....

Essaysputrey - Oct 2, 2007putrey - Oct 6, 2007
BEAUTIFUL MIND schizophrenia - essay!

2 - Greetings! While you have some good information about schizophrenia in your outline, it reads like you are writing...

Essaysdido - Oct 4, 2007EF_Team2 - Oct 5, 2007
Eng101 essay (personal essay); natural disater?

11 - Greetings! I've done some more editing for you: After seeing the baby, we were very excited. But...

Essaysnewworld - Sep 13, 2007EF_Team2 - Oct 5, 2007
Tokugawa & sakoku - essay

2 - Greetings! A well-written and interesting essay! I have just a few editing tips: The raison d'ętre of...

Writing FeedbackFredParisFrance - Oct 4, 2007EF_Team2 - Oct 5, 2007
Oral Report Based on Wilco Book Review

2 - Greetings! I think that's a very creative way to lead into the presentation of your book review! By...

Book Reportssilverystars - Oct 3, 2007EF_Team2 - Oct 4, 2007
Speech-language pathology - essay opinion needed

5 - i love it! thanks so much :)...

Graduateamandahp - Sep 30, 2007amandahp - Oct 2, 2007
Book Review Project: "Wilco: Learning How To Die"

4 - Greetings! I think you have done a splendid job! I understand what you mean about writing about the...

Book Reportssilverystars - Sep 28, 2007EF_Team2 - Oct 1, 2007
The Otaku - Explaining with examples essay

5 - Greetings! I would guess that "cosplay" is short for "costume play"? If so, you could say: He regularly...

Writing Feedbacksamuraitom - Sep 30, 2007EF_Team2 - Oct 1, 2007
COMPUTERS, the most intriguing and complicated things in the world

2 - Greetings! I think you've done a great job with your essay! I have just a few editing suggestions:...

Undergraduatehabtdemis - Oct 1, 2007EF_Team2 - Oct 1, 2007
I NEED AN OPENING STATEMENT on essay: challenging fate

3 - Thank you Sarah. The idea that "our fate cannot be changed and what happens when we try to change...

EssaysSMontes10 - Sep 28, 2007SMontes10 - Oct 1, 2007
Impact Essay (significant experience, achievement, risk)

2 - Greetings! Annoying? No way! That's why we're here! Your excellent essay needs very little work; just a few...

Scholarshipbizkitgirlzc - Sep 30, 2007EF_Team2 - Oct 1, 2007
Sports Memorabilia: Ebay VS. Field Of Dreams

NEW - Sports Memorabilia: Ebay VS. Field Of Dreams Sports: Fun to watch, exciting, and most of all competitive. These...

Writing FeedbackCNKPRODUCTIONS - Sep 30, 2007 -
I like to see super heroes as a mock to society; Superhero Essay

2 - Greetings! You've given your response to the question an interesting twist--very good! There is little I would...

Writing Feedbackbizkitgirlzc - Sep 30, 2007EF_Team2 - Sep 30, 2007
Chilean /Steady Grades; Personal life&Aspirations - Biography(SCHOLARSHIP)

2 - Greetings! You've written an excellent essay! I have just a few editing suggestions: "Study my girl, or...

Scholarshipbizkitgirlzc - Sep 29, 2007EF_Team2 - Sep 30, 2007
FSU App. essay: the best advice given; 'be the head and not the tail'

NEW - The topic is to basically explain the best advice given and why? Please read this and give me any...

UndergraduateJessicaTiffany - Sep 29, 2007 -
EMMA & HARRIET SMITH; AP LITERATURE- Essay on characterization

2 - Greetings! You've written a very good essay! The only thing I might suggest is adding to your quotes...

Book ReportsWonderfulloser - Sep 27, 2007EF_Team2 - Sep 28, 2007
Defining Classic (Extended Definition Essay)

4 - Greetings! I think you've done a masterful job of fine-tuning your essay! And you're quite right about "it's"...

Writing Feedbacksilverystars - Sep 19, 2007EF_Team2 - Sep 28, 2007
How to write a good advertising article?

2 - Greetings! With any website it's important to remember that people can't visit it if they can't find it!...

Grammar, UsageSuperplayer - Sep 26, 2007EF_Team2 - Sep 27, 2007
help with graduate admission into Masters of Science and the Public

8 - Greetings! When you are working on making the sentences a little more manageable, keep in mind that it...

Graduateeplaya - Sep 18, 2007EF_Team2 - Sep 26, 2007
Political value of surface and identity in a repressive society

2 - Greetings! My interpretation would be that "politics" or "political value" would mean, in this instance, the furtherance of...

Essaystntmayhem - Sep 26, 2007EF_Team2 - Sep 26, 2007
Reed Essay (interest in a liberal arts and science education)

3 - Greetings! I like what you've done with the ending! Very nice! If the word limit is 500,...

Writing Feedbackbizkitgirlzc - Sep 24, 2007EF_Team2 - Sep 25, 2007
FSU ESSAY - "Pick your favourite and meaningful quote"

2 - Greetings! Your essay is excellent, and nearly perfect. I have only a couple of small suggestions: I...

Undergraduatecarsons2k - Sep 24, 2007EF_Team2 - Sep 24, 2007
Have you ever done something to make others happy? Peer Pressure Paper

5 - Hmmm. I due until Thursday, so tomorrow I'm gonna take some time before class and ask one of the...

Writing Feedbackusanchezfe - Sep 21, 2007usanchezfe - Sep 24, 2007
Thesis on How do love and forgiveness work together as a theme?

8 - OH MY GOSH!! I can't believe I didn't think of the word redemption!! THANK YOU SO MUCH!!! You really...

Essaystirano93 - Sep 18, 2007tirano93 - Sep 23, 2007
Consumer prices drop - Economy revisited ; expositive essay

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Essayssamuraitom - Sep 20, 2007samuraitom - Sep 23, 2007
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