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Tongan Immigration(2nd draft)

2 - Greetings! This is an interesting essay about a people that most of us know little about! I have...

Writing Feedbackjone1113 - Mar 6, 2007EF_Team2 - Mar 7, 2007
Education-sat practice essay; other than school influences on education?

4 - Greetings! I'm afraid I'm not that familiar with the SAT essay requirements. If there is a word limit,...

Writing Feedbackkendra - Mar 5, 2007EF_Team2 - Mar 6, 2007
cause and effect essay on the new "Polytrack" or artificial cushon

5 - Sarah, Thank you for the reply. I did a quick outline and my Professor liked the subject, so I...

Essaysnellegirl - Feb 26, 2007Greyflannel - Mar 5, 2007
The Courtroom - Essay

NEW - I just wrote this essay for my english class. I can't quite grasp what is wrong with it. Most...

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"Reasons to smoke" I wrote this essay for tommorow's class

2 - Greetings! It can be a real challenge to write essays in a foreign language. You make some good...

Writing FeedbackBBgirl - Mar 4, 2007EF_Team2 - Mar 5, 2007
example essay about and amazing artists

4 - I'm not sure I understand your question. Can it be an example essay for what? Sarah...

Writing Feedbackokuna - Mar 1, 2007EF_Team2 - Mar 3, 2007
Differences between Mongolian and American Foods

NEW - hi all!! first of all i wan to thank you all EF team workers for helping us and encouraging...

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The moral education aim in the Alive 0-8 and Alive 0-4

8 - Thanks for your help...handed in essay today!!!!One job out of the way...lol Thanks again!...

Writing Feedbacksuperkaytee - Feb 28, 2007superkaytee - Mar 1, 2007
graded research paper not so hot

4 - Greetings! You're welcome! You have the right idea. Fortunately, though, it is not necessary to cite after...

Research Papersrkslperez - Feb 28, 2007EF_Team2 - Mar 1, 2007
'incredibly rewarding career' sociology journal response

6 - Greetings! You've been working hard! To my previous editiorial comments, I will add: "I believe that the...

Essayssuperkaytee - Feb 26, 2007EF_Team2 - Feb 28, 2007
paper review in economic

4 - Greetings! Overall, the essay makes perfect sense to me. You provide a lot of good information on the...

Research Papersokuna - Feb 27, 2007EF_Team2 - Feb 28, 2007
Is the deterministic universe described by physics incompatible with free will or god existance?

5 - You're welcome! Sorry I couldn't get to you sooner; we try to respond within 24 hours. I'd be happy...

Essaysmanogamez - Feb 27, 2007EF_Team2 - Feb 28, 2007
CATS; Indoor/ Outdoor / Indoor-Outdoor

7 - Rest is not possible for a mother with a son turning 3 on Friday. :) It is also not...

Writing Feedbackamosborne13 - Feb 25, 2007amosborne13 - Feb 28, 2007
Combi boilers/ Direct Vs Indirect methods of cold water supply

5 - Greetings! I thought we might be in luck, because I have a union boilermaker visiting me this evening...

EssaysBollox85 - Feb 27, 2007EF_Team2 - Feb 28, 2007
"Living at the time of Copernicus" - Proper Thesis For a 4-page Paper

5 - It's a rewarding job, but knowing that makes it even more worthwhile! You made my week! (And I hope...

Writing Feedbackmanogamez - Feb 24, 2007EF_Team2 - Feb 27, 2007
'The riddles in A Feast of Creatures' - Comment and critique on intro and conclusion

2 - Greetings! It appears your Intro and Conclusion are exactly the same, word for word. I'm thinking that you...

Book Reportsmeesh - Feb 27, 2007EF_Team2 - Feb 27, 2007
All Quiet On the Western Front - academic essay on Betrayal

2 - Greetings! What an excellent essay! I enjoyed reading it very much! I have only a few editing suggestions:...

Writing Feedbackbizkitgirlzc - Feb 25, 2007EF_Team2 - Feb 26, 2007
Behavioral Support, Social relationships & Peer support.

2 - Greetings! I think you've written a great essay! Most of my observations have to do with punctuation. ...

Writing FeedbackCeressie - Feb 25, 2007EF_Team2 - Feb 25, 2007
Memories are something everyone has! - SAT

2 - Greetings! It's good to get input from someone who has just been through it, so thanks, aznpoo! I...

Writing Feedbackkendra - Feb 24, 2007EF_Team2 - Feb 24, 2007
How to write a research paper on a novel?

5 - Thank you very much for the help. I was a little worried at first that I may not find...

Research PapersAlex0713 - Feb 22, 2007Alex0713 - Feb 24, 2007
Short Essay on The Crucible

4 - And I appreciate your letting me know! Thank you! Sarah...

Writing Feedbackrollagasper - Feb 22, 2007EF_Team2 - Feb 23, 2007
"1990's and what happened" - intro and conclusion help

2 - Greetings! I think the conclusion is pretty good now, although the last sentence could be a bit stronger....

Essaysher_heart - Feb 23, 2007EF_Team2 - Feb 23, 2007
Personal information, interests, etc. - Resume and cover letter

6 - Thank you a lot, Ms Sarah Best regards for you Ha...

Letterslth_econ - Feb 21, 2007lth_econ - Feb 23, 2007
'Do not stop questioning' - essay regarding my 3 core traits

3 - Wow! I am surprised that I only made a few mistakes. I agree that my conclusion needs work. I...

Writing FeedbackTimcago - Feb 21, 2007Timcago - Feb 23, 2007
Money is one of the greatest tools in life

5 - Yes I do, but I coudn't think I'm not good at writing essay I've been here for 1 year...

Writing Feedbackaljur - Feb 22, 2007aljur - Feb 22, 2007
American events in a specific year -introduction, thesis & conclusion

3 - i dont think my introduction makes sense or has anything to do w/ my topic or my cobclusion.. i...

Research Papersher_heart - Feb 21, 2007her_heart - Feb 22, 2007
My motivation to do graduate work

2 - Greetings! I'm sorry, it is not possible to answer posts privately. I'd be happy to give you my...

Graduatempur - Feb 21, 2007EF_Team2 - Feb 22, 2007
Your career must compliment yourself; Career Choice

3 - Greetings! I'd be happy to help! "In this decision many factor weigh" is not proper grammatical construction....

Writing Feedbackkendra - Feb 21, 2007EF_Team2 - Feb 22, 2007
My "suicide note"! (suicide poetry)

2 - Greetings! Yes, definitely, I could tell it was suicide poetry (I hope for an assignment! :-)). Probably the...

Poetryaznpoo - Feb 21, 2007EF_Team2 - Feb 22, 2007
Spending a million dollar - an introduction for my essay?

7 - Greetings! Here is the edit: Most of us want to be wise when it comes to money, while...

Essaysaljur - Feb 20, 2007EF_Team2 - Feb 21, 2007
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