dumi
Jan 16, 2013
Writing Feedback / Eating is a very important part of people's lifestyles [2]
You already said this in the opening sentence.
Time is a significant component that promotes this trend.
.... Have corresponding subjects. In this case, Some people - they;
People like to eat home cooked meals mainly because they contain all nutrients that are required for a healthy body.
You display excellent writing skills. Overall, this is a very good essay.
Another significant point is the time matter.
You already said this in the opening sentence.
Time is a significant component that promotes this trend.
To have a quick snack at a local shawerma stand might be a great option for them though .
Some people like to eat at home because basically we need various nutritionnutrients to keep our bodies fit.
.... Have corresponding subjects. In this case, Some people - they;
People like to eat home cooked meals mainly because they contain all nutrients that are required for a healthy body.
You display excellent writing skills. Overall, this is a very good essay.