justivy03
Nov 12, 2015
Undergraduate / 'I am a meat-lover, one of those people who prefers non-vegetarian diet' - different beliefs essay [3]
Hardik, I'd like to help out on the 2nd and final paragraph of your essay.
2nd paragraph
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- mentioned again that humans are not
Final paragraph
- Ultimately, it was a family and it was evident that thepointsviews and explanations
- I conveyedby me could not affect
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- different beliefs than mine.
Hardik, your essay draw a very informative and somehow argumentative essay, at least for your family I suppose.
Overall, it's a well written essay and I hope my remarks helped.
Hardik, I'd like to help out on the 2nd and final paragraph of your essay.
2nd paragraph
- They told me the same
- They were somehow convinced by my points but my aunt
- mentioned again that humans are not
Final paragraph
- Ultimately, it was a family and it was evident that the
- I conveyed
- However, it was
- different beliefs than mine.
Hardik, your essay draw a very informative and somehow argumentative essay, at least for your family I suppose.
Overall, it's a well written essay and I hope my remarks helped.