justivy03
Oct 9, 2015
Undergraduate / Why GIT short response max 150 words - Georgia Tech is the perfect school for me. [4]
- subjects thathave interestedhas intrigued ( I guess this words are better fit )
- Therefore, I would like to take advantage
-putdedicate all my efforts into these clubs,
- while infusing my own. Thereforethus ( you used the word "therefore" already so it's good to play a different word into the sentence ) , Georgia Tech is the perfect school for me.
I believe 150 words is quiet short to express your reason in choosing such prestigious university, however, we have to work with the instructions and I must say, you have well constructed essay and very well done.
I only have a few remarks, most of them is just for you to play with words and not to use the same words all the time. I suggest that you read more to enhance your vocabulary and practice writing whenever you can.
- subjects that
- Therefore, I would like to take advantage
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- while infusing my own
I believe 150 words is quiet short to express your reason in choosing such prestigious university, however, we have to work with the instructions and I must say, you have well constructed essay and very well done.
I only have a few remarks, most of them is just for you to play with words and not to use the same words all the time. I suggest that you read more to enhance your vocabulary and practice writing whenever you can.