Writing Feedback / (IELTS TASK 2) closing offices to save energy [7]

Some companies are closing their offices one day per week to save energy (gas, electricity). What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

These days, energy resources such as gas and electricity are the most useful power for most of parts in our life, especially industries. Here in Indonesia, governments suggest to some big companies who have many factories that need much energy for their producing activities to reduce the level of using electric and gas energy. What are the positive and negative effects of this?

To begin with, several companies' owners have many opinions with the suggestion from the governments. One of the owners said that the reducing of electricity using in their company will affect the number of their products. This will fall their production in a high level, even only one day they stop the using of energy. They cannot continue their industrial activities without electric and gas. As a result, this will affects to the employers as well. There will be more unemployment because some employers only work for several special days. In another cases, the employers' children are felt the impact also. They will be more difficult to get some necessaries such as book, pencil, and the other education tools. Could you think of any other effects?

The answer is absolutely 'yes'. The reducing of energy using by several big firms will give more power to the houses and some small industries to feel the using of energy as same as factories. When they get the same amount of energy as factories, they could improve their production. This will help the government to develop small industrial houses. As a result, the income of all class industries will increase significantly. Also, this will decrease the responsibility of government to develop small businesses.

In my view, those actions have many effects whether good or bad for all sides. For governments, it helps them a lot for balancing the using of power resources between small and big industries. However, for societies, it gives them more benefits, especially for people who have small business that need energies such as electricity and gas.

To put them in a nutshell, all sides of country will be affected by the reducing of electricity using. As a good society, we should use the energy power for essential necessary only. As a result, the using of electricity will be more maximal and will give many benefits for everything around us.

Writing Feedback / IELTS Task 2 travel alone or with friends? [10]

Some people like to travel with a companion. Other people prefer to travel alone. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.

Nowadays, tourism places are more than in the past. It affects the tourists' expectation as well. Different person has different aims, so most of them have various ways to visit tourism destinations. Here in Indonesia, most of the inhabitants prefer to go on vacation by visiting some beautiful places with their friends and family. Does it happen to all societies here? The answer is totally 'no'. While the large numbers of Indonesian people prefer to visit tourism area together, others choose to refresh their mind by going alone to see several beautiful destinations.

To begin with, the majority of holidaymakers prefer to travel with their groups instead of travel alone. It is because they could find more interesting moments with their friends. For example, when they visit a beautiful place that they had never visited before, they will find many problems. If one of their friends get problem, they can ask help each other and even find interesting activities. They will feel more enjoyable when they go with their colleagues. It is because if one of their friends could not see something different, it does not close the possibility that the other friends could see it.

This will be extremely different than we go on vacation without friends. Others prefer to see some tourist destination alone because they have private aims. They have distinctive way to refresh their brain by going on holiday alone. When they go to tourism places alone, they could select their destination by themselves without other opinions that could disturb their mood. As a result, they could maximize their satisfaction when they go on vacation and get what they want. Also, this will bring many good effects in their life after the holiday.

In a nutshell, travelling alone or with friends has different sensations. If we go with friends, we should be more patient because we go with different people who have different personality. However, when we go travelling alone, we should be more carefully because we could find many problems that we could not solve them alone.

Writing Feedback / Why people work? Money or Pleasure [4]

People work because they need money to live. What are some other reasons that people work? Discuss one or more of these reasons. Use specific examples and details to support your answer.

Nowadays, the workers' expectations have changed. People go to their job for more than one reason. Of course, they work to earn money for their family members. However, some workers go to work for other reasons.

This era, there are groups of people who work just for their hobby. It happens to some professional football players, musicians, racers, and so on. Valentine Rossi, for example, he works with several different brands of motorcycle because he wants to try the sensation in different types of motorcycle. As a result, this could improve his skills in riding motorcycle. What is more, he helps more than one team as well to develop the technologies that they are developing in the motorcycle which is used by Valentino Rossi.

Also, the other rich people work for different reason. They work for their happiness. They could feel happy when they work even though they do not need more money that they got from their job. Fico Kaiser, for example, he builds his company to help other people who do not have enough money to solve their health problems. Fico's company produces natural medicine which made by some health resources that he found from his country, Indonesia. He feels satisfied when he successfully helps Indonesian societies who have dangerous disease. He has an amazing juice which called 'Xamthone' which has many functions to kill many strong diseases.

In my opinion, both of them have different expectation for working because they have already passed long process of life which set their mind uniquely. They have passed different experiences than other people in public, so that they have unique mind set.

In conclusion, working or job is a place where the workers could get many things. They not only could get money, but also they could get happiness, friends, and also satisfying. As a society, we should love everything that we do. As a consequence, we will get more than money from our job that will bring us to a better life.

Writing Feedback / IELTS; what people say about advertisement? [7]

Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

In several parts of this country, advertising is one of the valuable things that help the companies to improve their income by encouraging societies to buy their products even the products are unnecessary. While some people support this opinion, others dispute because they have opinion that advertisements explain them more about latest products which may develop their lives. I support the first statement because of some strong relevant reasons.

Firstly, inhabitants are easy to be encouraged by some interesting advertisements to buy something avoidable. When they watch television, they will see many promotions from some big companies that offer their new products by several interesting advertisements. The target is not only adult people, but also children who have big feeling to have something new. As a result, if the parents could not control their children to watch television, their younger generation will be influenced to ask them to buy those products. This is the main thing that parents do not like from advertisements on television.

In addition, the advertisements cannot manage their time well when they should inform adult products and when they should present children's goods only. In the night, this is the right time they could present adults' things. However, in fact, they inform adults' commodities in all time when children should not watch them. It could bring some danger impacts for young people. They are as teenagers could not understand yet how to control their sexuality in the right place. As a result, they may do some adults activities that could bring them to the criminal activities. Also, this will broke their future.

In conclusion, advertising activities bring many negative effects for society lives. This is because they only pay more attention with how much they could get customers as many as possible. So, they never pay attention with the societies who watch their advertising on TV. As a society, we should control our children well and watch them when they are watching television to block them watching adults' products which may endanger them. Also, we should give them many advices that could influence them not to buy something unnecessary.

Writing Feedback / Where do you want to live? traditional vs modern - 'health environment choice' [21]

Would you prefer to live in a traditional house or in a modern apartment building? Use specific reasons and details to support your choice.

Nowadays, most of inhabitants prefer to live in a new flat building. However, because of some reasons, others prefer to stay in classic houses which have more healthily environment during their lives. Personally, I prefer to live in a place which has good weather and could make me feel comfort when I live there.

In this globalization era, modern building such as apartments and hotels are built in the city center which has bad environment. This location was influenced by pollution from many vehicles and factories surround it. As a result, societies who live there are difficult to find green areas that could help them to get fresh air. Their lives are depended on modern equipment only such as air-conditioning, refrigerator, washing machine, and the other electronic tools. This situation brings them to a bad lifestyle because they never feel the fresh and healthy environment. Also, this could bring some danger diseases for them.

However, good comfort weather only could be found in a place which has fresh air and there are many plants that support the fresh environment there. This usually happens in some mountainous areas which has a lot of trees and flowers. So, citizens who live there would get healthier condition and of course better health quality. Every day, they can consume fresh vegetable and fruit from the garden around their house with no doubt that the plans there are influenced by dangers fertilizers.

In a nutshell, people are free to choose where they want to stay during their lives. But, they should pay more attention with the quality of places where they will life. They should consider for living in a place which has health environment. As a result, they could stay happily with their relatives for a long period. Also, they will stay healthily longer than people who stay in a bad environment place.