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Jul 19, 2014
Writing Feedback / TOEFL: An effective leader tries to make others feel they are part of the decision-making process. [4]
Great sentences!
What do you mean by the bold part. It seems that the idea is inappropriate in the context.
However, if employees think the task is none of their businesses, or even against their will basically, their efforts willdeceasebe wasted undoubtedly.
Those decisions are difficult for a single person to deal with due to the limitation of personal experience and ability. However, a group of people can provide various suggestions from different angle based on their information and resources.
Great sentences!
On the contrary, an unrealistic choice made by a single person without consideration is definitely ineffective, only a waste of time.
What do you mean by the bold part. It seems that the idea is inappropriate in the context.
However, if employees think the task is none of their businesses, or even against their will basically, their efforts will