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Jul 22, 2014
Writing Feedback / I believe that society has been helped by the invention of the Internet [6]
People have always been worried about the impact whenever any new technology is introduced.
I guess you are preparing for TOEFL or IELTS according to how your topic sounds :) If so, you need to improve the structure of your introduction. In the intro, first introduce the background of the issue. You can do this by simply paraphrasing your prompt. Then state your own opinion directly.
People have always been worried about the impact whenever any new technology is introduced.
I guess you are preparing for TOEFL or IELTS according to how your topic sounds :) If so, you need to improve the structure of your introduction. In the intro, first introduce the background of the issue. You can do this by simply paraphrasing your prompt. Then state your own opinion directly.