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May 7, 2015

Writing Feedback / The amount of world's energy use in 2010 by type of its sources [3]

The chart below shows the world's energy use in 2010.

The chart gives information regarding the energy use and parts of renewable energy in 2010 and is measured in percentage. In general, it can be seen from the chart that petroleum was the most energy that people used and there were various energy sources within renewable energy.

In detail, the petroleum energy was the primary source of power in the world. About 39% of this energy had been used by people. Then, people consumed 23 percent of natural gas and 22 percent of coal power. It means that in 2010 these three main energy became world's energy supplies.

Following this trend, the percentage of nuclear and renewable power use had more or less the same level. Eight-percent of the world's energy comes from nuclear source, it was 1% higher than the proportion of renewable energy. Within the renewable sector, there are different sources of energy. Biomass and hydroelectric were dominant in this sector at 53 percent and 36 percent respectively, whereas the percentage of wind energy use was the smallest figure at 1 %. In addition, both solar and geothermal had been used at 5 percent by people in 2010.

intiaiqbal92

May 7, 2015

Writing Feedback / The world's energy consumption in 2010 [3]

Hai Cute, your writing is really nice, however I have some suggestions for you :)

Let's try this one,

The chart gives information regarding the energy use and parts of renewable energy in 2010 and is measured in percentage. In general, it can be seen from the chart that petroleum was the most energy that people used and there were various energy sources within renewable energy.

intiaiqbal92

May 7, 2015

Writing Feedback / IELTS TASK 1 : The design for a wind turbine and its location [3]

The diagrams below show the design for a wind turbine and its location.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons were relevant.

The diagram illustrates regarding the place and how looks like of wind turbine. In general, according to the picture all of the wind turbines need wind to produce power in order to make electricity. Then, the largest wind turbine needs computer to adjust direction and angle of turbine.

To begin with, there are three different locations of the turbines. First, the turbin is built in hillside so as to get more wind energy, and this turbine is able to produce power to 1.5 megawatts. Next, the smaller wind turbine is established in rooftop which can be output 100 kilowatts of energy. In addition, the wind turbine can be found in the see.

Following this, various shape of turbines can be seen from the pictures. The blades of tall tower made from fibreglass or wood, and it has wind sensor in order to change speed and direction which controlled by computer. Additionally, the turbine for domestic use is the smallest size than other turbines.

intiaiqbal92

May 7, 2015

Writing Feedback / Universities concept about gender equality among their students. [4]

Hi hsustudent89,

I have some suggestions for you :
1. You need to divide your essay to be 2 body or more with introduction and conclusion.
2. In introduction, you may use general opinion or fact, so do not give an example in the first sentence.
3. In addition, if this is an IELTS essay, it needs more words (minimum 250 words)

In the ancient time, there was a big gap between men and woman with concerns to receiving education. As a consequence, young girls did not get permission to go to school, while boys could get the most prominent academy at those times. On the other hand, in recent days, universities have to admit an equal amount of men and women in every discipline. Therefore, I do strongly believe that this trend would be benefits for females and university.

intiaiqbal92

May 7, 2015

Writing Feedback / The information on post-graduate qualifications in Australia by different gender in 1999 [4]

Hi, Miyako, Overall, your writing in your essay is good. However, I have a few suggestions for your writing.

I think your conclusion needs to rework.

All in all, it is clear that males tend to continue their education in vocational diploma, whilst the average of females in Australia has background education in undergraduate and postgraduate degree.

intiaiqbal92

Apr 30, 2015

Writing Feedback / Young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year. Agree or Disagree? [3]

In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting universities studies.
Discuss the advantages and the disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.

In many part of countries, many young people have a break after graduating from high school. For this reason, some people think that it is good for pupils to work and to travel before entering university since this trend can help young people to obtain life and work experince. On the other hand, for some others, they argue a gap year is a waste of time and money. Therefore, I personally believe this approach would give a significant impacts for students.

Most people think that a gap year would help teenagers to gain some work and life experiences prior to starting university. For teenagers, traveling offers an opportunity broaden their horizons and recognize about different countries and also cultures. Therefore, spending time in a new place while working makes for a less superficial meeting than only being there as a holidaymakers. Also, traveling provides work experience and improve their foreign language skills. Additionally, a gap year could assist students are becoming independent as it would need some organization skill to manage their finances by themselves. In other words, working and traveling experiences would develop some skills to young people.

However, there are some negative effects for this approach. Firstly, the most serious problem about a gap year would give negative impact on teenagers' future academics peformance as they may lose their motivation to continue their formal education at the university. Thus, traveling and working in young age would definitely waste their time since the work experience gained may not be very relevant to a person's career in the future.

To summarize, although some people think that a gap year only wastes young people's time, I firmly believe this trend would be useful for them in the next years ahead. It is imperative that young people should decide how they want to spend a gap year prior to studying at the University.

intiaiqbal92

Apr 23, 2015

Writing Feedback / The table reveals information regarding the underground railways system in six big cities [2]

The take below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table reveals information regarding the data of underground railways system in six big cities across the world. In general, as can be seen from the table that there are six big cities : London, Paris, Tokyo, Washington DC, Kyoto, and Los Angeles which have used underground railways system. Then, it can be seen that the three oldest underground system are larger and serve significantly more passengers than the newer system.

To begin with, London has the oldest underground railways system among the six major cities. It was opened in the year 1863 . Paris was the second oldest which it was opened in 1900. Then, this is followed by the opening of the railway systems in Tokyo, Washington DC and Kyoto. Los Angeles has the newest underground railway system, and it was opened in 2001. In terms of the size of the railway systems, London has the largest underground railway systems. It had 394 kilometres of route which is nearly twice as large as the system in Paris. Kyoto, in contrast, has the smallest system, it only has 11 kilometres of route.

Surpraisingly, Tokyo, which only has 155 kilometres of route, it also has the greatest number of passengers per year, at 1927 millions passengers. Thus, Paris has the second greatest number of passengers, at 1191 millions passengers per year. The smallest underground railway system, Kyoto, has the smallest number of passengers per year.

intiaiqbal92

Apr 20, 2015

Writing Feedback / The plastic from bottles is used for further manufacture of carpets and clothing [2]

The picture shows information regarding to the process of recycling plastic bottles.In general, recycling the plastic bottles needs 2 steps that it begins at the recycling center and continues at the reclaimer.

To begin with, bottle plastic must be collected to recycle centre in order to be separated from other types of containers like glass and metal. Afterwards, the plastic bottles should be sorted by their color to exemplify the plastic bottles which have red color must be separated with other colors. For the last step in recycling process is a pressing step, those bottles have to be pressed into bales, it is approximately 7,000 bottles per bale.

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intiaiqbal92

Apr 18, 2015

Writing Feedback / All children should a foreign language in school, starting in the earliest grades. [2]

Write about the following topic :

All children should a foreign language in school, starting in the earliest grades.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Learning a foreign language is better to do in the early age. Some people believe that young people have to learn a different language began at the earliest grades. However, for others think that children should study a foreign language when they are in the junior high school. Therefore, I strongly agree that all young people have to study a foreign language in school, starting from their first day of school since they are very enlightened in a new language and they would automatically have critical thinking skill.

There are some positive affect of this approach. First, it is much better to start learning foreign language at primary school because primary pupils are very receptive to learn a new language. They enjoy playing with new language and pick it up very quickly. They have ability to immitate tricky sounds from their teacher. Also, learning different langauge would enrich and enchances children's mental development. Interantional studies have found that learning foreign language increases critical thinking skills, creativity, and flexibility of mind in young people. Then, children who learn a foreign language do better on both verbal and maths examinations than those that do not.

In spite of posstive there are some negative affect of this trend as well. The first one the young people may get confused to understand many grammatical rules. So,they do not want to learn foreign language. Thus, many teachers in primary school assert that school children need to master other subjects such as math or science which means that children will merely not have enough time to learn a different language.

Despite of the weakness of learning foreign languages at primary school, I personally believe the advantages outweigh than disadvantages in many aspects. However, it is a crucial task for experts in education to find out the best mehod to balance the general learning and foreign language learning.

intiaiqbal92

Apr 18, 2015

Writing Feedback / The proportion of courses granted at the National University in three decades [3]

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write at least 150 words.
The charts below show degrees granted in different fields at the National University in the years 1990, 2000, and 2010.

The pie chart compares regarding the percentage of degree granted in different sectors at the national University between 1990 and 2010.
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intiaiqbal92

Apr 17, 2015

Writing Feedback / The child labour ielts essay - working at a young age should never be encouraged [3]

Haibg, I have some suggestions for you..

There are some mistakes that have you made like grammatical errors and misspelling.
Also, you have to separate between your introduction and your body paragraph.
Then, for the conclusion, better if you put personal thought.

In many countries, children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong while others consider it a valuable work experience, which is important for learning and taking responsibility. What is your opinion?

Essay:
Child labour has been a public concern that requently generates a great deal of heated debate. While some supporters maintain that the most effective way to educate children is on the job, I strongly believe that child labour is an act of cruelty which should never be justified under any circumstances.

Undoubtedly, the practice of child labour havehas distinctly negative impacts on the development of childen , physically and socially. Firstly, the majority of working children were forced to do repetive jobs for very low pay in the sweatshop. The poor working conditions without safety equipment, ventillation systems...can cause serious health problems in children. Secondly, working at such an early age could also impair the development of social ability of children. When they don'tdo not spend enough time with others ~~of their own age or with family members~~ , childern are at high risk to develop the problematic social behaviours like drug abuse and aggression.

Another problematic aspect of child labour would be the deprivation of education. The children working full-time have no opportunity to get access to education, which would prevent them from developing neccessay cognitive skills. Even if they work part -time and attend the school, their academic performance are often poorer than others who're fully devoted to study. Moreover, the lack of education means that another generation of illiterate children comes into vicious circle of poverty without a real tool to fight against . They will have to work for the rest of their lifes without any opportunities opportunity to find a better paid job due to lack of neccessay skills.

In conclusion, it can notcannot be denied that paid work must be a part and parcel of human life, however, working at a such young age should never be encouraged because of its physical and social harms.

intiaiqbal92

Apr 16, 2015

Scholarship / Study objective, become a chemical engineer in one of the biggest oil producers in the world [3]

Hello cute_poison,

It would be nice for you to use appropriate words, and do not try to use direct sentence in your essay. Therefore, I suggest you to put connector or linking phrase in order to make your essay more coherence.

thanks and good luck!

They said an engineer is a professional practitioner of engineering, concerned with applying scientific knowledge, mathematics, and ingenuity to develop solutions for technical, societal and commercial problems. This is what I do at work everyday. Yes, I'm an engineer. I'm currently working in an oil and gas engineering company as a Jr. QA/QC Engineer, for 2 years now.

I didn't have an engineering background at college actually. I got my B.Sc in Chemistry, 2 years ago. Since the first month I got into the company (I was a fresh graduate that time), I've been working on site, they sent me there . We were doing some oil & gas projects there. That was the huge experience for me. I'm really glad that I can be a part of team, because I can learn faster at the field work, that makes me more familiar with those engineering stuff.

I would like to tell a little about our projects there. I did 2 projects. Project one, I did the Process Engineering work, I helped the Sr. Process Engineer. Project two, I did the Piping/Mechanical Quality Engineering work, I helped the Sr. Piping/Mechanical QC Engineer. So I'm usually familiar with those engineering stuff especially in Process and Piping/Mechanical Engineering. And I love it!I keep learning and learning. And here, I can ask anything with the seniors, supervisors, maybe this is what they called "learning by doing". And I really enjoy it! Especially in Process Engineering. That's why I plan to get a master degree in Chemical Engineering.

I realize that I love to learn and I love my job in Engineering. Why not taking a real class in Engineering? I haven't got one.. since my undergraduate study was in Chemistry. And I would really really love to get a master degree someday! So I decided to get a master degree in Chemical Engineering. It fits my professional background, obviously. It also fits my educational background, well, more applied actually, Chemistry is a theoretical science, Chemical Engineering on the other hand is an applied science. About my future objective, I want to be a Process Engineer. Right now I'm still a Jr. QA/QC Engineer, and it looks like I learn almost every aspect of engineering, which is good, I'm a beginner and that makes me more familiar with engineering. But I don't want to be a QC engineer in future, I want to be more specific, and I love Process (Chemical) Engineering. So, yes , it fits my future objective.

The first company I got (and the last one before I enter the graduate study, I hope) is an oil & gas engineering company. And I love it! I love this oil and gas sector, it's like "being in love at the first time". So I intend to take deeper in this sector, I want to learn more. And I see that USA is one of the biggest oil producers in the world, especially Texas, Houston, it's experiencing an oil boom for sure. That's why I really want to study there, I want to learn deeper in this oil & gas sector, I want to get a chance to do internship there before I graduate, that would be the great experience for me. So when I come back home, I can contribute in our oil and gas sector. Like we all know, our country is also one of oil producers in the world. I want to develope more and I hope we can survive this current oil crisis.

@ cute_poison

intiaiqbal92

Apr 16, 2015

Writing Feedback / Pie charts on the degrees granted at National University; computer science is the highest proportion [3]

Hi Irham..I have some suggestions for you..
Three pie charts compare levels of granted in several different subjects among three decades at National University and are measured in percentages. Overall, as can be seen that computer science is the highest proportion of these chart. I think your introduction needs more words, at least you have to write 2 sentences.

intiaiqbal92

Apr 16, 2015

Writing Feedback / The budget of staying averages in two different towns as compared to the national cost-of-living [4]

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write at least 150 words.

The chart below shows the cost-of-living averages in two different cities as compared to the national cost-of-living average.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table provides information regarding the budget of staying averages in two different towns as compared to the national cost-of-living average, is measured by percent.

In general, there are six categories : groceries, housing, utilities, transportation, health care and clothing, and Riverdale has more the percentage of cost-living than Cape Alicia.

To begin, Riverdale's people have spent their money for housing, it is about 19 percent, whilst Cape Alicia city only has -12.5 percent. Then, for groceries, utilities and transportation sector have the percentage less than 5%. Health Care sector has average around 7 % which is the second highest category in Riverdale, and the last category is clothing, it has 5.5 percent. Turning to Cape Alicia, it only has average of cost living less than 2 percent in each category. Therefore, utilities as the highest category, it has 1.2 %, similar to utilities, clothing only has 1 percent. After that, groceries and health care have average 0.5% and 0.8 % respectively. In addition, there are two categories have the percentage just under 1 percent, they are housing and transportation.

intiaiqbal92

Apr 16, 2015

Writing Feedback / The chart below shows the cost-of-living averages in two different cities [2]

... Health care, and Clothing are higher than other activities (sector) with the percentage at ...
Then, The percentage of the other activities such as Groceries (4.7 %), Utilities ...

While, there arefacilities that under average, including ...

intiaiqbal92

Apr 16, 2015

Writing Feedback / The improvement of technology, transportation, communication and infrastucture in the last 100 years [4]

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write at least 250 words.
Write about the following topic:

"Life now is better than it was 100 years ago."
Give a reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In these days, life is more comfortable than a decade ago. As such, the improvement of technology, transportation, communication and infrastucture have added a lot bringing betterment to the life of people . However, advances in technology have caused a problem like global warming. Therefore, I personally believe that life would be easier than 100 years ago.

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intiaiqbal92

Apr 16, 2015

Scholarship / How have I contributed to implementing change or reform in my organization. [2]

Hi Daroth,

I think your essay is good and simple..so, I suggest you make an essay more specific. You can put your another achievements to improve your essay.

Then, for introduction

... I realized that a major issue ~~which~~ impacted the productivity of the production was the lack ...

... and technician level by writing down questions about every pieces of the machine. .

intiaiqbal92

Apr 15, 2015

Writing Feedback / Nowadays nothing is private: our culture has become too confessional and self-expressive. [6]

hallo @anushka..I have some corrections for you :

1. In essay, don't use direct sentences.
2. You have to pay attention for punctuation.
3. Check you spelling again.

keep writing ! :)

I had ~~that~~ bad habit of using Facebook a lot.

In this world of technology and information, (In this modern era) we think that we should share all the informationthat we know. But (however) we cannot ~~seem~~see to know where to draw a line on that. We should be honest in the situations that require honesty ...

... some kind of importance that can help ~~other people~~ others.
... and the criminal has not been caught, ~~yes~~ , it is appropriate to ...
There has to be decency too in expressing ourselves.

intiaiqbal92

Apr 12, 2015

Writing Feedback / The amount of water use in 3 sector, and 2 different countries. [2]

The graph provides information regarding water use generally from 1900 to 2000, is measured in thousand kmł, while the table compares utilizing of water in two developing country and is measured in mł in 2000.

In general, it is evident that in three different categorized : agriculture, industrial, and domestic show a parallel increase after a starting point in the first year of the period, and Brazil uses water more than Democratic Republic of Congo.

Referring to the data between 1900 and 2000, agriculture sector was the highest throughout in the period, rising from 500 kmł in 1900 to 3000 kmł in 2000. Then, there was a period of stability between industrial and domestic during 5 years, while industrial sector rose sharply to 1000. Similarly, domestic sector was a slow increase of approximately 1300 kmł in the end of period.

Turning to water consumption, Brazil has used more water than Congo due to overpopulation. Thus, Brazil has 176 people with irrigated land 26,500 kmł and each Brazilians have consumed water 359 mł in 2000. In contrast, every Congo's person only used 8 mł of water which Congo has irrigated land 100 mł and population 5.2 million.

intiaiqbal92

Apr 12, 2015

Writing Feedback / Overusing of a common language encourages people to invent a new language for communication [3]

Hallo Mohjawahir...

I think your writing is a good,but your conclusion is not complete, because you did not put personal thought.

To conclude, although inventing a new language as a global way of communication becomes an obligation for some communities due to their business, protecting one language as a way of international communication has some profits for societies....(input personal thought)

intiaiqbal92

Apr 12, 2015

Writing Feedback / Knowledge about some country lifestyle and culture helps to learn a language of this area [2]

Hallo Ms. Thuty..I have some suggesstions for you..
Here we go..

In order to learn a language well, we should also learn about the country as well as the cultures and lifestyles of the people who speak it.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is important for people to learn about other languages, at least a common language such as English, Mandarin, and Japanese. As such, several people believe that learning a language has to put all themselves on it. Nevertheless, others argue that people should study more about country's culture and lifestyle to help them to gain a better understanding. Therefore, I would agree that this trend is needed to learn a language well.

On the one hand, some people think that learning about other languages must be straight to the point because people should focus to learn more about the structure and grammar. This is because people have to put so many efforts in learning a new language like reading, writing, listening, and speaking ~~more~~ . It needs a long time to master it and this way is not effective without learning the country's culture and their way of life. (If one main idea, it needs an example)

However, others believe that language, culture, and lifestyle are unity and these cannot be separated each other because it is necessary for people to improve their language ability. First, people who are learning the different habits able to exchange their information with other people by using their knowledge. Also, knowing about other behaviors can make easier to achieve a job and people can apply for job in overseas companies because they know about the condition of the country before. Not only this, this action also helps people make a better relationship with other people ~~because people~~as they can easily to communicate with other foreigners when they are traveling to the location.

To sum up, it seems that learning about other manners give people more knowledge about dissimilar habits. Thus, I believe that improving language should support by culture and lifestyle will provide more benefits for people.

intiaiqbal92

Apr 12, 2015

Writing Feedback / Should people invent a new language? [2]

Should we invent a new language for people from different countries to use for the international communication? Do you think there are more benefits or more problems with it?

Having united language are an important element for universal language. As such, some people say that we have to find a new language from different nations to prevent misunderstanding amongst people, to look for a good job, and to allow accessing different cultures. However, for some others, they believe that inventing a new language only makes a new problems such as people must pay a course and learn grammar properly. Therefore, I believe that it would increase a number of worrying issues.

Finding a foreign language has some obvious advantages for people. Firstly, it would certainly resolve the issue of communication. Then, when people from different countries use the same language, there would be no more misunderstanding among people.

Secondly, people can improve their job prospect and it would change their life automatically. For this reason, many companies who plan to expand overseas market and they are seeking for bilingual staff, so people are able to work abroad and are earning more money. In addition, experience with new culture. As such, a new language allows people to access many different culture across the world, and see fascinating to new things from a new perspective which is ultimately broadening people horizons.

On the other hand, if the world has a new international language, it means that people have to pay for taking course or private tutoring. Thus, it is possible to learn a language from books, video or the internet, which often cost less, but practicing speaking with others more gives significant change for people. Also, the new language leads difficulties for people, particularly for adult. This is because each language has different structure of grammar, and some languages use a totally different alphabet and different sounds and then learning a thousands of vocabulary words is not easy at all. In other words, people should make an effort in order to learn the new language.

In conclusion, although many people think that using a new language is a viable solution to overcome misunderstanding, I firmly argue that it would have more drawbacks for people. It is imperative that they are better to communicate in English as international language, so they do not have to learn hard for other languages.

intiaiqbal92

Apr 9, 2015

Undergraduate / Crime in Mexico - some issue of personal, local, national, or international concern [3]

Hi @animber..I think there are many grammatical issues and misspelling.

This I have several corrections for you.

keep writing ! :)

This means so much to me every way possible (explain more) .
I was born in the United States but because I'm I am Mexican I have come across people who ...

The Ayotzinapa students ~~had push me~~ have pushed me to reach higher, (...), to thank the sacrifices that my parents made for me, to appreciate the little I have, the rage and drive to be the number of ...

... of missing or killed students and for them I ~~will~~ would work hard and shape a new image ...

intiaiqbal92

Apr 8, 2015

Writing Feedback / Staying in one place and living in different area. [4]

Hello, I am studying IELTS now..I need your help for correcting this, thanks ! :)

In the past, people usually stayed in one place throughout their life. These days, people often move around. They often live in several different places in their lifetime. What are the advantages and disadvantages of both?

Basically, people want to live in the most comfortable zone.That is why most people just stayed in a one place in the old days as they wanted to close to their family and their friends, while this gradually makes them to be a socially awkward persons. However, for some others, they nowadays prefer moving to the different places in order to gain new experiences and have more job opportunities, but this leads people to experience culture shock and to pay more money. Thus, I personally argue that living in the same place is a good decision to have a peaceful life.

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Apr 8, 2015

Writing Feedback / Parents should control children's behaviour at their early stage. To what extent do you agree or not [2]

Hi Wenlai, your essay is brilliant but I found several grammatical errors and some repetition words. I think you should change the word like benefit : advantages and merits.

It is beneficial to children's future development if parents correct their misbehaviour when they are a child. Their parents instil ~~the standards of livings~~better you use : the standard of livin g and help their children develop acceptable behaviour. For example, they teach them how to socialize and get along with other family members or neighbours in a diplomatic way. This can help them to develop a social network which might bebenefit them when they reach their adulthood, such as referring job opportunities.

Another benefit is that children are likely to secure a prospective future if their parents give their priorities to children's ~~up-bring.~~upbringing Those parents also pay attention to their children's education by setting up their daily study time after school. For example, they might restrict the screen time; instead encourage their children to put efforts on studying such as reading stories or learning other languages. This might improve their literacy level and linguistic skills. Children who are raised up in such environment tend to develop a good learning behaviour and are likely to achieve successes in their academic study and career.

On the other hand, imposing excessive disciplines on children might have a negative impact on their decision making skills. They tend to lose abilities of making their own decisions and expressing their opinions, as they gradually get used to accepting and following what they parents have told. They might become less confident and emotional immature than those who have been given freedom.

intiaiqbal92

Apr 7, 2015

Writing Feedback / Nowadays the big cities are endeavoring to provide their inhabitants with more magnificent buildings [3]

Topic :
Some people say that modern buildings are ugly and are ruining our towns and cities, especially when these buildings are very different from those around them. Others say that they add variety and interest.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Introduction :
In today's world, as a result of increasing growth of population worldwide, big cities are endeavoring to provide their inhabitants with more magnificent buildings.This brings to enourmous amount of constructions in the towns. For this reason, some people think that those are unattractive and would damage the cities since those buildings are very contrast and diminish the original culture. However, others believe that they would be landmark in every town. I would also argue that it is better to stakeholders to construct some impressive buildings which must consider the environment as well.

On the negative side to this trend is giving bad impact for nation's cultural heritage. For instance, a new poll suggested that 70% of the indigenous people were unhappy with the development of Bangkok city as booming skyscrapers gradually reduce the nation's identity. As a result, Bangkok is popular with its skyscraper, not its culture. In other words, it is true that outstanding new buildings would slowly diminish traditional cultures of the country.

However, on the positive side, the landscape architectures are more likely to be symbol for each country. Therefore, those are essential so as to improve the general overview of the cities and then they would attract more visitors and prosper their economic. To illustrate, based on the Cencus of Bureau in Australia, the number of tourists in Sydney has increased by 20 percent for last ten years after the color of the roof new buidings are restricted by Sydney council. Thus, it is easy to see why new buildings have more value for the city.

In conclusion, Although the modern construction has dire effect for city's culture, I believe that the new landscape architectures as a magnet for holidaymakers coming to the town. It is imperative that the government should maintain on the design and construction of the new buildings.