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Assignment about Culture Shock when you come to America. [5]
- I have
rememberedremember thea day that I arrived in
AmericanAmerica at Detroit airport.
- Fortunately, another officer who was so kind and nice helped me exchange the ticket
for free for the next flight
in thisthat night after seeing my tears and sadness.
- This was the first time,
and it made me aware that language barrier can turn really terrible.I was aware of language difference was so terrible.-
AsThe more we shared information of our countries
asthe more I learned new things about my new place.
- Then, I felt more comfortable and relaxed because I
knewknow I
could solved my drawbackfigure things out easier than before.
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Vary of cuisineCuisine variation was a big challenge for myself when I just came to America. My new family loves all kind of cheese that they always add it in their food.
- Rephrasing last paragraph;
It was definitely a culture shock in too many aspects, cuisine, customs, tradition and daily activities between America and Vietnam but I always remind myself that this should not be a struggle but a challenge to motivate myself in adapting to my new environment. Now, whenever I travel I still get amazed with the environment, the people and the culture, this reminds me to go farther, to learn more and gain more experience, not to be shy to approach people, talk and be keen with the environment. I have accepted that wherever I go there will always be barriers and I'm ready to conquer those barriers for a whole new experience.
Vchau, for someone new to writing, your essay is very good. There is always a room for improvement and I want you to take this points to consider.
- word tenses, if an action is ongoing, use the present tense
- word choice, use words that you understand very well so your readers will understand what your talking about and where the idea is leading to.
- essay construction, spacing your paragraph allows your readers to breath and absorb the idea of the essay and go on reading
- proof read, meaning read your essay one more time before submitting it.
Keep writing and the best of luck to you!!!