AhmadNashran
Oct 30, 2016
Writing Feedback / Writing Task 1: Global Population Figures & Figures for Urban Populations in Different World Regions [3]
Then, thereis(was) a gradual increase (...) one and a half centuryies and then will rise sharply reaching ...
After over a half- century, the trend predicted will experiences a sharp decline until reachingwhich will reach until 6 billion points.
Furthermore, developing countries predicted willhas(have) a huge number of rate populations globally, while develop countries arewill be stable during 35 years.
... of developing countries will increased gradually over ...
According to the picture, the given time are past and future. in my opinion, you have to divide them which the past and future pattern are. and pay attention with the quantifier noun agreement.
Then, there
After over a half- century, the trend predicted will experience
Furthermore, developing countries predicted will
... of developing countries will increase
According to the picture, the given time are past and future. in my opinion, you have to divide them which the past and future pattern are. and pay attention with the quantifier noun agreement.