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Captain Richard Montero - Composition II

2 - Greetings! I'd be happy to give you some pointers on your fine essay! "The very prison he...

Writing Feedbackbizkitgirlzc - Apr 16, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Apr 17, 2007
A Parent's Worst Nightmare; Counter Arguments

12 - Sarah, Thank you for all of your help. I really appreciate you for letting me use your rewrite...

Writing Feedbacklynxana - Apr 16, 2007 / lynxana - Apr 17, 2007
Reforming the UN - Custom Written Essay

2 - Greetings! Your essay is very well-written and informative! Content-wise, I think you're fine; I just have a few...

Writing FeedbackAdriana - Apr 14, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Apr 15, 2007
the New York Times selects its reader; Times Fashion Magazine

2 - Greetings! I think your essay presents an interesting analysis! While I found your observations astute, it did seem...

Writing Feedbackbizkitgirlzc - Apr 13, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Apr 13, 2007
My personal understanding of the word "privilege" - Paper on a 'Current Law'

2 - Greetings! I think you're off to a great start with your essay! So far, you have presented what...

Writing Feedbacktwinsxtwo - Apr 12, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Apr 13, 2007
The Myth of Love - An Athology that relates most to me

3 - I'm not sure where to find the Viorst work, but I'd recommend checking your school library's database. If you...

Writing Feedbacklifeis2evil - Apr 12, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Apr 13, 2007
Stress - Cause & Effect essay - having a hard time coming up with a topic

6 - Greetings! I think you've done a fantastic job! The additional tidbits you found are good. What about just...

Writing Feedbacktwinsxtwo - Apr 12, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Apr 20, 2007
How football became an all male sport? my paper

2 - Greetings! You've written an interesting an informative essay! I will be glad to give you some editing suggestions....

Writing Feedbacktbrodgins - Apr 12, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Apr 12, 2007
Literature Review - Child Sex offenders

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Writing Feedbackfunk_laroon - Apr 11, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Apr 12, 2007
I was about to climb into a battle tank; Essay on Child's play

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Writing FeedbackFredParisFrance - Apr 11, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Apr 25, 2007
"Voice of Common Sense" - citations correct?

2 - Greetings! I'd be happy to give you some pointers! There are also many online sites which explain the...

Writing Feedbackrkslperez - Apr 11, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Apr 11, 2007
There is more to teaching than classroom transactions - philosophy

6 - Greetings! Well, honestly, I think one could make an argument for it fitting either title! I think you...

Writing Feedbacksuperkaytee - Apr 4, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Apr 5, 2007
"Location of schools" - my compare and contrast essay

2 - Greetings! I think you make some good points in your essay and have some good information! One thing...

Writing FeedbackBBgirl - Apr 3, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Apr 3, 2007
Vocabulary Composition

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Writing Feedbackbizkitgirlzc - Mar 24, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Mar 25, 2007
Report on Current Affairs written after reading our English book

3 - Thanks, you probably noticed that my 4th body paragraph was lame, but i had no choice given the limited...

Writing FeedbackTimcago - Mar 23, 2007 / Timcago - Mar 24, 2007
Who should be responsible for bringing children up? Fatherhood & motherhood

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Writing FeedbackPassawee - Mar 23, 2007 / Passawee - Mar 23, 2007
Evaluation on a lesson in the Alive-03 religious education book

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Writing Feedbacksuperkaytee - Mar 22, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Mar 22, 2007
"Smoking Weed" essay

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Writing FeedbackBBgirl - Mar 22, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Mar 22, 2007
You must select your subordinate to train a new employee. How?

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Writing FeedbackPassawee - Mar 22, 2007 / Passawee - Mar 22, 2007
'generous and kindness with everyone' - Describing a person I admire

4 - You're very welcome! Keep at it, you'll be great! :-)) Sarah...

Writing Feedbackmoniem - Mar 21, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Mar 25, 2007
Essay on children to grow up in the countryside versus big city

2 - Greetings! I think your English is coming along nicely! Your essay has some well-thought-out points. Here are some...

Writing FeedbackPassawee - Mar 21, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Mar 21, 2007
Research Paper on Perfumery and Chemistry

3 - Thank you so much, Sarah! I think I was trying to add some sort of literary quality to...

Writing Feedbackrollagasper - Mar 19, 2007 / rollagasper - Mar 20, 2007
'Human beings and the sense of dictatorship' - freshman in highschool essay

2 - Greetings! Well, it is certainly a unique piece of writing! I would classify it as "experimental" writing. Since...

Writing Feedbackpythonpeyton - Mar 17, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Mar 18, 2007
A university plans to develop a new research center in your country. .

2 - Greetings! You make some persuasive points in your essay! I have some suggestions for editing your essay: ...

Writing Feedbackmahdi - Mar 17, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Mar 18, 2007
Rain - Richard Rive. Essay on a short story we did in my English Studies class

5 - Thank you very much, you are very helpful!! My point that I'm trying to make about the obscurity...

Writing Feedbacklandi - Mar 17, 2007 / landi - Mar 17, 2007
Essay about a young woman

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Writing Feedbackjhon_lam - Mar 15, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Mar 15, 2007
ANALGY; Composition class

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Writing Feedbackgoombaking209 - Mar 14, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Mar 15, 2007
history or mathematics?

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Writing Feedbackmahdi - Mar 14, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Mar 15, 2007
Community college student essay - asking for a little feedback

2 - Greetings! You have a good essay here, with lots of important information! Your opening sentence is good; it...

Writing FeedbackTinyjn - Mar 14, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Mar 15, 2007
"Human Trafficking Today's Modern Day Slavery"

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Writing Feedbackrh07391 - Mar 12, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Mar 13, 2007
Orwell's prejudice against the colonized is inexcusableI; Multi-Source Essay

2 - Greetings! I think you do an excellent job of relating the three essays to the theme of prejudice!...

Writing Feedbackrusshen - Mar 12, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Mar 12, 2007
Two different methods of losing weight

2 - Greetings! You have a good essay here! I just have a few suggestiosns: My father suggested me...

Writing FeedbackMaggie8802 - Mar 11, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Mar 12, 2007
All Quiet on the Western Front - Comradeship

2 - Greetings! I'd be happy to make a few editing suggestions to your excellent essay! The distinction of...

Writing Feedbackbizkitgirlzc - Mar 11, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Mar 11, 2007
Feedback: An incident report written specifically by a bus driver

2 - Greetings! You do a good job of capturing the proper tone for this sort of report. If your...

Writing FeedbackShergill - Mar 10, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Mar 10, 2007
Can you edit my essay? "Ethics"

2 - Greetings! I think you have done a very thoughtful analysis of the poem. Good job! I have just...

Writing Feedbackmkatts19 - Mar 9, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Mar 10, 2007
Emperor Jones' flight is a progress in self-understanding

2 - Greetings! The thing that stands out the most to me is that you use the thesis statement, "Emperor...

Writing Feedbackwolface - Mar 7, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Mar 8, 2007
Tongan Immigration(2nd draft)

2 - Greetings! This is an interesting essay about a people that most of us know little about! I have...

Writing Feedbackjone1113 - Mar 6, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Mar 7, 2007
Education-sat practice essay; other than school influences on education?

4 - Greetings! I'm afraid I'm not that familiar with the SAT essay requirements. If there is a word limit,...

Writing Feedbackkendra - Mar 5, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Mar 6, 2007
The Courtroom - Essay

NEW - I just wrote this essay for my english class. I can't quite grasp what is wrong with it. Most...

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Child-centred practice ignores the individuality of children's needs. Essay regarding bullying....

11 - Yes there are many highly qualified people in this website that would help you, but you need to post...

Writing Feedbacksuperkaytee - Mar 5, 2007 / AzizZ - Nov 18, 2012
"Reasons to smoke" I wrote this essay for tommorow's class

2 - Greetings! It can be a real challenge to write essays in a foreign language. You make some good...

Writing FeedbackBBgirl - Mar 4, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Mar 5, 2007
Differences between Mongolian and American Foods

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example essay about and amazing artists

4 - I'm not sure I understand your question. Can it be an example essay for what? Sarah...

Writing Feedbackokuna - Mar 1, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Mar 3, 2007
The moral education aim in the Alive 0-8 and Alive 0-4

8 - Thanks for your help...handed in essay today!!!!One job out of the way...lol Thanks again!...

Writing Feedbacksuperkaytee - Feb 28, 2007 / superkaytee - Mar 1, 2007
Classification essay - types of pets (500-700 words)

4 - Thanks for all of the help. I did some more revisions, before I turned it in. I received all...

Writing Feedbackamosborne13 - Feb 27, 2007 / amosborne13 - Mar 18, 2007
CATS; Indoor/ Outdoor / Indoor-Outdoor

7 - Rest is not possible for a mother with a son turning 3 on Friday. :) It is also not...

Writing Feedbackamosborne13 - Feb 25, 2007 / amosborne13 - Feb 28, 2007
All Quiet On the Western Front - academic essay on Betrayal

2 - Greetings! What an excellent essay! I enjoyed reading it very much! I have only a few editing suggestions:...

Writing Feedbackbizkitgirlzc - Feb 25, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Feb 26, 2007
Behavioral Support, Social relationships & Peer support.

2 - Greetings! I think you've written a great essay! Most of my observations have to do with punctuation. ...

Writing FeedbackCeressie - Feb 25, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Feb 25, 2007
"Living at the time of Copernicus" - Proper Thesis For a 4-page Paper

5 - It's a rewarding job, but knowing that makes it even more worthwhile! You made my week! (And I hope...

Writing Feedbackmanogamez - Feb 24, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Feb 27, 2007
Memories are something everyone has! - SAT

2 - Greetings! It's good to get input from someone who has just been through it, so thanks, aznpoo! I...

Writing Feedbackkendra - Feb 24, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Feb 24, 2007
Short Essay on The Crucible

4 - And I appreciate your letting me know! Thank you! Sarah...

Writing Feedbackrollagasper - Feb 22, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Feb 23, 2007
Money is one of the greatest tools in life

5 - Yes I do, but I coudn't think I'm not good at writing essay I've been here for 1 year...

Writing Feedbackaljur - Feb 22, 2007 / aljur - Feb 22, 2007
'Do not stop questioning' - essay regarding my 3 core traits

3 - Wow! I am surprised that I only made a few mistakes. I agree that my conclusion needs work. I...

Writing FeedbackTimcago - Feb 21, 2007 / Timcago - Feb 23, 2007
Your career must compliment yourself; Career Choice

4 - thank you both :)...

Writing Feedbackkendra - Feb 21, 2007 / kendra - Feb 22, 2007
'My Friend Moni' - this is my first descriptive essay for grade

4 - Greetings! Sometimes when we have been working intensely on a piece of writing, it can be difficult to...

Writing FeedbackMagstar0202 - Feb 20, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Feb 21, 2007
Monetary Policy Paper - Is this okay... thank you

3 - Greetings! I'd be happy to give you some feedback: First of all, while there's technically nothing wrong...

Writing Feedbackasianbm - Feb 19, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Feb 20, 2007
"Swimming or Floating" - need help to locate my comma splices and fused sentences.

2 - Greetings! You have written an interesting and engaging essay! You're right that your sentences could use a bit...

Writing Feedbackcsneed1677 - Feb 19, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Feb 20, 2007
"The Bargain" ; John strikes a bargain with a beggar to replace each other

3 - Thanks for the help. I'm currently taking a break to celebrate CNY(i'm singaporean, and i don't think american/british english...

Writing Feedbackyongen_92 - Feb 18, 2007 / yongen_92 - Feb 19, 2007
William Osler - Can someone edit my introduction

10 - Greetings! I know it is difficult when you have an instructor who sees things entirely differently from you...

Writing Feedbackaznpoo - Feb 17, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Feb 20, 2007
A constant topic among political discussions is the extent of Gvt Responsibility

2 - Greetings! You have written an interesting essay! I have just a few editing suggestions to offer: Change...

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