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Cornell Academic interest essay/ Transfer to CAS/ Culture Night < tentative titl

11 - Thank you!! Exactly what I needed :)...

Undergraduatejemma2011 - Sep 22, 2009jemma2011 - Sep 28, 2009
"As we outgrow..." - UChicago essay

4 - jajaja thanks :) the thing is that my sats are nowhere close to the ones they ask for i...

Undergraduaterimafadlallah - Sep 22, 2009acat6332 - Sep 26, 2009
"Guys stop it!"; FSU ESSAY; helping and making an impact on others lives

10 - Good essay overall. A few minor things: "They have instilled in me to try to be helpfulness and...

Undergraduatestern22 - Sep 22, 2009EF_Sean - Sep 25, 2009
"Soccer" - comments/suggestions on common app short answer

8 - yeah i really like your idea...it's not cheesy...it's a good topic. however, your sentences are a little too short....

UndergraduateMegan - Sep 22, 2009stern22 - Sep 22, 2009
I have always been one to try something new, especially involving music

2 - write out the 25. I totally disagree with tkkt1. Unless it's significant you always write out the number. unless...

Undergraduatesmt1192 - Sep 22, 2009pcvrz34g - Sep 22, 2009
Evaluating the same essay? Common App Transfer Essay Inquiry.

6 - Excuse me for being dense, but are you implying that I can write up a personalized essay for the...

Undergraduateenycezbebe - Sep 22, 2009enycezbebe - Sep 22, 2009
"a last memory with my great-grandma" - Personal Statemet--Input?

3 - your essay is definitely very touching. and although you dont necessarily talk about you as a person that much,...

Undergraduatekaymm - Sep 22, 2009stern22 - Sep 22, 2009
Bambi and George Bush (Common App admissions essay)

6 - I'd be curious to see your revised draft, if you have one....

Undergraduateninjamanawesome - Sep 22, 2009EF_Sean - Sep 25, 2009
How to approach essays such as, "Why do you want to attend this university?"

6 - This is what I have so far! Be harsh please! Vrrrrrrrrrrrrr. Vrrrrrrrrrrrr. It's 5:30 AM. I'd fallen asleep again...

Essaysdisplayname - Sep 22, 2009vietbt77 - Jan 2, 2014
I need ideas for a informative paper (+visuals)!

6 - Write about something you like and have alot of thoughts or ideas about; which will help you in writing...

Essaystaricka - Sep 22, 2009mtelsayed - Oct 21, 2009
"Gone, Gone Again" by Edward Thomas

3 - At first glance Edward Thomas' poem, "Gone, Gone Again," seems to be about an old man reminiscing about his...

PoetryDesignGal - Sep 22, 2009DesignGal - Sep 23, 2009
Works of Salinger (CommonApp main essay for Sarah Lawrence College)

4 - I rewrote it and added something to make it tight, and also solved the punctuation problem. Don't know this...

Undergraduatepulp - Sep 22, 2009pulp - Sep 23, 2009
"How would you describe yourself?" - Penn State Admission Essay

10 - Thank you. Unfortunately, Penn State has a max of 1200 characters for your personal statement. I had to redo...

Undergraduatebritmin - Sep 22, 2009britmin - Oct 6, 2009
GOOD AND BAD OF MULTICULTURL SOCIETY. DISCUSS

4 - Lol, I see you have discovered that some topics are, um, more sensitive than you thought. You are right...

Writing Feedbackniraj - Sep 21, 2009EF_Sean - Sep 22, 2009
"To stand out among 40,000+ students" - umich diversity essay

5 - Thanks guys. You've been a great help. I think I'm going to re-do the whole essay and use a...

Undergraduaterimafadlallah - Sep 21, 2009rimafadlallah - Sep 22, 2009
"Preparation Produces Opportunity" (A quote and how it relates to your life)

3 - I merged the threads: Forum policy is one thread per essay. Good job, but I still...

Writing FeedbackCantWrite - Sep 21, 2009EF_Simone - Sep 24, 2009
Everything is diverse - Umich Diversity Essay

5 - hey heres a new version of my entire essay tell me what you thinkk... [A] "We know that...

Undergraduatelexi_z - Sep 21, 2009lexi_z - Sep 27, 2009
Originality is not such a concept that can be categorized in the first group or the other

4 - thanks, yes as i read again, it seems unclear.:( i write these essays as a practice for GRE exam.....

Writing Feedbackmina_sedaghatir - Sep 21, 2009mina_sedaghatir - Sep 22, 2009
Puerile Prince or Stalwart King: An Analysis of Shakespeare's Henry V

7 - *Smooch*! I get it now! I can be so dense sometimes. Thank you for taking the time to do...

Writing FeedbackNotoman - Sep 21, 2009Notoman - Sep 29, 2009
Diversity Essay (AIDS Patient) - U of Michigan App

4 - you should say 'i had never knowingly touched someone with aids' b.c. im sure u may have before u...

Undergraduatediiiia - Sep 21, 2009tal105 - Sep 24, 2009
My Essay on Disappearances in Pakistan. Help

3 - If you're going to talk about the U.S. in relation to Pakistan, you have to go back further in...

Writing Feedbackcantonhero - Sep 21, 2009EF_Simone - Sep 22, 2009
Hills Like White Elephants Essay (man and girl frustration)

2 - You are on the right track. One concern I have, though, is that the prompt asks you who you...

Writing Feedbackhazelc - Sep 21, 2009EF_Sean - Sep 21, 2009
Why I want to teach

4 - that's a bit repetitious. Remember, not only-but also. So it should read I learned to see...

Undergraduatebrittschissler - Sep 21, 2009pcvrz34g - Sep 21, 2009
Citing a printed Word document...

5 - That's OK, but what would be better would be to verify the document somehow. If somebody just emailed you...

Grammar, Usagebla4free - Sep 21, 2009EF Craig - Oct 4, 2009
"UCF is my first choice" - just need some advice.

4 - The thing is, there really isn't a huge reason I want to go besides A. Some friends go there...

Undergraduatehelgoth11 - Sep 21, 2009helgoth11 - Sep 21, 2009
Cbest Essay - Missing Opportunity in Life

5 - Writing about the event as if it happened to you will indeed make it easier for you to craft...

Writing Feedbackelainedlcruz - Sep 21, 2009EF_Sean - Sep 24, 2009
My Life according to Edward Elgar- Common App!

11 - Well, the content seems solid enough. You need to work on polishing your grammar, though. For instance, in your...

Undergraduateomarxcore - Sep 21, 2009EF_Sean - Oct 2, 2009
whats the difference between somones and someone's ?

17 - ~Always have a steady supply of bing cherries on hand for those "special moments....

Grammar, Usageneuromancer - Sep 21, 2009Jeannie - Dec 5, 2009
"Studying overseas" - I AM PREPARING FOR IELTS EXAM

2 - Hi, I'm also new in this forum so i'll try my best to help you out with this...

Writing Feedbackangel_luv - Sep 21, 2009elainedlcruz - Sep 21, 2009
Pomona supplemental essay/Does the essay capture the experience vividly enough

6 - I realize what you meant -- I was just pointing out that this is a usage of the term...

Undergraduatemia7 - Sep 21, 2009EF_Sean - Sep 24, 2009
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