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Speech-language pathology - essay opinion needed

5 - i love it! thanks so much :)...

Graduateamandahp - Sep 30, 2007amandahp - Oct 2, 2007
Impact Essay (significant experience, achievement, risk)

2 - Greetings! Annoying? No way! That's why we're here! Your excellent essay needs very little work; just a few...

Scholarshipbizkitgirlzc - Sep 30, 2007EF_Team2 - Oct 1, 2007
I like to see super heroes as a mock to society; Superhero Essay

2 - Greetings! You've given your response to the question an interesting twist--very good! There is little I would...

Writing Feedbackbizkitgirlzc - Sep 30, 2007EF_Team2 - Sep 30, 2007
The Otaku - Explaining with examples essay

5 - Greetings! I would guess that "cosplay" is short for "costume play"? If so, you could say: He regularly...

Writing Feedbacksamuraitom - Sep 30, 2007EF_Team2 - Oct 1, 2007
FSU App. essay: the best advice given; 'be the head and not the tail'

NEW - The topic is to basically explain the best advice given and why? Please read this and give me any...

UndergraduateJessicaTiffany - Sep 29, 2007 -
Chilean /Steady Grades; Personal life&Aspirations - Biography(SCHOLARSHIP)

2 - Greetings! You've written an excellent essay! I have just a few editing suggestions: "Study my girl, or...

Scholarshipbizkitgirlzc - Sep 29, 2007EF_Team2 - Sep 30, 2007
Teaching mathematics; - PERSONAL STATEMENT

12 - Greetings! I think you've done a very good job of answering most of the questions, with one exception,...

Undergraduateammarrauf - Sep 29, 2007EF_Team2 - Oct 13, 2007
Book Review Project: "Wilco: Learning How To Die"

4 - Greetings! I think you have done a splendid job! I understand what you mean about writing about the...

Book Reportssilverystars - Sep 28, 2007EF_Team2 - Oct 1, 2007
I NEED AN OPENING STATEMENT on essay: challenging fate

3 - Thank you Sarah. The idea that "our fate cannot be changed and what happens when we try to change...

EssaysSMontes10 - Sep 28, 2007SMontes10 - Oct 1, 2007
EMMA & HARRIET SMITH; AP LITERATURE- Essay on characterization

2 - Greetings! You've written a very good essay! The only thing I might suggest is adding to your quotes...

Book ReportsWonderfulloser - Sep 27, 2007EF_Team2 - Sep 28, 2007
AP Literature; THESIS STATEMENT & Introduction

4 - What's this, you need to explain why you want to major in literature? Literature is human thought codified in...

EssaysWonderfulloser - Sep 27, 2007EF_Kevin - Nov 29, 2008
Need a topic and assistance with writing a descriptive essay

5 - Just think of all the businesses that have products or services they wish to sell (which is pretty much...

Essayscasey2264 - Sep 26, 2007EF_Sean - Jul 16, 2009
How to write a good advertising article?

2 - Greetings! With any website it's important to remember that people can't visit it if they can't find it!...

Grammar, UsageSuperplayer - Sep 26, 2007EF_Team2 - Sep 27, 2007
Political value of surface and identity in a repressive society

2 - Greetings! My interpretation would be that "politics" or "political value" would mean, in this instance, the furtherance of...

Essaystntmayhem - Sep 26, 2007EF_Team2 - Sep 26, 2007
Reed Essay (interest in a liberal arts and science education)

3 - Greetings! I like what you've done with the ending! Very nice! If the word limit is 500,...

Writing Feedbackbizkitgirlzc - Sep 24, 2007EF_Team2 - Sep 25, 2007
FSU ESSAY - "Pick your favourite and meaningful quote"

2 - Greetings! Your essay is excellent, and nearly perfect. I have only a couple of small suggestions: I...

Undergraduatecarsons2k - Sep 24, 2007EF_Team2 - Sep 24, 2007
thesis statement and introductry paragraph

10 - Oh... so you have to read the assigned reading, and whenever you find an interesting fact you should write...

Essayssrahimi - Sep 24, 2007EF_Kevin - Mar 9, 2011
A scary house - descriptive essay

NEW - Prompt was to describe a place. I think I did a good job with that. I tried not...

Writing Feedbacksamuraitom - Sep 23, 2007 -
english verb tense (simple past, present perfect, past perfect)

2 - Greetings! You've done a good job with this! You are right, some of them are very tricky and,...

Grammar, Usagecolla26 - Sep 22, 2007EF_Team2 - Sep 23, 2007
Short Review - reasons for attending college

4 - Greetings! No, technically, that is not a run-on sentence. A run-on sentence is one which has two independent...

Essaysvolzurg - Sep 22, 2007EF_Team2 - Sep 23, 2007
Have you ever done something to make others happy? Peer Pressure Paper

5 - Hmmm. I due until Thursday, so tomorrow I'm gonna take some time before class and ask one of the...

Writing Feedbackusanchezfe - Sep 21, 2007usanchezfe - Sep 24, 2007
Exploring paper about the connection between the media, books, violence, and terrorism

10 - Thanks, K. Unfortunately, the requirements of the assignment didn't allow me to narrow it down much further than that....

Essayschriskingp - Sep 21, 2007KrazeeBrod - Mar 30, 2010
How my favorite Hobby/Pastime refelcts my personality

2 - Greetings! I think you've done an excellent job of demonstrating the characteristics you listed! The only suggestions I...

Writing Feedbackbdoan - Sep 21, 2007EF_Team2 - Sep 21, 2007
A Rose for Emily : Why Did Miss Emily Kill Homer?

2 - Greetings! Faulkner's story brings up a lot of intriguing questions. In contemplating why Miss Emily may have killed...

Essaysblackscorpion15 - Sep 20, 2007EF_Team2 - Sep 21, 2007
My review of the great gatsby

3 - Greetings! I think you're doing a great job so far! You do want to be careful, as Devyn...

Book Reportsjeanelle - Sep 20, 2007EF_Team2 - Sep 21, 2007
'From Albania to England' - personal and informative essay

6 - 2 dido Hi i'm looking for and about-myself-essay sample. u said u did it 2 yeras ago. so...

Writing Feedbacknisa102 - Sep 20, 2007TROF - Nov 18, 2007
Consumer prices drop - Economy revisited ; expositive essay

5 - Thanks!...

Essayssamuraitom - Sep 20, 2007samuraitom - Sep 23, 2007
Can I use "I" rather than "The author"?

6 - I am not a native speaker and just post my suggestion Do not think about going out,...

Grammar, Usagenae - Sep 20, 2007tiyuok - Dec 27, 2013
15 minutes of fame; NYU COMMON APP

2 - Greetings! You've written an excellent essay! I have just a few editing suggestions. It was then I...

Undergraduatevishal720 - Sep 19, 2007EF_Team2 - Sep 20, 2007
MOVING TO AMERICA; "Challenging Experience"

3 - hi, i was wondering what universities you are applying to?...

Undergraduatevishal720 - Sep 19, 2007fozyn76 - Nov 29, 2007
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