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A presence in oneself -- an essay

19 - So have I! Take care! Sarah...

Writing FeedbackRajiv - Jun 7, 2007EF_Team2 - Jun 14, 2007
College freshman after 15 year break - first essay for this class

2 - Greetings! I have added a few more comments and included the ones I made previously: If I...

Writing Feedbackmelmcghee07 - Jun 6, 2007EF_Team2 - Jun 7, 2007
Buy Buy Buy! (essay on american compulsive shopping)

3 - thanks so much for your review Sarah....

Writing Feedbacksecondhandgod - Jun 6, 2007secondhandgod - Jun 14, 2007
Cause and Effect Essay-A Family of Poverty

5 - Don't tell the reader, that you're going to tell him something. Like, " I will describe what my poverty...

Writing Feedbackscash - Jun 6, 2007Lex - Nov 19, 2008
Business Management / Databases topics

15 - To find a good article online you should search with more depth... If you want to find an article...

Dissertationsnytenurse - Jun 6, 2007fletcherj003 - May 2, 2012
Feedback wanted for the first essay I've written in 16 years!! GULP

2 - Greetings! We always try to be gentle here! And, the truth is, you've written a really delightful essay!...

Writing Feedbackmelmcghee07 - Jun 5, 2007EF_Team2 - Jun 7, 2007
Brave New World- Huxley's message?

2 - Greetings! I think your essay is very good! I'll just make a few editing suggestions and comments. ...

Writing Feedbackpoohbear0805 - Jun 5, 2007EF_Team2 - Jun 6, 2007
The human cause of global warming? Research essay.

NEW - Here's the nearly finished draft. I was wondering if you could take a look at it and give me...

Writing Feedbackkriegle - Jun 5, 2007 -
Difference between Affect and Effect? Grammar

3 - Thank you again! It was hard for me to understand the definition of these words in the dictionary, but...

Grammar, Usagekriegle - Jun 4, 2007kriegle - Jun 9, 2007
Response to "brave new world" by Danial

2 - Greetings! You've written a good essay. I have just a few edting suggestions: As seen in the...

Writing FeedbackDanialls - Jun 4, 2007EF_Team2 - Jun 5, 2007
the Art Institute of Seattle, Scholarship essay statement?

4 - Greetings! I like what you've added, explaining your skills. One thing I might suggest: I have already...

Scholarshiparacid - Jun 4, 2007EF_Team2 - Jun 10, 2007
Childhood memory by anthony qcity

2 - Greetings! What a great story! Your writing is very colorful and engaging. I particularly like the metaphor about...

Writing Feedbackqcityslugger - Jun 3, 2007EF_Team2 - Jun 4, 2007
Running Backs: Training and Knowledge to become Successful.

4 - Greetings! I agree, you've written a good essay! I have just a few suggestions: These players did...

Writing Feedbackathiththan - Jun 3, 2007EF_Team2 - Jun 4, 2007
Summary of a childhood experience

2 - Greetings! The details really make the story! It's a great essay; I have just a few editing tips:...

Writing FeedbackDIPSET - Jun 3, 2007EF_Team2 - Jun 3, 2007
Should Southerners be consider their own ethnic group? Essay

2 - Greetings! If I understand you correctly, you're wanting help writing a thesis statement? If so, you might approach...

EssaysBlue840 - Jun 1, 2007EF_Team2 - Jun 2, 2007
Thesis statements on global warming?

26 - Google is the best friend. Everything you can find there. Also, you can use this site (EF) to...

Essaystankbuster - Jun 1, 2007eddies - Apr 26, 2014
Vocabulary Composition on Soccer

2 - Greetings! What a delightful essay! I love your analysis of soccer and its relationship to politics. Your vocabulary...

Writing Feedbackbizkitgirlzc - Jun 1, 2007EF_Team2 - Jun 2, 2007
'Trying to adapt to this foreign country' - significant learning experience

NEW - My essay question is "Describe a significant learning experience in your life." What was it about the experience, more...

Undergraduatekikay - May 31, 2007 -
Expository Essay: Important holidays for me

3 - Greetings! Congratulations on working towards your G.E.D.! I think you've done a fine job with your essay--particularly impressive...

Writing FeedbackVerde - May 31, 2007EF_Team2 - Jun 2, 2007
How we may cause natural events to happen - an essay

12 - Greetings! I agree that it is intriguing and that studying it could only prove interesting and useful. Where...

Writing FeedbackRajiv - May 31, 2007EF_Team2 - Jun 6, 2007
Replacing a Kitchen Faucet - Process Essay

4 - We'll be happy to provide it! Never underestimate how well "years of experience" can make up for "years since...

Writing Feedbackscash - May 30, 2007EF_Team2 - Jun 1, 2007
Thesis Statement of "Performance Enhancing Drugs in Sport"

6 - Thats great! Thanks...

Essaystraci107 - May 29, 2007Zem7 - Feb 5, 2008
Persuasive Essay on the book ''Out of My Skin''

6 - Greetings! I think your essay is coming along very well! The beginning is particularly good; I do feel...

Book ReportsAsma - May 28, 2007EF_Team2 - Jun 1, 2007
Essay on Kafka's Metamorphosis

3 - good arguement, and subject good luck on the assignment...

Writing Feedbackbizkitgirlzc - May 28, 2007gmanz - Jan 11, 2009
Here's the Problem - an essay

3 - It is my children and their friends who have made me realize how different the coming world is going...

Writing FeedbackRajiv - May 26, 2007Rajiv - Apr 27, 2009
My Biographical Essay; I was born in Peru

2 - Greetings! I think you have done an excellent job for a non-native speaker of English! I went through...

Undergraduateeljuleso - May 25, 2007EF_Team2 - May 27, 2007
Good Entrance / Application Essay - how long should it be?

11 - This is a good excuse to call the admissions office and have a little talk with them. Really, that...

EssaysGidget - May 25, 2007EF_Kevin - Jan 14, 2010
Expository Essay: War, good or bad?

3 - Greetings! I think your essay is coming along quite well. I have just a few suggestions for you....

Writing FeedbackmSaKooL - May 25, 2007EF_Team2 - May 28, 2007
Help with paper on the Salem Witch Trials.

2 - Greetings! The Salem Witch trials is a fascinating topic which has been written about at length, with many...

Research Papersquarterdime - May 24, 2007EF_Team2 - May 27, 2007
Philosophy Essay on Hume's view

2 - Greetings! I can give you some ideas that I think might be applicable. If one's morality derives from...

Essaysshenz711 - May 24, 2007EF_Team2 - May 27, 2007
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