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4 - As far as an introduction, I believe in writing that last. Once you have the text you can write...
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7 - By "showing" you use adjectives, metaphors, and similies frequently but not too frequently in your writing. By being concise,...
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2 - Good afternoon. I would suggest beginning by finding the instances within each work that you think show the...
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2 - Your essay is disorganized. Try taking one subject at a time, discuss it, and then move on to the...
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2 - Good afternoon. I suggest you begin by doing some research on some of the victims of the Salem...
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3 - FSU Essay second draft Growing up in a family with parents who didn't have much formal education, I...
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2 - I think your essay has good potential. I, too, am applying to FSU this semester, and right now, I'm...
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