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Engineering and minor in Mathematics for Teaching - UC Personal Statement

3 - When you write, think of what purpose you want each sentence to serve. Your intro makes it sound like...

Undergraduatealexa21 - Nov 22, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 25, 2009
"not prepared to return to suburbia" - Significant Challenge

2 - A sheet of paper lay within the grasp of my fingertips. This, below, is a great sentence, but...

Undergraduatebluekleenexx - Nov 22, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 24, 2009
Volunteering at the hospital program made me proud and led to the person that I am today.

9 - do you guys think its ok?...

Undergraduateihurdleyou - Nov 22, 2009ihurdleyou - Nov 27, 2009
"Being a 'quad-lingual'" - UC Prompt #2

8 - Well... Natsuken contributed a perspective, and that is good. I don't think it was intended to be nasty....

Undergraduatesofiaz - Nov 22, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 25, 2009
My Indian Heritage; Rutgers / diversity (trip to india!)

3 - Even within the nation, the difference between the two societies was as pronounced that between Ireland and Omaha. ---->...

Undergraduatenakulisbrown - Nov 22, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 25, 2009
"Money" - UC Prompt #1

2 - Born in a poor family, both of my parents have to work very hard in order to cover the...

Undergraduatesofiaz - Nov 22, 2009nakulisbrown - Nov 22, 2009
'four-week English summer course' - Experience that changed my life. UC Prompt

3 - Well, pennies make up a dollar, so they are important also so thanks for help!...

Undergraduatechesterix - Nov 22, 2009chesterix - Nov 23, 2009
my passion for nursing and things i will do if i actually became one

6 - Not sure if you revised your essay, but about the prompt, I thought you answered only half of it....

UndergraduateGodizgood - Nov 22, 2009doug - Nov 26, 2009
"My experience as peer coach" - UC Prompt #2

2 - You should say some more at the end of your essay concerning your feelings of selfishness, which you say...

Undergraduatechant550 - Nov 22, 2009EF_Susan - Nov 23, 2009
Common Appplication Experience Essay- The Red Ranger

4 - I knew she wanted to meet eyes with another one of her new students, I knew she was looking...

Undergraduatejsnni - Nov 22, 2009gotwavez - Nov 25, 2009
'Connecting with other cultures' - Short Answer Michigan--Diversity Essay

4 - Your essay is off to a good start except for one MAJOR issue!!! Go bucks?????????????? Please get...

Undergraduatecchstroy - Nov 22, 2009aguafria22 - Nov 29, 2009
my stay in africa and my dad.

14 - make sure you keep commas and periods and other punctuation at the right place in a sentence. no need...

UndergraduateGodizgood - Nov 22, 2009meisj0n - Nov 27, 2009
UC#2 : "You're either getting better, or getting worse, nothing else."

5 - This was a truly wonderful story and honestly for me, it seemed like a movie from the very begining....

Undergraduatejefftwomey - Nov 22, 2009ivan9210 - Nov 30, 2009
USC; write about an experience that helped me learn and what exactly I did

2 - Hi first of all, I want to tell you this is not ridiculous. Second, I do think...

Undergraduatemisskimari - Nov 22, 2009ivan9210 - Nov 22, 2009
A Touch of Tepper: CMU Supplement

3 - Yes, you seem way over a page, but the writing is so colorful and interesting! It's too bad you...

Undergraduateeckspee - Nov 22, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 25, 2009
Two scenes whose natures contribute to the theme of the play - Merchant of Venice Essay

12 - Yeah, when you are the sort of person who does not have to struggle to do well in...

Book ReportsNotoman - Nov 22, 2009EF_Kevin - Dec 7, 2009
our planet, UC essay 1 for transfer students

2 - I think you should start this essay with the second paragraph, changing it slightly. The first sentence in the...

Undergraduatedshay07 - Nov 22, 2009EF_Susan - Nov 23, 2009
The Pyramids in Hollywood ; UC prompt 1

6 - are you Harondeep Singh?...

Undergraduatejuly723 - Nov 22, 2009july723 - Nov 22, 2009
Macaulay Honors College - significant risk you have taken or ethical dilemma

6 - Ohh, I see. That's a really good idea! Thanks a lot!...

Undergraduatekittykat - Nov 22, 2009kittykat - Nov 29, 2009
'the first in my family' - Why Ohio State University Essay?

5 - I think it would really add some personal character if you wrote about some of the things that you've...

UndergraduateBJA2010 - Nov 22, 2009Michelle - Nov 24, 2009
Volunteering at Boys & Girls club - UC Prompt #2

NEW - Hello everybody! Here is my second essay for UC. Just a few questions: 1) Is the topic too cliché?...

Undergraduatexinita - Nov 22, 2009 -
Compare taking traditional classes (classroom only) to online classes

4 - Thank you Margarita and Jeannie. I will do that correction in my assignment and I appreciate you for your...

Undergraduatealina967 - Nov 22, 2009alina967 - Dec 1, 2009
UC essay #1: school and everything that comes along with it

5 - The outside world is dog-eat-dog, they say. It is absolutely necessary to prepare for that harsh reality after several...

Undergraduatecache189 - Nov 22, 2009Swallace18 - Nov 26, 2009
I am applying on the suggestion of Professor - review my SoP for PhD in Finance

4 - Well, your mention of talking with a professor at the school sure would get the attention of an admissions...

GraduateNick89 - Nov 22, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 24, 2009
Common App. Short Essay for Activitity Cross Country

3 - I struggled with running for four miles every day, including hills, and lifting weights e very once a while....

Undergraduatealannis - Nov 22, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 24, 2009
UC Prompt 1- Living with one foot in two worlds

5 - I think you are doing fantastic job. I like the use of language included in your essay. Keep it...

UndergraduateJS2010 - Nov 22, 2009dcarreno1 - Nov 25, 2009
UC Personal Statement #2 - My Dance Experience

3 - That sounds pretty good! I like the intro. "because my entire mind has always been centered on dancing....

Undergraduatedeejaykomotion - Nov 22, 2009dshay07 - Nov 23, 2009
symbolism and mood in The Death of a Salesman

3 - i havent looked at those sites, but from what I remember, there were instances where Willy blends his dreamy...

Book Reportsaiden - Nov 22, 2009meisj0n - Nov 25, 2009
'Leadership is comprehending facts' essay

NEW - Leadership is a constant theme and emphasis at CMC. In fact, one of the ways we describe CMC students...

Undergraduatecuddles - Nov 22, 2009 -
Brown Short Response (Why Brown)

6 - The essay is disjointed. It would be good if the Thoreau quote had more application that just to that...

UndergraduateFiddysin - Nov 22, 2009EF_Kevin - Dec 10, 2009
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