|Tracking an Evolving Thesis (Concern about education versus degree essay)
2 - Greetings! You raise some interesting issues and make some good points in your thesis. I'd be happy to...
Writing Feedbackhanhtienng - Nov 14, 2006EF_Team2 - Nov 15, 2006
|Admissions help - a list of questions to answer!
2 - I can imagine what a shock a list of questions was, especially the one asking what you think you...
Essaysroger8 - Nov 13, 2006EF_Team - Nov 14, 2006
|'Global warming is taught in school for government to control us' - on global warming
3 - thanks for the help its not due till after thanksgiving but i wanted to get a head start. Thanks....
Research PapersBadAngel299 - Nov 12, 2006BadAngel299 - Nov 13, 2006
|I bought a book about essay writing and it is a real god-send. Essay Introductions?
2 - Greetings! You have asked a good question! The answer is not one which is written in stone; it...
Essaysmarzipan - Nov 11, 2006EF_Team2 - Nov 11, 2006
|Expository Essay question - choosing and re-writing my essay?
16 - Greetings! Yes, I am very impressed with your progress indeed! You have vastly improved the grammar, punctuation, and...
Undergraduateeconsangel - Oct 20, 2006EF_Team2 - Nov 6, 2006
|"One minute for yourself" book!
Essayseconsangel - Oct 19, 2006econsangel - Nov 6, 2006
|How to Revising a Story into an Expository Essay?
4 - Greetings! These are some very good questions. I've never heard of an "implicit thesis statement." While that doesn't...
Undergraduategekokujyou - Nov 4, 2006EF_Team2 - Nov 5, 2006
|Letter to the Editor ; "Tamiami Trail Scenic Highway"
2 - Greetings! While I'd agree that science writing has its own style (as do other fields, such as law),...
Writing FeedbackInternsRUs - Nov 3, 2006EF_Team2 - Nov 3, 2006
|Religion is Great? OR it isn't ?; Satirical essay
2 - Greetings! You have a great start here on a satirical essay! You have some good lines (jokes) in...
Writing Feedbackthomasrules - Nov 2, 2006EF_Team2 - Nov 3, 2006
|'counting my steps' - OCD paper
NEW - One, two, three, four; one, two, three four; Why can't I stop counting my steps? The "demon" that caused...
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|Need help with AP European History
3 - Allright, found a decent ammount of information on Health Conditions in Russia. Going in tommorow to find out if...
EssaysFalcan - Nov 1, 2006Falcan - Nov 2, 2006
|AVIATION ; ACADEMIC INTEREST & CAREER GOALS; BSC
9 - If they don't specify a particular format, I wouldn't worry about it. And yes, as far as abbreviating the...
Undergraduateinck243 - Oct 27, 2006EF_Team2 - Oct 31, 2006
|What is the career that most appeals to you?
Writing Feedbacklawenforcer - Oct 29, 2006EF_Team2 - Oct 30, 2006
|Learning To Fly by Victoria Beckam; New way of writing
Book ReportsJeff Kelps - Oct 25, 2006Jeff Kelps - Oct 30, 2006
|'The cynic is one' - UA Essay
5 - Greetings! I have to say, your writing is utterly enjoyable to read! I think BOTH your essays show...
UndergraduateViracocha - Oct 11, 2006EF_Team2 - Oct 30, 2006
|American Poetry question
2 - Greetings! When American poets are mentioned, a few standouts immediately spring to mind: Theodore Roethke, Edna St Vincent...
Poetryrania - Oct 27, 2006EF_Team2 - Oct 29, 2006
|Grad school admission - essay writing ideas?
3 - If you just need some general pointers, here they are :). Admission Essays should be a very straight...
Essaysrania - Oct 27, 2006EF_Team - Oct 27, 2006
|Graduate Studies - Disability Studies
2 - Greetings! From a quick internet search, it appears there aren't a lot of doctoral programs in disability studies...
Graduategoldencompass - Oct 25, 2006EF_Team2 - Oct 26, 2006
|An Example of a Written Response to a Dissatisfied Customer
NEW - Greetings! I am happy to respond to this customer! While we hate to have any dissatisfied clients, it...
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|Did Somebody Say Genocide?; response/summary essay
2 - Greetings! You have written an excellent, informative essay which does a good job of explaining the complex factors...
Writing Feedbackcalvinphoon - Oct 23, 2006EF_Team2 - Oct 25, 2006
|'As America closes its eyes' - Grey Decay by The Sacrosanct College Essay
2 - Greetings! You make some good points here. The subject matter is one which can engender some strong emotions....
Book ReportsThe_Sacrosanct - Oct 23, 2006EF_Team2 - Oct 25, 2006
|Cause and effect paper - getting over abuse
2 - Greetings! You have written a good essay with a strong, personal perspective. I do have some minor corrections...
Writing Feedbackjkolhagen - Oct 23, 2006EF_Team2 - Oct 23, 2006
|"military analogies" - UC Admissions Essay
4 - Greetings! I might suggest that the first two sentences are a little repetitive -- you use "describe" twice....
UndergraduateArmand - Oct 23, 2006EF_Team2 - Oct 23, 2006
|Looking for help - graduate school admission personal statement MSW program
2 - Greetings! Admissions essays can be a bit tricky because most people feel uncomfortable writing about themselves, especially when...
Essayslois - Oct 20, 2006EF_Team2 - Oct 21, 2006
|On the morning I've been waiting for all year!
2 - Greetings! Technically a "run-on sentence" is actually two complete sentences with no punctuation dividing them. I don't see...
Writing Feedbackfiguresk8tingchik - Oct 15, 2006EF_Team2 - Oct 19, 2006
|Something Deeper - What am I looking for? Why am I here? Meaning of Life?
2 - Greetings! This is an interesting topic! I'll point out a few things I noticed that you might consider...
Writing Feedbackstarphyre - Oct 17, 2006EF_Team2 - Oct 18, 2006
|FSU Admission Essay (confidence and leadership)
4 - Greetings! Yes, it is better -- it is very good! (You may have overlooked "aggression" in the last...
UndergraduateConfusedmiamiboy - Oct 17, 2006EF_Team2 - Oct 17, 2006
|Do you like to smell the strong cigarette smoke at public places? NO!
Writing Feedbackjanice - Jul 21, 2006figuresk8tingchik - Oct 15, 2006
|Story telling topic; essay based on an interview with a member of your family
12 - Greetings! Your story is definitely progressing and getting better every time you work on it! First, I'll answer...
Undergraduateeconsangel - Oct 11, 2006EF_Team2 - Oct 15, 2006
|WW1 , the Treaty of Versalilles, WW11
2 - Greetings! You have an excellent start here! I agree that your paragraphs could use just a bit of...
Essaysjoshua_arebalo - Oct 14, 2006EF_Team2 - Oct 14, 2006