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Aviation - Essay question for a job? I enjoy flying. I am a student pilot.

5 - I think I may have some facts you should know before you finalize that draft. I'm a high school...

UndergraduateCamodan - Nov 2, 2009zebrasapien - Nov 4, 2009
happiness definition and factors influence in achieving happiness - consensus of opinions

4 - As much as possible ensure your first sentence is devoid of spelling or grammatic errors. Thinhtvdhtm, iT IS THERE...

Writing Feedbackthinhtvdhtm - Sep 30, 2009west - Nov 4, 2009
rhetorical analysis of Martin Luther king letter from the Birimingham Jail

6 - No one who lives in the United States can be considered an "outsider." These are brilliant, specific arguments:...

Essaysjgore9 - Mar 17, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 4, 2009
Exposed to many different types of characters, with each, lived a different life. World, Aspirations

2 - good essay! it would be better though if you described the world you come from: your home, your school...

Undergraduateboogerface - Nov 2, 2009bbventura - Nov 4, 2009
SOP for psychology program

2 - I was born into a time of war and odd experiences, and I faced high standards set by a...

Undergraduatesimplemoment - Nov 3, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 4, 2009
Compare/Contrast Two Shakespeare Plays.

2 - Well, don't rule out the points you want to discuss. Do you mean you are going through the plays...

Book Reportssamantha00 - Nov 2, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 4, 2009
Information Technology graduate - review my professional experience

2 - Very impressive accomplishments, very good organization. You had some awkward sentences, but here are my ideas: ...with six...

Letterskajayk - Nov 2, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 4, 2009
'Aunt's cancer..' - Concise Narrative: Entrance Essay for UF

3 - Thanks so much! That really helped me a lot! I appreciate it!...

Undergraduateamramey - Nov 3, 2009amramey - Nov 4, 2009
"An experience that changed your life" speech presentation ideas?

8 - There are lots... Even better would be: Lots of amazing things that are waiting to be invented,...

SpeechesMoeMoe1 - Mar 26, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 4, 2009
proper paragraph formatting for application essays

3 - Good questions, it depends on the circumstances. If you are submitting via an online form, I think the above...

Undergraduatecasman - Nov 2, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 4, 2009
"It's a Sign" + " Artistic Interpretation"

4 - Well, about the feedback, I saw some great feedback you gave, too. I am just in the habit of...

UndergraduateNinja - Oct 29, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 4, 2009
"Good citizenship comes from good scholarship." - U Washington,Seattle (Honors)

3 - Very good! When you start with that quote, though, tell who said it or where you heard it. I...

Scholarshippmr1692 - Nov 2, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 4, 2009
'They loved it and recommended it' Why are you considering the ohio state university?

3 - College is a huge step in life with challenges to overcome and a new atmosphere. Which college I choose...

Undergraduateosu2010 - Nov 3, 2009osu2010 - Nov 4, 2009
TOEFL ESSAY--- The most important characteristic a friend should have

2 - I think you should tell the reader that your friend enabled you to complete the problems by teaching you....

Writing FeedbackHellgreeting - Nov 2, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 4, 2009
International trip alone?

2 - Awesome! I like how you connected it to college at the end, great ideas. I wonder if your intended...

Undergraduatecolorfuloving - Nov 2, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 4, 2009
King Lear essay tracing Lear's progress in Act 2

24 - Just read it! :-) It is hard to understand, so use Sparknotes to get the general idea, but then...

Book Reportssarahmk - Feb 24, 2008EF_Kevin - Nov 4, 2009
U of M-My biggest setback essay

6 - Hey, I don't know why, but this just doesn't jump out. The topic is good, but maybe the...

Undergraduatedaisy1991 - Oct 29, 2009prompter - Nov 4, 2009
What I Did When I Ran Away From Home

7 - Excellent! Thanks. I recently had the idea that people can be contributors, and then a collection of the help...

UndergraduateAwreccan - Oct 28, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 4, 2009
Why Northwestern (is it personal enough?)

3 - You might have mixed up two expressions... I think it is "fifth wheel." It is better, I think,...

Undergraduateangie127 - Nov 1, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 4, 2009
UC #1 Family influence: Bioengineering

3 - I felt puzzled as I stared up at the strange ... In my mind, I imagined the contraption...

Undergraduateowlcity24 - Nov 1, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 4, 2009
Common App Short Answer - Working at A&F - criticism welcome!

2 - Excellent, it is great that work feels like a party. Remember in the future, when you have jobs that...

Undergraduatemattsaysfierce - Nov 1, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 4, 2009
Stanford Supplement Essay: Personal Narrative on career decision

2 - You know, what my first thought was? I thought, I would not want my surgery to be performed by...

Undergraduatekart00cj - Nov 1, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 4, 2009
Obsession with time - Stanford Roomate short essay response

5 - This can sometimes become problematic, as I find just relaxing extremely difficult. Lots of people find relaxing difficult....

Undergraduatekart00cj - Nov 1, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 4, 2009
Arguementative/Persuasive essay on camping

2 - How about "camping can take many forms" instead of "definitions?" Camping to one person can mean seclusion in...

Writing Feedbackbrianw - Nov 1, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 4, 2009
"My Mission Trip" - UF prompt

3 - Graciously , I walked over to ... I think you should also talk about the part time job...

Undergraduatelilminkzmayb - Nov 1, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 4, 2009
essay on Scuba Diving(rough): Common App Essay

5 - I wrote about a similar experience under topic of my choice. When I had an admissions coach read my...

Undergraduatepeekachoo - Oct 24, 2009redsox34 - Nov 4, 2009
"More than meets the eye" - essay for Chicago U.

4 - ^Because...that is a unique ability, as most people fail to make eye contact during a conversation? Overall,...

Undergraduatelisandrag - Nov 1, 2009Liebe - Nov 4, 2009
I was going to be alone for most of the summer; Significant life experience

2 - Hi David, Nice work! First and foremost, I love how your sense of humor really feeds this piece...

Undergraduatethebabybull - Nov 4, 2009ivyeyesediting - Nov 4, 2009
Non-academic subjects should be removed from school. Agree or not?

6 - thanks so muhc Mustafa1991 as you see, my E is not good, so i cannot point out my own...

Writing Feedbackthinhtvdhtm - Nov 3, 2009thinhtvdhtm - Nov 4, 2009
'Finite element method and Material science' Engineering statement of purpose

7 - Jean253, thanks a lot for your response. Basically I want to do a masters in civil engineering,...

Graduaterabita - Oct 26, 2009rabita - Nov 4, 2009
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