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Open topic - Common App Personal Statement (Thursday afternoons)

3 - Approach editing for concision the same way you would approach a chess strategy. But, instead of asking, "How can...

UndergraduateiHasWritersBloc - Aug 11, 2009EF_Simone - Aug 11, 2009
'naval budget' - MaCaulay Honors College Essay

9 - That would be great. Welcome back....

Undergraduatemobious_1 - Dec 9, 2008EF_Simone - Aug 11, 2009
Hofstra Essay - I am GSL of THS

6 - Copy-paste exactly what you'd like to edit or remove....

Undergraduatemobious_1 - Nov 15, 2008EF_Team - Aug 11, 2009
'blind to many of the things' - someone who has made an impact on my life

18 - Sean and I both advised you to avoid this topic. Sean explained why very clearly: Reading this essay is...

UndergraduateNorisGR - Aug 7, 2009EF_Simone - Aug 11, 2009
"Whatever you do, own it!" - UCF admission - Why did you choose to apply to UCF

13 - Flows well but I agree with everyone and listen to Sean....

Undergraduatebmw - Jul 31, 2009NorisGR - Aug 11, 2009
"how the brain and mind function" - Evaluate a significant experience, & impact.

8 - I agree this essays really good, especially since it flows nicely into your interest in psychology. It adds a...

Undergraduatesweetchic6893 - Aug 9, 2009iHasWritersBloc - Aug 11, 2009
"I can bring my plenty" - Florida State University Undergraduate Admission Essay

4 - thanks for the compliments and the help.im going to try and change a few things....

UndergraduateCute4life14 - Aug 10, 2009Cute4life14 - Aug 11, 2009
I'm much younger than everybody in my class; Edison state college adm. essay

4 - thanks that helped alot! im gonna right it over, then post it on here and see if it gets...

Undergraduatejokichrun - Aug 10, 2009jokichrun - Aug 11, 2009
"My transformation" - accomplishments that have helped define you as a person

3 - Everything in your essay happens without explaination as to why it is important or how it effected you and...

Undergraduatejulien15 - Aug 11, 2009Llamapoop123 - Aug 11, 2009
"around my family" - university of central florida essay #2

5 - ya i decided to start completly over, it was my first try at it. thanks for the help though!...

Undergraduatefortmizery166 - Aug 10, 2009fortmizery166 - Aug 11, 2009
How a computer science degree from the UNIVERSITY OF PEOPLE induce my career growth?

4 - As I think, university teaches us the basic knowledge and skills for future's career. Besides, thinking strategies are developed...

EssaysKINEDIAO - Jul 28, 2009mathsam - Aug 11, 2009
Stanford's Secondary (medical)

4 - Earlier, I was never that great a fan of your essays. This is definitely your strongest and is quite...

Undergraduatevietfun2k - Aug 10, 2009Liebe - Aug 11, 2009
Columbia Scholastic Press Association - UC Prompt #1 Essay

3 - I personally think you do not answer the question at all. 'Describe the world you come from -...

Undergraduatetaramar - Aug 11, 2009Liebe - Aug 11, 2009
Beijing Huijia Private School - My commonapp Personal statement

4 - I think you have paid too much effort in describing the setback you met in setting up the club....

UndergraduateVictor A - Aug 10, 2009tiantian12 - Aug 11, 2009
"From China to America" - UCF admission essay

9 - Hmm... I'm not sure about bullet points within an admission essay, but I agree that the process of outlining...

Undergraduateminixiaojun - Aug 8, 2009EF_Simone - Aug 10, 2009
MSU Personal Statement and Scholarship Essay

4 - Actually, 36 is OK. Twenty, thirty, forty, and the like should be spelled out, but compound numbers like thirty-six...

Scholarshipmichellemariex5 - Aug 10, 2009EF_Simone - Aug 10, 2009
Grad School Statement of Purpose Critique (passion for academics and researc)

11 - You're very welcome! To show your gratitude, pitch in and help somebody else with their essay. There are quite...

Graduatemallik777 - Aug 8, 2009EF_Simone - Aug 10, 2009
"An abandoned restaurant" - UF Undergraduate Admission Essay - Critiques?

2 - Your introduction is very strong, and your narrative is solid. I'd like to see you go beyond the usual...

Undergraduatebuzzett - Aug 10, 2009EF_Simone - Aug 10, 2009
Stanford "Intellectually engaging idea" Essay

6 - i agree...

Undergraduatebatxc - Aug 9, 2009wells - Aug 10, 2009
My Struggle - My pursuit for happiness (University of Florida)

9 - it's alright, i asked some of my friends to read it, and they say it's kind of vague, that...

Undergraduateyibo829 - Aug 9, 2009yibo829 - Aug 10, 2009
"A level-headed individual" - UF Admission Essay.

4 - Thank you. =] And no, my mother didn't. By that time, tony was 18 and he moved out. he...

UndergraduateAlishalagana - Aug 10, 2009Alishalagana - Aug 10, 2009
Barrier between me and my dream career; UT AUSTIN; SOP

10 - I added a paragraph that explains why I am applying to UT's liberal arts school instead of their school...

Undergraduatesweets13087 - Jun 10, 2009sweets13087 - Aug 10, 2009
"It is the artist, not the critic,* who gives society something of lasting value"

3 - What confuses me is why your friend agreed to have YOU post HIS essay. Why could he not do...

Writing Feedbackmathsam - Aug 10, 2009Llamapoop123 - Aug 10, 2009
Results of publicly funded scientific studies for free -help for GRE issue essay

4 - Ah, sorry I missed that. Well, then, I'd say that the essay is OK but not spectacular. For...

Writing FeedbackUlribe - Aug 10, 2009EF_Simone - Aug 10, 2009
Scholarship essay question help, your sense of humor, your personality

5 - Yes, that's a start. From this, we can learn that you are observant, empathic, and culturally sensitive. We also...

Scholarshipwoodhorse22 - Aug 9, 2009EF_Simone - Aug 10, 2009
A handwritten letter describing my family and educational ambitions - admission

11 - I think you are simply not understanding my suggestion, which is to creatively use the possibilities opened up by...

UndergraduateAlice_ - Aug 6, 2009EF_Simone - Aug 10, 2009
Creating flexible economic fields essay

2 - It is not a secret that * does not have enough natural resources, for example oil, gas or metals....

Undergraduatevardansem - Aug 10, 2009EF_Simone - Aug 10, 2009
Literature Review in Software Engineering

2 - In general, one does not have to cite references for common knowledge. In a literature review, the focus should...

Essayshtetnaing - Aug 10, 2009EF_Simone - Aug 10, 2009
Personal Essay - Travels; I have inherited my mother's wanderlust

4 - I love experiencing the magic and draw of various cultures, each with their own flavor and distinctions which seizes...

Writing Feedbacksarahstu - Aug 9, 2009Liebe - Aug 10, 2009
common app short (activities) essay: strict word limit??

10 - If no maximum is given, then in theory you can make it as long as you want. However, it...

Essayscecil - Aug 5, 2009EF_Sean - Aug 9, 2009
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