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Do you think that you are a particularly suitable candidate for an award

4 - The length is excessive. Cut stuff out ruthlessly, as Kevin suggested. Coherency seems okay, though I tend to...

Undergraduateajayemisi - Feb 16, 2009EF_Sean - Feb 17, 2009
Essay On Comparisons of Trials and Their Respective Jury Proceedings

4 - If you are going to use 12 Angry Men as the text, you need to find a trial where...

Writing FeedbackSeanMasih - Feb 12, 2009EF_Sean - Feb 17, 2009
essay- sell something absurd using propaganda techniques

7 - If the important thing is to live in the now, to seize the moment, then keeping track of time,...

Essaysemaysi - Feb 12, 2009EF_Sean - Feb 17, 2009
U. of Wash. -- Transfer Application Essay (Personal Statement)

8 - Great second draft. Make sure you use tenses consistently, though -- you tend to drift between two different ones...

Undergraduategarrett - Feb 13, 2009EF_Sean - Feb 16, 2009
Letter to a friend - a photograph of an important school occasion

7 - Good job. It meets all of the requirements listed in the assignment instructions you posted. Here are a couple...

Essaysceberus - Feb 11, 2009EF_Sean - Feb 16, 2009
Need a catchy funny title for a paper on desire causing motivation?

6 - The only criteria listed in the original post were that the title be "catchy" and "funny." I focused more...

Research Paperspetstar21 - Feb 12, 2009EF_Sean - Feb 16, 2009
Honours Social Work (privilege, power)

5 - I will discuss the P.C.S levels of power drawn on by Foucault's interpretation of power together with an understanding......

Writing Feedbacknaomi - Feb 15, 2009EF_Kevin - Feb 16, 2009
BYU-What sets you apart from other applicants on unique life experience

4 - I feel that essay has some problem. 3 paragraphs above You only talk about how you tried to improve....

Undergraduatesanjaygir - Jan 30, 2009shine lee - Feb 16, 2009
"I was running" essay. Grammar and punctuation help.

7 - thanks akern, really good advice. :)...

Writing Feedbacknewsha31 - Feb 11, 2009newsha31 - Feb 15, 2009
Common app Short Answer (cyber competition)

17 - thank you all! I really appreciate your advice! happy valentine's day!...

UndergraduateNoob in writing - Feb 10, 2009Noob in writing - Feb 15, 2009
essay describing activities sinnce secondary school

3 - Thank you vey much for corrections......

Undergraduatebidurtiwari - Feb 15, 2009bidurtiwari - Feb 15, 2009
Career goals and importance of college education in attaining them

12 - To Kevin- Thank you so much your advice will help me make my essay more consistent and organized. To...

Undergraduate4ever2bleed - Oct 12, 20084ever2bleed - Feb 15, 2009
Describe your educational and career goals - a summer research program

2 - On the one hand, I hope to work as an inspector for food and drink in Asian markets. ...

Undergraduatedukle - Feb 15, 2009EF_Kevin - Feb 15, 2009
Geo Project - Vehicles in the Lower Mainland

3 - Hi Pedro, The conclusion should be tell how this all adds up. After you researched the work that...

Writing Feedbackvipao - Feb 14, 2009EF_Kevin - Feb 15, 2009
Global Warming - Research Paper, trouble writing an intro

5 - Thanks so much for the feedback.. I really appreciate it...

Research Papersac995 - Feb 13, 2009ac995 - Feb 15, 2009
A letter to my first-year roommate. I have no idea what to talk about.

19 - Tell him how cool or nerdy you are:P. What awesome gadgets you have which you can share with him...

EssaysSofia - Dec 10, 2008ceberus - Feb 15, 2009
'my first art class; photography' - Statement of Purpose - Design Planning major

3 - thanks, it;s statement of purpose. I will work more on that. ^^...

Graduatelovekei - Feb 12, 2009lovekei - Feb 13, 2009
Marking Stressed and Unstressed Syllables in Blank Verse Poetry

4 - I see what you mean about the meter not being what you would expect. The lines seem to drift...

Grammar, UsageChristy0067 - Feb 12, 2009EF_Sean - Feb 13, 2009
MICA application: (Autobiographical Essay)

3 - Haha, thanks Kevin. Those are some good points, I know I tend not to explain a lot when there's...

Undergraduateflio191 - Feb 13, 2009flio191 - Feb 13, 2009
Close Reading of Othello

4 - In the meanwhile, Othello has resolved himself to death , which contrasts with his optimistic faith in the other...

Essayschipmunk - Feb 10, 2009EF_Kevin - Feb 13, 2009
PERSONAL ESSAY what books and reading mean to me

5 - Knowing I will soon enter into the life of a University student -- if I get accepted, that is...

Writing Feedbackhannahkim91 - Feb 12, 2009EF_Kevin - Feb 13, 2009
U of Michigan Short Answer - Diversity, engineering

5 - For [A] I think you should omit the first 3 sentenses since the prompt does not ask for this....

Undergraduatejucks0r - Jan 31, 2009Baiwanyu - Feb 13, 2009
'The Lord spoke to me' - UW transfer personal statement

5 - My friend inspired me to follow my interest by taking up a few courses on visual communication. Hey,...

Undergraduategookie - Feb 11, 2009EF_Kevin - Feb 12, 2009
Living a simple but meaningful life is a lifestyle which you must choose.

7 - Thank you. I did make many revisons and changed the thesis around. I restrcured the essay and narrowed my...

Writing Feedbackjasonmuraira - Feb 10, 2009jasonmuraira - Feb 12, 2009
The first time i crossed the road by myself

5 - ... and for a six year old ice cream is not something to just let go of. The sun...

Writing Feedbacknewsha31 - Feb 11, 2009EF_Kevin - Feb 12, 2009
Essay on describing a scene in my life (that last time i saw my friends)

7 - For the hundredth time on that night my hand slipped down into my purse;... My heart calmed, although...

Writing Feedbacknewsha31 - Feb 5, 2009EF_Kevin - Feb 12, 2009
Essay on empty space; I live a fast paced life

6 - If I went outside of my room, their laid the television... change to: there laid the television... ...

Writing Feedbackfitz1901 - Jan 29, 2009SeanMasih - Feb 12, 2009
Essay: A Crab in the Sand

5 - I loved this essay. You do a fantastic job of letting the reader know what exactly was going on....

Writing FeedbackJoey11235 - Feb 11, 2009SeanMasih - Feb 12, 2009
Management Essay (successful or unsuccessful organizational behavior)

6 - For all these above, do you have class material and readings to explain them? If so, learn them,...

Essaysshortyyred - Jan 31, 2009EF_Kevin - Feb 11, 2009
SOP for Information Systems: e-Business Technology MSc

2 - I think it is important to show that you are ready, and that you are serious, by spending a...

GraduateEmmA - Feb 11, 2009EF_Kevin - Feb 11, 2009
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