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'Smart, fun, initiating' - VILLANOVA ESSAY

3 - just a suggestion at the conclusion maybe replace you and your with I? as in make it more...

UndergraduateSofia - Jan 7, 2009zowzow - Jan 7, 2009
My expectation of college is more obvious, and my goal evolves gradually from uncertain to definite

2 - As I have graduated from high school for 1 year, I have considered more about college education and my...

Undergraduategdtbj2008 - Jan 7, 2009zowzow - Jan 7, 2009
'Exam failure' - long essay of Michigan: setback

7 - yes you need to find different words to say the same thing - repeating a certain word makes it...

Undergraduatejustinwang - Dec 27, 2008zowzow - Jan 7, 2009
Fellowship Essay - Graduate Arabic - University of Maryland

NEW - 2. The essay should not exceed 1000 words. 1. What is your reason for applying for a Flagship...

Graduatemwalk9682 - Jan 7, 2009 -
We should sense the world as it is; extracurricular activity, community service essay

2 - When I was in fifth grade, my teacher organized a class visit to Welfare House. It was first time...

Undergraduategdtbj2008 - Jan 7, 2009shine lee - Jan 7, 2009
USC essay- "to be a successful Hispanic", let me know what you think

18 - Ok thanks! Yeah I wish I would have made those changes actually. But oh well, thanks!...

Undergraduatelattent - Nov 29, 2008lattent - Jan 6, 2009
I just realized that it is my grandfather's influence that has molded me into what I am today

7 - Yes, the rule for powerful communication is: Say it, explain it, and then say it again. That way, the...

UndergraduateSlime - Jan 3, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 6, 2009
common app essay, topic of your choice ("Mona Lisa smiles")

4 - heres some suggestions. At least Mona Lisa's smile is a suggestion of happiness. My smile is sometimes...

Undergraduatelee337 - Jan 5, 2009icemaster2340 - Jan 6, 2009
Common Application essay- Money

3 - Linnus is absolutely right! you can tell us one of your experience with money stuff (something like that) which...

Undergraduatemenamilad - Jan 6, 2009shine lee - Jan 6, 2009
Sharps and Flats - common app essay...

10 - well, here is a few suggestions, not the best but its all I got. If there is a...

Undergraduateonindo - Jan 6, 2009icemaster2340 - Jan 6, 2009
Father's love is deep and silent, and always there it is; he influenced me

3 - just the ending... if i may suggest a variation. Love is to care, to understand and to inherit....

Undergraduategdtbj2008 - Jan 6, 2009icemaster2340 - Jan 6, 2009
U Washington, How to contribute to this community

3 - "I hope to invite schoolmates to my hometown to see how exploded our buses and supermarkets are." Exploded is...

UndergraduateBaiwanyu - Jan 6, 2009EF_Sean - Jan 6, 2009
What is a book that has inspired you? (Pourquoi)

7 - Pourquoi is the French word for why" "In fact, however, there are just too few things in our...

Book ReportsEcho - Dec 6, 2008EF_Sean - Jan 6, 2009
writing technique advices for the essay " regular and election days"

8 - It is better than it was, certainly. You now sound more thoughtful, and have gone into more depth on...

Writing Feedbackcraver - Jan 2, 2009EF_Sean - Jan 6, 2009
FSU essay ("traditions and customs that have become a part of my life")

11 - True, if you start playing around with formatting, you can make an essay seem slightly longer or shorter than...

Undergraduatevk123 - Jan 2, 2009EF_Sean - Jan 6, 2009
'In love with the sky' - Main essay. Influential experience in ur life

21 - You have several options, but one approach would be to say that when you first came here, you found...

Undergraduatenewsha31 - Jan 3, 2009EF_Sean - Jan 6, 2009
Colorado State University Admissions

4 - Kevin's suggestions are excellent, especially the part about beginning with "Now would be a good time to explain how...

UndergraduateCokeShred - Jan 5, 2009EF_Sean - Jan 6, 2009
Allusion. Film as lit class

8 - Remember that the best allusions are indirect. In other words, make sure that your reference doesn't actually include the...

Essaysnewsha31 - Jan 4, 2009EF_Sean - Jan 6, 2009
common app essay: my father

2 - Until I was 15, I thought that I was really lucky to have a father like my daddy. ...

Undergraduateshine lee - Jan 6, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 6, 2009
ideas or starting a Senses Poem

6 - If you didn't start with a sixth sense, I would start with a sense other than your eyes. I...

Poetrydwagirl43 - Oct 29, 2008EF_Constance - Jan 6, 2009
UT essay ("a pair of the beautiful earnings")

7 - Great, it is strong as long as there is at least one sentence that powerfully stells the central truth...

Undergraduatetasmia01 - Jan 6, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 6, 2009
Odyssey essay; 'Sure God created man before woman...'

6 - Well, for a high school or undergraduate essay... really for any essay... quotes can be added in at the...

Writing Feedbacksczyra - Jan 5, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 6, 2009
Peony in love is my favorite book. Take a read of this essay

5 - Jerry, that is some great advice. Actually, the thesis sentence often goes at the end of the first paragraph....

Writing Feedbackjenf3r - Jan 5, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 6, 2009
Writing a term paper in a Rogerian style..

4 - First, introduce the issue in an intro paragraph. Tell what the issue is, and give a little description (in...

EssaysRaYaNe - Jan 5, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 6, 2009
response paragraph for the essay "why we crave horror movies"

4 - Hi Thanks a lot for your corrections. This is my essay i really want to know whether i have...

Writing Feedbackcraver - Jan 2, 2009craver - Jan 6, 2009
USC essay "My best friend gone slim" - Tell us about an external influence that affected you

4 - thanks for all the useful comments! i have also found it quite lengthy, thanks for pointing out that too...

Undergraduatesolomonsun - Jan 5, 2009solomonsun - Jan 6, 2009
BYU short essays - what set you apart from other applications

3 - A346 already has helped you correct some of the wording but try to have the essay flow a little...

Undergraduatelee337 - Jan 5, 2009zoomkobe - Jan 6, 2009
UW short essay - "race and culture at school"

5 - Your topic is, in general terms, the sort of thing you want to write about for this sort of...

Undergraduateichid99 - Jan 5, 2009EF_Sean - Jan 5, 2009
Entrance Essay - Master of Public Affairs

4 - You've done a great job writing this essay. The grammar is nearly flawless, and your style flows smoothly. I...

Graduatemkp622 - Dec 28, 2008EF_Sean - Jan 5, 2009
VCU essay: "Education and Life: A Personal Statement." In this essay, discuss your educational goals

8 - In keeping with Kevin's suggestion, you might want to describe your artwork in more detail, and then explore the...

Undergraduatejd6365 - Jan 4, 2009EF_Sean - Jan 5, 2009
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