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"Why architecture?" essay - Rice

3 - Thanks! I just want to make sure it's coherent and I don't sound like I'm jumping from place to...

Undergraduatepriscileung - Dec 26, 2008priscileung - Dec 27, 2008
"Prevention is better than cure" IELTS essay - much band score I can get?

2 - This concept represents the opportunity to avoid many diseases if we take proactive steps before a problem forms. Previously,...

Writing Feedbackkazi - Dec 27, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 27, 2008
Nerd at heart - Why UChicago

4 - Oh, I'm sorry about that, but there is no changing posts, just editing that everyone can see. We need...

Undergraduatexperceptionx - Dec 26, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 27, 2008
'political science and Obama's field office' - Cornell- college of arts and sciences

3 - i just got access to a computer here and Mexico, and I read through your response. I had corrected...

Undergraduategmailblows31 - Dec 25, 2008gmailblows31 - Dec 27, 2008
'I can contribute tons in college' - Lehigh University Supplement Questions

NEW - As you researched and visited colleges and universities, why did you decide to apply to Lehigh? Please give specific...

Undergraduaten00bl3t - Dec 27, 2008 -
What is your favourite word and why? - Uni of Virginia

15 - hmm... i think i almost liked your first version better... the second version makes you "haha" outlook on life...

Undergraduatewongxy - Nov 26, 2008mbhaire - Dec 27, 2008
My father said my essay sucked (Why Engineering? Why Cornell)

6 - Engineering reminds me of the particle accelerators that smash atoms together to make extraordinary products. If we put the...

Undergraduatechuliuxiang - Dec 26, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 27, 2008
Alex and Su essay (the Monkey King and Alexander the Great) common app

6 - I applaud your extra effort. When you feel inspiration come over you, always use it! Put the comma...

Undergraduatejenf3r - Nov 24, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 27, 2008
[BYU] What to write in a brief biography?

6 - Good! It's funny how, in order to achieve your goals, sometimes you need to be smart and tell people...

UndergraduateAmyRemus - Dec 19, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 27, 2008
Should we hide feeling or not?

2 - I am very above-board and talkative. I tend to express what I think . However, hiding emotions also has...

UndergraduatePuck - Dec 26, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 27, 2008
'disciplinary lessons' - Tufts - Short Answer

6 - Yes, I second that! You guys are great! To all of you who offer such meaningful peer reviews, please...

Undergraduatehello123 - Dec 25, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 27, 2008
Essay: "What is art for me?"

4 - Those are just some mistakes you made....

Writing FeedbackPower_Hammer - Dec 27, 2008Angela629 - Dec 27, 2008
Thesis - For Baby boomers

4 - Try looking at articles on Google Scholar, and use a word search for "baby boomers" and "behavior." be sure...

Essayssarahmk - Aug 12, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 27, 2008
'I began to finalize my own college list' - Why Carnegie?

12 - Cornell harbors brilliant professors and a diverse student body that I know will stimulate me to be my best....

Undergraduate123abc - Dec 23, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 27, 2008
common app short answer (work at the hospital)

3 - Having worked at the hospital for almost two years has helped me prepare for the real world, at least...

Undergraduatejoke0611 - Dec 26, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 27, 2008
Common App-Significant Experience- To jump or not to jump (suggestions pls)

5 - I was not the kind of girl who enjoyed going without showers for a week, surviving on the staple...

Undergraduatecutiepotutie25 - Dec 26, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 27, 2008
As inventory and supply manager of the restaurant, such is a typical work day for me.

3 - It had been a long tiring walk to the restaurant from the Port Authority. I finally reached the restaurant...

Undergraduateakashnegi - Dec 26, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 27, 2008
'I came from a past marked by war and political corruption in my homeland' - UVA supplement essay

3 - My parents, during the Salvadorian civil war, belonged to two opposing political factions, embodying the spirit of Romeo &...

Undergraduategmanz - Dec 26, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 27, 2008
U of wisconsin essay - "knowledge is boundless"

3 - Heyy...I wrote another one...i felt this answers more of the question... The University of Wisconsin values an educational...

Undergraduateprincetongirl - Dec 23, 2008princetongirl - Dec 27, 2008
Common application essay (why the caged bird sings) --is it too typical?

4 - Only the establishing of the timeline. Once you have fixed that and the metaphors, you can post the revised...

UndergraduateHg4ever - Dec 26, 2008EF_Sean - Dec 27, 2008
JHU essay - why this major

3 - Your opening dialogue now ties in to your introduction much more clearly. Grammatically, "CEO, the check that we received...

UndergraduateSapphire - Dec 26, 2008EF_Sean - Dec 27, 2008
Business Law Essay feedback (Stevens, Wiley & Co)

4 - Yes, these are supposed to be grounded in your course readings. Good luck! It's hard, but it can be...

Writing FeedbackTom - Dec 26, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 27, 2008
Biomedical Engineering at the McCormick School of Engineering and Applied Science - NU essay

3 - The revised version is definitely clearer. You could smooth out the grammar like this: I wish to study...

Undergraduatechuliuxiang - Dec 26, 2008EF_Sean - Dec 27, 2008
"My vacation of 2007" - Princeton Supplemental Essay

8 - Thanks for pointing out my mistakes. When I read my essay, I knew there were something that has to...

UndergraduateAngela629 - Dec 18, 2008Angela629 - Dec 27, 2008
Common App Essay- 'Passion'

5 - Thanks for all the comments! They have been very useful (:...

Undergraduatechickpig - Dec 21, 2008chickpig - Dec 27, 2008
College of Arts and Sciences- Cornell Essay (need advice on shortening)

4 - Actually, after reviewing the essay, I find that the front portion of paragraph 1 is still relevant because it...

Undergraduatechickpig - Dec 20, 2008chickpig - Dec 27, 2008
Upenn Essays - the courses of study that most interest me

6 - Hmm mcwingo20, I'm not too sure how to fit in 'interesting catchers' for an essay prompt like this because...

Undergraduatechickpig - Dec 19, 2008chickpig - Dec 27, 2008
MIT (Optional Essay: Describe something you've built)

3 - Thanks for the advice. Are there any other grammatical errors and do you think this is an effective essay?...

Undergraduateocer22891 - Dec 26, 2008ocer22891 - Dec 27, 2008
General essay question - Stories

4 - I think its very important that the point can relate all three stories though! I wrote an essay in...

Undergraduatet3h50 - Dec 25, 2008shadiali - Dec 27, 2008
undergrad essay, Pratt is the best option for me

2 - This essay suffers from numerous grammatical problems, but before you revise for grammar and style, I would advise rewriting...

Undergraduatelorerainbow - Dec 26, 2008EF_Sean - Dec 26, 2008
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