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| [BYU] What to write in a brief biography?
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| 'disciplinary lessons' - Tufts - Short Answer
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| Essay: "What is art for me?"
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| common app short answer (work at the hospital)
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| Common App-Significant Experience- To jump or not to jump (suggestions pls)
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| As inventory and supply manager of the restaurant, such is a typical work day for me.
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| 'I came from a past marked by war and political corruption in my homeland' - UVA supplement essay
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| U of wisconsin essay - "knowledge is boundless"
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| Common application essay (why the caged bird sings) --is it too typical?
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| JHU essay - why this major
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| Business Law Essay feedback (Stevens, Wiley & Co)
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| Biomedical Engineering at the McCormick School of Engineering and Applied Science - NU essay
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| "My vacation of 2007" - Princeton Supplemental Essay
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| Common App Essay- 'Passion'
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| College of Arts and Sciences- Cornell Essay (need advice on shortening)
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| Upenn Essays - the courses of study that most interest me
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| MIT (Optional Essay: Describe something you've built)
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| General essay question - Stories
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| undergrad essay, Pratt is the best option for me
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