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Personal statement...how i became an adult in the past 2 years.

NEW - I am very proud that I will be the first in my family to pursue a college degree. During...

Undergraduatelakai84 - Oct 18, 2008 -
Diligent and perseverance are the most important qualities - my statement

NEW - Diligent and perseverance are the most important qualities that are necessary for me as a student. For the past...

Undergraduateawakenlion - Oct 18, 2008 -
IT achievement - University of Miami Admission Essay

2 - Good morning. My mechanical suggestions are as follows: First, make sure that you are capitalizing only proper...

Undergraduatelfmasieri - Oct 15, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 18, 2008
help on the play Doctor Faustus by Chritopher Marlowe

4 - Good morning. I suggest beginning your research by doing an internet search using the keywords "Marlow" and "Faustus"...

Essaysrimi - Dec 26, 2007EF_Team5 - Oct 18, 2008
UF ESSAY: "meaningful event" - Upward Bound

3 - thank you For your much needed corrections....

Undergraduatecollegeicntwait - Oct 13, 2008collegeicntwait - Oct 18, 2008
"Congratulations! You are going to be a mother!"

9 - OK, I'm assuming the above is the new conclusion. One suggestion: "...talented, a natural leader, and overall...

Undergraduateccn7 - Oct 15, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 18, 2008
"College was the best time of my life." -UCF APPLICATION ESSAY

3 - thanks!!...

Undergraduatevivalavida - Oct 17, 2008vivalavida - Oct 17, 2008
Private Eloquence/ PAST EXPERIENCE

3 - I like the changes. It is more streamlined and much cleaner. A good response to the prompt....

Writing Feedbackcowman809 - Oct 16, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 17, 2008
how does Penn make a perfect match for you?

4 - I don't think so; you've done a very thorough job as it is. I think you've covered all of...

Undergraduategbtl - Oct 13, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 17, 2008
Name a professor with whom you would like to study or conduct research with

5 - Good evening. Let's see... I suggest taking out some of the ex tenuous detail and condensing your...

Undergraduategbtl - Oct 13, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 17, 2008
Obstacles or 'bumps in the road in your academic or personal life

4 - Sure! "...and I'm confident that..." "...economical crisis don't help..." "...center and I've noticed..." I...

Undergraduatefernaj13 - Oct 14, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 17, 2008
teleporting mentally to a different world

4 - That would work as well. Generally, whatever tense is more natural and comes easier to you will reflect itself...

Undergraduatemickeygirl - Oct 14, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 17, 2008
FSU admissions essay- worthy enough to attend Florida State University?

4 - Good evening. Opening with a question here is fine; you kind of just have to take the tone...

Undergraduatebethany_shphrd - Oct 14, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 17, 2008
"I am well prepared and primed" - FSU essay

3 - I like the new addition. I suggest changing the middle of the first sentence to be a little less...

Undergraduatecnwilliams - Oct 14, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 17, 2008
essay about myself, when/where I was born, my study, hobbies, etc.

2 - "...I am the baggiest one." What does "baggiest" describe here? Do you mean biggest? I'm not sure... :) ...

Writing Feedbackcrawling - Oct 17, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 17, 2008
Cigarretes has been banned from public environment. Agree or Disagree?

NEW - Essay topic: Cigarretes has been banned from public environment. Agree or Disagree?? Around the world people are concerned...

Writing Feedbackvipao - Oct 17, 2008 -
this paper significantly transformed me - pls edit this common app essay

2 - "...freshman ..." "...editor-in-chief ..." In regards to content, you are very concise and organized. Your piece is...

Undergraduateds816 - Oct 17, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 17, 2008
How to safe the Earth + Personal reflection of my presentation - Essays

4 - Good afternoon. From your posting, it seems that this prompt requests specific information from specific material that you...

Writing Feedbackssdd - Nov 28, 2007EF_Team5 - Oct 17, 2008
how has your family influenced who you are? UCF admission essay

NEW - Please, tell me all i'm doing wrong in my paper. I have to submit my application for xfer today....

Undergraduatefernaj13 - Oct 17, 2008 -
my summer trip to Trinidad & Tobago - UF Essay Evaluation

2 - Good morning. Please note your other posting for mechanical and grammatical suggestions, as they still apply to this...

Undergraduateking723 - Oct 16, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 17, 2008
Take advantage of every moment ; Colombia Essay/ Rutgers

NEW - Take advantage of every moment is what my older sister would always tell me. When I was 14 years...

Writing Feedbackcynthia180 - Oct 17, 2008 -
Need advice on essay question- "Unique characteristics and experiences"

3 - Hey, thanks alot. I think you are doing a great job on this boarding helping everyone out. I think...

UndergraduateGuruKid - Oct 15, 2008GuruKid - Oct 17, 2008
"I have played piano" - Chopin's Second Ballade

6 - Thanks!...

Undergraduatepianolegend91 - Oct 9, 2008pianolegend91 - Oct 16, 2008
UF Essay - "Ready for My Unpredictable Future"

4 - And... I want to delete this thread. How do I do that? I am going to post up another...

Undergraduateesthie_ - Oct 14, 2008esthie_ - Oct 16, 2008
GED Practice: Discuss the influence of rock music on young people

2 - "Because rock music is good entertainment for everyone, especially young people, it influences good physical condition, improvement of exercise...

Undergraduatefisherman - Oct 16, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 16, 2008
Essay for Fellowship-INFORMATION TECHNOLOGY MANAGEMENT

5 - Good afternoon. This is a very good start. You've done a great job explaining "the role of family...

Graduatefara - Oct 7, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 16, 2008
CORNELL COMMON APP ESSAY; To feel desired is a primary biological need in life

2 - Good afternoon. My only suggestion is to make sure you are only capitalizing proper nouns and the first...

Undergraduateakhan11 - Oct 16, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 16, 2008
What experiences have led you to select your professional field?

2 - "Zip, zap, zoom! " went my..." "...does my Play Station give way every..." I suggest wrapping the...

Writing Feedbackkimaya - Oct 16, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 16, 2008
"struggling to comprehend my nemesis" - a significant experience

2 - Good afternoon. This is an excellent essay! Mechanically and grammatically clean, organized, fluid, with a great story for...

Undergraduatecaliforniagirl - Oct 16, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 16, 2008
An unexpected act of kindness

4 - Good afternoon. Putting this piece at the beginning would be a great idea; it's a "hook" and sets...

Writing Feedbacklearningtowrite - Oct 15, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 16, 2008
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