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Starting an essay, define key features of mental health

2 - Good evening. Because this essay deals with specific material that you and your classmates have exclusive access to...

Essaysminab - Oct 10, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 10, 2008
Upenn short question - "explain why"?

2 - In regards to the prompt, it seems like they want you to name a specific professor that you want...

Undergraduatewongxy - Oct 10, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 10, 2008
An experience through which you have gained respect for you differencies.

2 - Good afternoon. The middle paragraph seems a bit too stiff for my liking; how about softening it? Something...

Undergraduateelthano - Oct 10, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 10, 2008
What led you to choose the area of academic interest you chose?

2 - Your content provides a good reply to the prompt, but your mechanics need some work. I suggest a refresher...

Undergraduateelthano - Oct 10, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 10, 2008
"Life can be full of many obstacle and surprises" - Admission essay

5 - Ok, thanks a lot for your help! I appreciate your time and effort....

UndergraduateSammy - Oct 9, 2008Sammy - Oct 10, 2008
Live a life that is pleasing to my Lord and Savior, Jesus Christ, FSU essay

5 - wow like your essay a lot good ideas, nice flow good luck...

Undergraduatebeccaboo3290 - Oct 8, 2008pilla2008 - Oct 10, 2008
Praising others - necessary part of life? Sat Essay

2 - Good morning. This is a great essay; your example of the experiment with the kids highlights your stance...

Writing FeedbackgodsendE - Oct 10, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 10, 2008
FSU essay: "Vires", has been forefront in my life

2 - Just a general comment: perhaps refreshing yourself with the rules of comma usage could benefit you; you seem to...

Undergraduatebailey - Oct 9, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 9, 2008
personal history - FSU to get accepted in college

2 - I'm not sure what the prompt is, so I am not sure how you would like me to proceed....

Undergraduatelecokr - Oct 9, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 9, 2008
Describe a setback that you have faced (brother) - essay

7 - beccaboo3290's tips are excellent! Good job guys! The main thing about formality in academic writing is to stay...

Undergraduateelthano - Oct 8, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 9, 2008
Summary On Pain Meds - paper

2 - Good evening. This looks like the start of a really great paper. You have solid information provided from...

Writing Feedbackhunnybun39 - Oct 9, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 9, 2008
Luncheon to honor the winners of the Boca Delray Music Society - UF

NEW - Any feedback is appreciated. I have a concern with my middle section. I'd like to make the middle...

Undergraduatesimpleterms - Oct 9, 2008 -
"Wings of Wax" - Emerson College Admissions Essay

NEW - We understand that the college application process often feels stressful, when it should be an opportunity for self-reflection. Stop...

UndergraduateBostonbound - Oct 9, 2008 -
"... becoming Superman" - FSU Essay..last one I promise

NEW - And last but not least the FSU essay. Like before, all help most appreciated. Thank you! As a...

Undergraduatebeckerb33 - Oct 9, 2008 -
passion for a particular subject or a cause Univerity of Delaware APP essay

NEW - Have you discovered your passion for a particular subject or a cause? I walked into the exhibit early,...

Undergraduateoxomelissaoxo91 - Oct 9, 2008 -
"An for an eye will make the whole world blind" - Method of punishing criminals

NEW - Topic: By punishing murderers with the death penalty, society is also guilt of committing murder. Therefore, life in prison...

Writing Feedbacktoefl_guy - Oct 9, 2008 -
"million thoughts to pressure me" - FSU essay intro comments/suggestions

2 - That's cool you're a Christian too! I'm applying to FSU as well. It's my top choice. :) That's so...

Undergraduatepilla2008 - Oct 9, 2008beccaboo3290 - Oct 9, 2008
"...constant fighting of my parents" - UCF essay number two

NEW - This is my second UCF essay on How my family history, culture or environment influenced me. As before, please...

Undergraduatebeckerb33 - Oct 9, 2008 -
Your activities - common app personal statement - 3 to choose from

NEW - In the space provided below, please elaborate on one of your activities (extracurricular, personal activities, or work experience)(150 words...

UndergraduateBD26 - Oct 9, 2008 -
which airplane flies the farthest- science report

NEW - This is my science report I just need to make sure the grammar and writing make sense. Thank you....

Writing Feedbackrnc3333 - Oct 9, 2008 -
"My mother's diagnosis" - admission essay --Vires

NEW - The Florida State University motto "Vires, Artes, Mores" focuses on strength, the arts, and tradition. Each of these values...

Undergraduatehannah45 - Oct 9, 2008 -
Compare two poems: Love Poems from Spain vs Raven, Annabel Lee

3 - Thanks! I am working on the presentation now and will send it to you for review....

Poetryirishcol25 - Oct 8, 2008irishcol25 - Oct 9, 2008
Argumentative essay - Rich and poor children - school work

4 - Good morning. You're welcome; good luck! I think it's a great idea for international students to study...

Writing FeedbackThuyChi - Oct 5, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 9, 2008
My moral strength: parents and my Catholic education -FSU application essay

3 - Thanks so much for your feedback. I really appreicate it!...

Undergraduatepencil - Oct 8, 2008pencil - Oct 8, 2008
"The Treble and the Bass" - No prompt, just me rambling

6 - I think it would be a good thing to hand in as an extra; I don't think it's appropriate...

UndergraduateJustJoshinbyJ - Oct 6, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 8, 2008
ARTISTIC TALENT; UCF- Unique characteristics and qualities

2 - Good evening. The beginning is difficult because right now it is confusing; it does not match up with...

Undergraduatehicckups - Oct 8, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 8, 2008
Purpose in undertaking graduate study in a particular program - grad essay

8 - I'm glad I could help. Once you have revised, please note however, that per our TOS I can only...

Graduatehellsnyc - Sep 19, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 8, 2008
"swimming season" - FSU vires and mores

4 - You could add a couple of lines regarding this to the middle of the essay, but I would not...

Undergraduatemeganwhitehurst - Oct 7, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 8, 2008
Essay on what you read (Plato, Machiavelli)

2 - Your conclusion should be a wrap-up of your essay. You could quickly rephrase each of these three philosophies and...

Writing Feedbackwordlesstu - Oct 8, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 8, 2008
"Vires, Artes, Mores" each been reflected in my life ; Froeign student from Brazil

NEW - The Latin words "Vires, Artes, Mores" have each been reflected in my life in some way or another. These...

Undergraduatelecokr - Oct 8, 2008 -
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