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On the origins of domesticated felines - Anthropology essay

2 - Greetings! A very interesting and enjoyable essay! I have a few editing suggestions: I both drew and...

Writing FeedbackFredParisFrance - Jul 10, 2007EF_Team2 - Jul 11, 2007
Summary/Analysis of Lucy from The Lion, the Witch, and the Wardrobe

8 - Greetings! I should have been more specific with my suggetion regarding "immensely." It should read like this: "several...

Writing Feedbackamosborne13 - Jul 1, 2007EF_Team2 - Jul 11, 2007
'Genetic answers' - Concise narrative, meaningful event

NEW - I was wondering if you guys would help me edit my essay...Here were the instructions: "In the space...

Undergraduateilive4music89 - Jul 10, 2007 -
Eligibility, financial need background, community involvement - Scholarship Essay; Graphic Designer

10 - Great! Thanks...

Scholarshipkmendez - Jun 27, 2007kmendez - Jul 10, 2007
Vis-ŕ-vis the early anatomically modern Homo sapiens

2 - Greetings! A remarkable and interesting paper! You've done a marvelous job; I have just a few editing suggestions...

Writing FeedbackFredParisFrance - Jul 9, 2007EF_Team2 - Jul 10, 2007
Thesis help: Education better or worse?

7 - I changed it a bit, but I think this is my final essay. I just have to write a...

Writing Feedbacksammie1981 - Jun 30, 2007sammie1981 - Jul 9, 2007
Comparison Essay--Rushdie and Doctorow

7 - Greetings! I'm afraid that "makes religion the only problem for prohibiting birth control" doesn't really make sense. It's...

Writing Feedbackcat08 - Jul 6, 2007EF_Team2 - Jul 9, 2007
'Faith in God and Purpose' - Admit Essay

2 - Greetings! You've done a great job with your essay. I just have a few editing tips: Purpose...

Undergraduateblackcatdomain - Jul 7, 2007EF_Team2 - Jul 8, 2007
"Sicko" - movie review to correct

3 - Greetings! Your essay is well-written and very informative! I'm not sure how deep your instructor wanted you to...

Writing Feedbackcat08 - Jul 4, 2007EF_Team2 - Jul 5, 2007
Process analysis of The Lion, the Witch, and the Wardrobe

7 - Greetings! I think your essay has shaped up very nicely! I have just a few editing suggestions, most...

Book Reportsamosborne13 - Jun 18, 2007EF_Team2 - Jul 4, 2007
Choose a day in your life which did not start off well

2 - Greetings! What an interesting story! I have made some corrections for you: The day in my life...

Writing FeedbackFaheekah - Jul 3, 2007EF_Team2 - Jul 4, 2007
"Life has been tough for me because I have to face many disappointments in it" - Narrative essay

NEW - Any one here please help me with the grammar in this essay. Thanks in advance. Topic: Write a...

Writing Feedbackdejavu - Jul 2, 2007 -
proofread 1st part of another comparison essay--meaning of nothing

4 - Greetings! I think you've done a great job! I know that transitions can be difficult. Sometimes they are...

Writing Feedbackcat08 - Jun 27, 2007EF_Team2 - Jul 2, 2007
'Hurrying up for a plane' - University of Florida - College

6 - Greetings! Sometimes improving your essay and making things clearer is just a matter of providing a little more...

Undergraduatealvarez16 - Jun 28, 2007EF_Team2 - Jun 29, 2007
Essay about a humorous language problem

5 - Hi Sarah, Thanks for your help. Here is my essay that's based on your help. Hope you have some...

Essaysdejavu - Jun 25, 2007dejavu - Jun 29, 2007
SCHOLARSHIP ESSAY ABOUT WHAT I WANT TO DO with MY EDUCATION!

3 - can you tell me the web address for it please...

Scholarshipflorezstephanie - Jun 19, 2007mikeyearof08 - Jun 27, 2007
Comparison essay - the consequences of Hulga's disillusionment

4 - Greetings! I think you've done a good job of clarifying what you meant by the witch meeting. However,...

Writing Feedbackcat08 - Jun 24, 2007EF_Team2 - Jun 25, 2007
Untitled Explanatory/Informative Essay (Due 6/25) what do you think??

2 - Greetings! You've written a great essay, full of useful information! I'll just give you some editing tips: ...

Writing Feedbackmelmcghee07 - Jun 23, 2007EF_Team2 - Jun 24, 2007
To rack their brains to find our answers; Anthropology essay

2 - Greetings, Frederic! Another excellent essay! I have just a few editing pointers: Nevertheless, since statistically speaking, that...

Writing FeedbackFredParisFrance - Jun 21, 2007EF_Team2 - Jun 22, 2007
Search to procreate overweighs the pressure over food sources; Physical Anthropology essay

2 - Greetings, Frederic! As is your habit, you have written an informative and educational essay! I always learn not...

Writing FeedbackFredParisFrance - Jun 21, 2007EF_Team2 - Jun 22, 2007
Visual Essay; Need advice on images, quotations, maps etc.

2 - Greetings! Visual essays can be a lot of fun! :-) They allow you to use photographs, maps, charts,...

EssaysHelp - Jun 21, 2007EF_Team2 - Jun 22, 2007
Essay for Admission (Masters in Leadership)

2 - Greetings! It can be difficult to get started on something like this. Talking about yourself can be harder...

Graduatemmontano - Jun 20, 2007EF_Team2 - Jun 21, 2007
My law assignment?? I dont understand

2 - Greetings! I'll give you my analysis based on what I know of general principles of law, but I...

Grammar, Usagearchiless - Jun 20, 2007EF_Team2 - Jun 20, 2007
my action research project

4 - Greetings! I know how stressful a big project like this cane be! You've done a lot of good...

Research Papersfebrarius - Apr 17, 2007EF_Team2 - Jun 20, 2007
The world will get more riddled with war - scholarship essay

6 - Greetings! You make a good point. When there is a word limit, you have to be sure to...

Scholarshipsammie1981 - Apr 2, 2007EF_Team2 - Jun 20, 2007
I am a person with clear goals; MEDICAL SCHOLARSHIP

2 - Greetings! Great essay! I have just a few suggestions: but my dad told me fascinating stories about...

Scholarshipflorezstephanie - Jun 19, 2007EF_Team2 - Jun 20, 2007
Environment of the world-20 years after / Future - topic idea

3 - This question is essentially saying, based on past and current world conflicts, future violence is inevitable. You simply have...

Essayspinu - May 22, 2006sammie1981 - Jun 18, 2007
structure of a process paper?

4 - Greetings! A process essay will tell the reader how to do something, or explain how something is done....

Essaysangelfire_kaye - May 9, 2007EF_Team2 - Jun 17, 2007
Bass guitar - compare/contrast

2 - Greetings! There are a couple of ways (or more) to spice up writing that comes across as dry....

Grammar, Usagesecondhandgod - Jun 14, 2007EF_Team2 - Jun 15, 2007
sadako sasaki - book summary

2 - Greetings! I think you're right that "leukemia" is not capitalized. Only diseases named after people need to be...

Book Reportskikay - Jun 14, 2007EF_Team2 - Jun 15, 2007
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