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I am completely lost in the music, but my fingers move across the strings finding the correct notes to play

look over at the audience and take a deep breath wishing they could understand the magnificence of this moment.

The students in my orchestra have become my second family and we assist each other with schoolwork and problems outside of school.

The bar chart shows the travelling abroad by Japanese in millions between 1985 and 1995 around the world whereas the line graph shows the percentage of Japanese travellers who visited Australia in the same period.

In my view,a mover is one who above all is capable of movement of the self.

For a long period of my development, I could best be described as a movable person with an immovable attitude, not unlike most in their formative years

It has been ranked among the world top universities

to major in Biology as a preparation for Medical School.

I would say, is the extremely wide variety of majors and minors.

Whether college should offer job support programs or not for the student before they start working is hot topic in the public

Some people claim that universities only focus on academic research.

The mainly concern of college students is thier major study.

Studies about innovation management and technology commercialization have not become popular studies in Indonesia.

My university initiated engineering management department, which became the first engineering management program in South East Asia.

This department aims to accommodate the needs of engineer that focused on creating innovative product and system. In order to escalating the quality of this new department, it needs more academicians with deep knowledge on technology and innovation management.

Since childhood I always imagined myself with a worthy career and being a professional.

Currently that desire has not changed.

My biggest goal is to obtain a career where I can express my love for science and at the same time help people around the world. After considering career opportunities such as Psychology and Dance I realized my true passion was science.

I'm not the best when it comes to using words but as a photographer I feel that I truly know what it means to have a sense of freedom of expression or F.O.E., as I like to put it.

Ever since I was young my passion has been to create.

I would buy arts and crafts books and challenge myself to finish each project no matter how difficult it was.

I ditched my dolls, and stuffed animals to help my brother with his architecture projects.

Indonesia has a low score in Business sophistication aspect and market sophistication aspect.

It is mean that all this time Indonesia's economy mostly driven by natural resource exploitation without further effort to create more value through innovation.

I believe Indonesia did not lack of brilliant or creative people that able to invent an innovative product.

Since I was fourteen, I have always been intrigued by cancer research.

The fact that cells can mutate, simply by an accident in the DNA replication, and can set off a chain reaction, creating a large tumor, spreading to various parts of the body, even capturing its own personal blood vessels, is, essentially, just another struggle for survival.

Many of us preach about what we believe in. We believe that this is no longer a conservative society. We believe that we are able to make changes to this world as people are said to be more open to opinions.

This is my strong opinion when cultural diversity is brought up.

As the daughter of a preschool and a kindergarten teacher, I was destined to become a childcare queen.

but human could not have the right answer for that question

Many people prefer experience to books because theyfavour specific skills over theoretical ideas.

In Bangladesh, most energy consumption still relies on fossil fuel; almost 70 percent of electricity is produced by natural gas. However, due to environmental pollution especially in industrial estates and higher awareness of global warming Bangladesh government plans to invest in alternative sources of energy. My interest in developing my research skills and knowledge in energy efficiency has motivated me to apply for Environomical Pathways for Sustainable Energy Systems (SELECT).

All mankind have created free but they are social creations.

They are free to do everything when they are alone, but not in a public place.

Being rich & successful, making my friends & family proud, really changing the world, stuff like that.

And until recently, it's always been just that, a dream.

But now I have the opportunity to use my diverse academic interests, my sense of leadership, and my culture's traditions & values to turn my dream into a reality.

I come from a family background that has instilled in me a diverse range of values and morals.

Raised in a blue-collar household, my father instilled in me the values of hard work, responsibility, a strong moral character, and self-reliance by setting example.

By the first sentence I mean: The amount of achievements and hard work the person makes from the beginning of his life, shapes his future and make him what he is.

After two years I moved to United Kingdom, a completely new place and experience for me.

First, I learnt a whole new language rapidly.

My passion to learn amused all my teachers, this was a big achievement for me. I was studying seven days a week, from Monday to Friday in a British school and from Saturday to Sunday at a Libyan school.

First , I am still in the prime of my youth and I recognise this as the time I need to work the hardest to build experience and to grow professionally.

I am easily influenced by those I admire (sometimes not in the best of ways), and after watching the 2011 documentary of Woody Allen's life,

where as a writer I best fit in.

while learning the subjects that do not come as easily to me

The accomplishments that are made by a person from the beginning of his life, determines his future.

InOn the day of my birth, my grandmother who passed away 2 years ago said that I will be a magnificentprominent person in the future.

when I was three years old I saw two men from our balcony stealing from a shop down the street.

Recently there have been a lot of arguments about engaging children in variablevarious types of paid work.

Some people are considered consider this is notshould not be allowedallowable while others have profoundly converse conviction.

This challenge is assumed to be quite controversial

The ingredients are al-vocado,milk,ice cream,water,biscuit,and astor

.Throw the peel and the bean.

Throw the peel and the bean.Put alvocado into a blender. The third step is make a alvocado juice.

favorite favor.

I always wanted to do a profession where I can helpshelp people with any kind of problems.

When I was young, I wanted to become a doctor because it is the center profession of the heath science.

The idea of becoming a doctor was due of an Indian serial, Dill mill Gayya.. Through this serial, the actors who play the doctor role were awesome.

I knew I would inevitably become an engineer in the future.

When I was young, I knew I would inevitably become an engineer in the future. It was because my father was a civil engineer and dedicated his life to that field.

The genes of engineering just happened to be in my blood.

Some people suggested to increase the price of petrol to solve the problems

Though it is easy for the governors to carry out, I however do not think it is the best way .

At the beginning, it cannot be denied that higher price to some certain extent is helpful to decrease the number of transports and the amount of pollution produced by factories.

Due to the increased demand of high rises and decreased availability of space

Undeniably, high rises satisfy the drastic demand of rentals in cities to an extent, they are excellent places for short stay.

Children are given remuneration for their excellent work and penalty for their bad activity by the parent.

Compensation and penalizingmakesmake children in abehave better way of life

Children are motivated by prizes given inboth school and at home.

I doubled my effort to gain high scores in each school.

two of my cousins passed away immediately

Losing my beloved ones is definitely the hardest moment I had faced . However, I never stopped from achieving my goals.

First of all, I would like to say that this is my first essay ever, so please cooperate to improve it. Thanks in advance

In spite of those problems there is a problem which affects us inside which is friendship and respect.

Reading is the most confusing task for me..

Can you tell any resourecs to collect speaking vocabulary to improve speeaking.

The world around us is not the one we are always dreaming of. It is devided between rich countries and poor ones. There is always an argument about whether wealthy nations should share their wealth among poorer nations.

The answer is yes but, in a very feasible and controlled way.

Elder people in their young life have faced a lot ofmany hardships to bring up their children.

They are the ones who let us walk, speak and face the world.

During my school days, I was living in the suburbs of Chennai. With rapid modernization and infrastructure development in the late 1990s, I used to be surrounded by large road-laying machines, new automobiles whizzing past our house and constant news about opening of new factories and manufacturing facilities.

Both of which left beme amazed and kept me wondering about the powers of machinery.

When I was first introduced to finite element analysis, I was intrigued by the flexibility of creating a mathematical model to solve various structural problems in multiple ways by using numerical methods. Consequently my interest converged on grasping the various types of finite element methods and mastering the meshing software of ANSYS, NASTRAN etc.

This interest about different materials and their applications and deep desire to use design software, made me choose "Design and vibration analysis of main rotor blade of a trainer helicopter" as my final year project. The design of the rotor blade was made using CATIA V5 R17 and stress and vibration analysis were made using NASTRAN.

I believe that my passion for mechanics, systematic hard work and positive energy will make me a prospective student to your graduate program.

The question is indeed a quite arguableoneand it involves innumerable number of factors which cause to escalate the level of issue to a debate.