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Dec 19, 2015
Graduate / Research on geophysics what explores fascination about the earth and planetary science [17]
Better, but not all the points are necessary. Let me see if I can pull out the important aspects / keywords for you to develop in relation to your SOP.
Purpose:
This is in-line with my career goals of becoming a top notch Geoscientist/ Research Consultant/Teacher. I need to know about earth and various planets with the help of geophysical methods. Because geophysics is the course in which geography and physics both are aggregated greatly and make the understanding of earth surface and inner condition better. By different methods of geophysics specifically seismic method and data interpretation can make the answer of these questions. For that, geophysical seismic evaluation is most important to me.
Background:
Your academic background is sufficient. Don't change or add anything at this point. We will work on its final content later on.
Notable Accomplishments:
I am working on some material with another professor about the influence of an atom to a material to change the magnetic property
- Discuss the importance of your perceived final outcome of this research and how it will possibly help advance the field of Geophysics. Talk about how you plan to build upon this research as a masters degree student at the university.
Why this university?
I found some of professor's in your institution is great with seismological evaluation and geophysics. This creates a plethora of interest about your institution and also the research facility of your institution helps me to decide for applying. I want to do study the earth science and engineering with sound and serious intention and to do research with focus on geophysics
- Name the professors, what their study is, mention if you hope to connect your future research with theirs so you can work with the professor directly. What lab or research offerings of the university are of interest to you and why.
Don't get irritated :-) We are actually making good progress with your essay. The above guidelines should help better align the content so that we can either finalize, or edit the essay one more time before completion :-)
Better, but not all the points are necessary. Let me see if I can pull out the important aspects / keywords for you to develop in relation to your SOP.
Purpose:
This is in-line with my career goals of becoming a top notch Geoscientist/ Research Consultant/Teacher. I need to know about earth and various planets with the help of geophysical methods. Because geophysics is the course in which geography and physics both are aggregated greatly and make the understanding of earth surface and inner condition better. By different methods of geophysics specifically seismic method and data interpretation can make the answer of these questions. For that, geophysical seismic evaluation is most important to me.
Background:
Your academic background is sufficient. Don't change or add anything at this point. We will work on its final content later on.
Notable Accomplishments:
I am working on some material with another professor about the influence of an atom to a material to change the magnetic property
- Discuss the importance of your perceived final outcome of this research and how it will possibly help advance the field of Geophysics. Talk about how you plan to build upon this research as a masters degree student at the university.
Why this university?
I found some of professor's in your institution is great with seismological evaluation and geophysics. This creates a plethora of interest about your institution and also the research facility of your institution helps me to decide for applying. I want to do study the earth science and engineering with sound and serious intention and to do research with focus on geophysics
- Name the professors, what their study is, mention if you hope to connect your future research with theirs so you can work with the professor directly. What lab or research offerings of the university are of interest to you and why.
Don't get irritated :-) We are actually making good progress with your essay. The above guidelines should help better align the content so that we can either finalize, or edit the essay one more time before completion :-)