EF_Stephen
Oct 13, 2009
Scholarship / "fairly knowledgeable of the Bible" - Scholarship Essay [4]
I think that the revision is better from a purely objective essay perspective. If I were grading it, this one would receive higher marks.
Before you turn it in, though, read it out loud to see how it sounds. You'll catch things that way that you might not otherwise.
I think that the revision is better from a purely objective essay perspective. If I were grading it, this one would receive higher marks.
Before you turn it in, though, read it out loud to see how it sounds. You'll catch things that way that you might not otherwise.