Jennyflower81
Nov 23, 2012
Undergraduate / 'Everything interests me' - Cornell College of Arts and Sciences Supplement [3]
This essay is great! Nice job :) I think you have demonstrated a good ability to write, intelligence, creativity, and a wide variety of interests. This is exactly what the admissions are looking for- personality, and explaining what you plan to do after college. You say why college will help you achieve your goals, and that you obviously love to learn. I think you have done everything right, just go over your grammar and spelling and send it in :) Here are a few words that you may want to change:
The past yearwhenP eople have recently asked me what I am going to do with my lifepursue after college, and I have said everything from becoming anarchitecture to becoming a pediatrician.
I hope to take advantage of the broad course selection offered by the College of Arts and Sciences.offers.
This essay is great! Nice job :) I think you have demonstrated a good ability to write, intelligence, creativity, and a wide variety of interests. This is exactly what the admissions are looking for- personality, and explaining what you plan to do after college. You say why college will help you achieve your goals, and that you obviously love to learn. I think you have done everything right, just go over your grammar and spelling and send it in :) Here are a few words that you may want to change:
I hope to take advantage of the broad course selection offered by the College of Arts and Sciences.