Jennyflower81
Dec 20, 2012
Undergraduate / Me Vs My sister; Stanford Supp/ Intellectual vitality [7]
I think that you need to stay consistent in your past "tense" I can give you some suggestions.
We were getting prepared for the annual Christmas Eve church service, finishing preparing the dishes to be eaten Christmas day.
You may want to say it like this: "While anticipating our annual Christmas Eve church service, we finished preparing food for Christmas day."
Us kids are helping our dad make the family-tradition, generation passed barbecue for dinner and preparing tea rings for breakfast Christmas morning.
You could also say it like this: "My siblings and I were helping Dad with a family tradition, a barbecue dinner. We prepared tea rings for breakfast on Christmas morning."
After church, we would drive through town...
Once we returned home, we would gather around the fire..
Christmas is a very important time of year to me, not only with my beliefs but with my family.
Can you be more specific about your beliefs? do you mean religious beliefs?
I think that you need to stay consistent in your past "tense" I can give you some suggestions.
We were getting prepared for the annual Christmas Eve church service, finishing preparing the dishes to be eaten Christmas day.
You may want to say it like this: "While anticipating our annual Christmas Eve church service, we finished preparing food for Christmas day."
Us kids are helping our dad make the family-tradition, generation passed barbecue for dinner and preparing tea rings for breakfast Christmas morning.
You could also say it like this: "My siblings and I were helping Dad with a family tradition, a barbecue dinner. We prepared tea rings for breakfast on Christmas morning."
After church, we would drive through town...
Once we returned home, we would gather around the fire..
Christmas is a very important time of year to me, not only with my beliefs but with my family.
Can you be more specific about your beliefs? do you mean religious beliefs?