Jennyflower81
Feb 2, 2012
Writing Feedback / 'Computer in the future has no limits' - What will Happen in the Future [2]
Amid all of the technological development that we are witnessing today, what can we expect to happen in the future?
I saw a wonderful video on YouTube in our class "UNIV 112", that explained a new invention fora American students . The invention is a small device that attaches around the neck in a series and has online wireless with mobile. Provided with this device is provide with a small camera and a small project. The profitbenefits of this device isare that the deviceit can capture the image of anything.front of you andIt will immediately relay to the Internet and lookingsearch for information on what has been capturedthe picture, then provide to youit immediately and displays the result byon a small projector front of you. SomethingIt is wonderful and amazing; we are now in 2011 and have reached to all of this development and has become an almost daily occurance , so imagine what could happen after 100 years.
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Amid all of the technological development that we are witnessing today, what can we expect to happen in the future?
I saw a wonderful video on YouTube in our class "UNIV 112", that explained a new invention for
I edited the first paragraph for you, to make it easier to read. Try to be less "wordy" when you write, keep it simple and you will be fine! Continue to check your grammar. :)