Scholarship / research objective - portland cement [2]

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lieu of waste brick to replace portland cement

Indonesia is one of ring of fire areas. In these areas seismic earthquake happens more frequently than other parts in the world. Consequently, the more damage occurs in these areas. In developing country, like Indonesia, awareness in perventing and reducing the risk of earthquake are still far away from enough. Although there are some research that are improved to explore the analyses and prevention from earthquake, the low income of families in this country forces them to face this natural disaster without standard prevention. This causes millions people dead and billion rupiahs lost. This condition needs an effective solution. The solution that is offered in this research is Portland cement replacement with used brick. Recent Portland cement that is used in most housing in Indonesia is not appropriate for housing construction and expensive. The strength of Portland cement is higher than brick, this will cause the bricks shrink then forces those to restraint. This will increase the number of cracks on the wall so that the house will not able to withstand seismic waves. In this research recycling used brick to be cement is to produce cement that has lower price and save for housing construction.

Scholarship / Contribution in solving a challenge, implementing change or reform [3]

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(BE SPECIFIC AND INCLUDE: WHAT ASPECT OF YOUR LEADERSHIP KNOWLEDGE, SKILLS AND PRACTICE YOU CONSIDER TO BE WELL ESTABLISHED AND EFFECTIVE; WHICH PEOPLE OR ORGANISATION YOU WORKED WITH TO SOLVE THE PROBLEM; AND WHAT CREATIVE METHODS WERE USED)

I was the founder and leader in xx Engineering Association student in XX University. This association is similar with study club for xx Engineering Student, xx University. This study club was found to break a rigidity research improvement in xx Engineering Association

Bassically, I and my friends had high expectation to do more for our department by this study club. This study Club had responsibility to help every single student that want to join competition in regional or national area. Also, this study club must helped student to understand some difficult assignments. Blessing in Disguise, at the start of this community was found, most all student in xx Engineering was pessimist that this community would work as its function. no body was interested to involve in starting first research.

Based on that condition, I started my programs with doing research by myself in designing area for village improvement in Engineer national company. This research followed by microhydro research conducted by my friends.Each of us use our research to start the community program and involving national competition

Fortunately, our research was one of the big five research. This competition result helped us to get the trust from students in xx Engineering Department. Some lecturers and student agree to run this program until now.

Our community has conducted 4 research and won 3 competitions from 2009 until 2010. in a year we co-operated with alumni in improving research for some competitions and study methods for students. In the last 2010 I resigned, the community kept ran by new students.

Scholarship / present field study; 'I mixed concrete with rubber' [3]

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I am student of Civil Engineering in xxx. I learned about building, material of building, dam, water, and transportation system. In my college I ever did many research. My first research is about planning of rural areas, then light SCC concrete. In the second research I mixed concrete with rubber. The rubber has elastic character that can add the strength of concrete.

My undergraduate thesis was concerned in Foundation design. I made comparison between bored pile and pile foundation then choosed which one was more appropriate for chimney building in Bxxx, East xx. I made comparison in some aspects-strength, construction cost, and settlement. To find the final decission, it is important to do soil identification. Then, bearing capacity of soil has to be counted. Soil bearing capacity will show how much the external strength will be needed by the building. This external strength will be suplied by foundation.

The result shows that bored pile is much cheaper than pile foundation, but bored pile has lower strength than pile foundation. The prediction of settelement of bored pile is higher than pile foundation.

Eventhough from quality aspects-strength and settlement, pile foundation is better than bored pile, bored pile stiil be the choosen. This is because of limitation of cost project

Research Papers / Portland cement - waste brick: environmentally friendly standards [2]

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Nowadays, Portland cement is the main material to cement for living house construction. Whereas, Portland cement has main weakness that relate to strength and cost efficiency as material construction for living house.

Portland cement was proven has higher strength far above the standard cement for housing (xx: 20xx). Cement companies need high energy and cost to produce high quality cement. This causes the price of cement is getting expensive-about $6 per sack and climbs up to 24% in the last two years (xx: 2xx). Ironically, the strength of Portland cement will cause the bricks shrink that force restraint, if the strength is higher than brick. This will increase the number of cracks on the wall (xxx: 2xx) so that the house will not able to withstand seismic waves. This shows that Portland cement is not save for housing in the earthquake prone areas.

In the environment aspect, producing cement processes is dangerous for air. This is because Cement production is one of emitters in the Earth. According to International Exx's data, the amount of Carbon dioxide (CO2) that had been produced by producing cement in 19xx was 2x,x billion ton or around x% from all CO2 in this earth. This number will rise equally with the growth of industrial cement product (xx,20xx).

All negative effects above, never reduce using of cement in housing construction. This is proven by the demand of cement climbs 2.5% per year (xxx: 20xx). This is caused people have no enough another alternative in cement that more appropriate in hosing that Portland cement.

This needs another cement that is not only appropriate with construction standard but also environmentally friendly to overcome these problems. One of the solutions is using powder of wasting brick. Waste brick from house reconstruction that is still has limited utilization can be used in cement mix. Brick had been proved contains silica and alumina (xxx: 20xx). Silica and Alumina are the elements forming of pozzolan.

Undergraduate / from a waste to house - replacing cement Portland by waste brick in housing [4]

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In more than 500 words describe specifically how your proposed study and/or research will enable you to contribute to the social or economic development of your home country.

The infrastructure in my country still has low quality and quantity for many people in whole islands. There are many cases that is happening to

Today, providing appropriate and economical houses for poor people is still be the big problem to city council in M. Even though the government has tried to press the cost for living houses, the houses' price are still expensive for much more people in M. Honestly, this problem is happening in most all big cities in Indonesia such as Surabaya, Jakarta, Bandung.

One of factors that causes high cost for living project is the cost of material. One of main materials in building is Portland cement. Almost all parts in the building need Portland cement-brick glue, wall-filler, floor glue. Portland cement is the material that contains pozzolan. Pozzolan is the unsure that contains of silica. Brick is one of materials that contain of silica. Utilization wasting brick in Indonesia is far away from maximum. Whereas, this utilization can reduce much cost for building material. Moreover, from the last research that conducted by ...(...), it was proven that cement Portland has over strength if this used in the wall or concrete for housing construction. So, using Portland cement actually, is one of wasting of quality and fees aspects in housing construction.

Using waste brick in housing construction is not only solving extravagance problems in housing construction, but also can keep our earth from global warming. This is because, by replacing cement pozzolan with waste brick, we have reduce the CO (Carbon monoxide) from Portland production, un-directly. According to Global Cement Directory (2012), In Indonesia producing cement from the biggest cement company is 17Mt/yr in 2010, but this number will be on target to produce over 25Mt in 2012 and that it will ramp production up to 30Mt/yr in 2015. This will increase production of CO2 that today contributes about 25,7% emission in most Indonesian big cities (Housing Research and Development Center of Research and Development of the Department of Public Works: 2005).

If we stand with Portland, so we make Portland companies produce more and more cement. Also, the producing process of waste brick to be cement is done without fabrication. This can be another advantage in environment and economical aspect in using waste brick.

Based on my explanations above, replacing cement Portland by waste brick in housing construction is very important and urgent. This is because necessity of housing for high population and country, and many advantages that we can get from waste brick cement process.

Letters / Letter of recommendation - Master Program [8]

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I am one of the professors in Civil Engineering Department, University of XX. I am very happy, to write this recommendation for further studies MissXXX. I first met Miss XXX in my class-Concrete Structures. She showed excellent performance in this class. She was always be the first person who understand and done very well every assignment that I gave. She is an active student, she took initiative in her work and was highly regarded in the discussion group. For these reason I gave her grade A in this class. She also took my bridge class, compare to the class average, Miss XXX earned grade A in the class.

She has good manner and warm personality. She always helped her low intelligent friend to make them understand topic of subject in every discussion and course.

I highly recommend her to be a New Zealand ASEAN Scholars Award recipient. I am sure that she will be a postgraduate student whose great talents as engineer in the future.

Writing Feedback / IELTS - Freedom in showing creation is the right for every creative artist [7]

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Creative artists should be given the freedom to express their own ideas in whichever they wish. However, there are should be restrictions on what they do. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Freedom in showing creation is the right for every creative artist. Certainly, government has to control it. Personally, I agree with this opinion because the government have right to manage their people.

However, sometimes, the government pressed the media and artist too much. Moreover, they try to shut them up. This is usually, done by politicians that stand in main position. This obligation is taken to cover the bad attitude that they do behind the scene. This can be included to violation in giving opinion. This will cause skepticism in politics. If this happens, people in a country will not be aware to their country situation.

In other hands, a freedom without limitation is very dangerous. This can cause some crime activities. One example is when a few of comedians-In indonesia, today, make some satire jokes that address to corrupt person, sometimes, they talk too much. Furthermore, they judge the person that relate to corruption cases, whereas the case is still running in the court and still does not proven yet. If this happens, the comedian can be demanded for defamation case. Here, the role of government is needed to do surveillance and make restrictions in expressing idea. For all people know, the rule is made to limit the person's right, so that his right will never hurt another's right. Then, everybody can live in peaceful life.

In conclusion, limitation idea is useful to shape good situation. But, the limitation is has to be made in good proportion. Therefore, everyone (including artist) can express his feeling without break another one's right.

Writing Feedback / IELTS: leisure time - joblessness people take the highest place in the race [5]

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The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below

The bar chart illustrates how much leisure time enjoyed by men and women in various employment status.

Overall, Joblessness people take the highest place in the race.

Three categories-employed (full-time), unemployed, retired, are dominated by men from the start, while in the two categories-employed (part-time) and housewives, there are no men in the chart. In the men group, Employed takes the lowest amount of hours about 43 hours, then rises significantly in two categories-Unemployment and retired, about 85 hours.

There are five categories for women in having leisure time. As men, Unemployed and retired group for women, take the first place at 79 hours. These groups are followed by Housewives and employed (part-time) at about 58 hours and 43 hours respectively. The last place is taken by employed (full-time) at under 40 hours.

In conclusion, even though women are always in the second rank, they take the much more time to enjoy leisure time are than men. This is because, in the ranks, men only exist in three groups.

Writing Feedback / IELTS, TASK; 'In Indonesia, child workers are still the one of the big issues' [3]

Dear all. As usual, I need your advice to fix my bad writing. Your advice is a way to me.
best regards
Aji

In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as
completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning
and taking responsibility.
What are your opinions on this?

In Indonesia, child workers are still the one of the big issues. Most people refuse paid work for children in Indonesia, only minority persons who support it for the name of education. However, I believe that working for children is useful as long as appropriate with their skill and age.

The cases that are happening now are caused the adults see child workers as usual employees in work quality. Whereas, children have small body and small strength if we compare to adults. Also, they still lack of experience in working. So, for all employers that want to employ children, they have to understand about this limitation.

However, today, private industries do not care about it. They concern in profit, they employ children from noon until night. The work will take their playing and study time. This really happens in my country, Indonesia. This work type never educates children at all.

But, this will be different if employer consider the children's capability. They responsible to the consequence in having child workers-limitation in strength and experience. For example, when I was a child, I worked in a farm field. I work for 3 hours, from 1 pm to 4 pm, three days a week. The employer gave me the small jobs, such as, feeding animals, picking cucumber and watering vegetables. Even though I only got less money, but I felt so fun. Because, for the first time I was exist like adult, they treated me like responsible person not the spoiled child. They believed to me, this is the big deal for the children who usually needed attention from the adults. I learned a lot in saving money, because I knew how hard to earn money. I also learned that many people have harder life, because they have to work harder than me. After work time, I still have time to study and go to mosque with my friends.

Based on my experience above, I strongly believe that paid work is useful for children. This is because work educates children to be more sensitive in social and responsible. Those aspects shape children to be great leader in the future.

Writing Feedback / ielts writing task - Causes of obesity and worsening people's health and fitness [5]

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Aji
In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing.
What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?

Today, selling of slim medicine is increasing. This shows that the number of fat people is rising. By seeing this fact, we know that their health is also getting worse. This is because, today, fat causes many diseases-cholesterol and heart attack. Maybe, fewer exercise and high stress can be the main factors of this problem. The most important thing is the solution has to be found to overcome this problem.

Based on the causes of health decreasing above-less exercise and big stress, people have to spend their time everyday about 15 minute to take some exercises. Because, exercise can make the blood flows freely and cracks the fat in our body. Reducing stress is also essential. Even though we live in industrial era that is full of deadline, sometimes as workers, we have to entertain ourselves, in once a week. Joy of life is more important than earning money, because the purpose of getting money is to make our life happy.

In Indonesia, for example, many employees do exercise and entertain themselves in a simple way. For instance, after work, usually they do futsal with their colleague from the same department to refresh their body. From this activity, people can be healthy and fun in the same time. Many companies that have a gathering sport programs in Indonesia, proves that the health quality of their employees is increasing.

For the last, doing exercise is never work successfully if persons stand with bad habit in eating fat food. Avoiding junk food and fat food are so effective to reduce the fat in our body. Fat burning system in our body has limited capacity, so the system will be error if we add much fat every day. Adding vegetables and fruit in our menu is very suggested to every single person that want to be healthy.

Overall, I strongly recommend three solutions above-exercise, entertainment, and reducing fat food, because the solutions have been proven work in Indonesia. But, the solutions are never work if we do those in unbalance portion.