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My foundation - Language study plan before and after Gkd

5 - It is for a teacher's activity...

UndergraduateFaith y - Jun 12, 2025Valentina25 - Jun 14, 2025
Tiltle: What are the positive and negative efects of tourism on a place that you know well?

2 - Do not use an ellipses when writing an academic essay. That punctuation mark indicates that you are thinking...

Writing FeedbackKany2711 - Jun 12, 2025Holt - Jun 12, 2025
Adult education centre attendance - IELTS CHART

2 - Do not indicate the position of the image in the report. The reader is presumed to not have...

Writing Feedbackjulianaji - Jun 12, 2025Holt - Jun 12, 2025
My IELTS writing task 2 with topic about online studying and working

2 - Automatic failing score in the TA section. This is not a compare, contrast, then provide an opinion essay....

Writing FeedbackBrian Nguyen - Jun 12, 2025Holt - Jun 12, 2025
My language study plan for GKS-U scholarship program (before and after coming to Korea)

2 - Prior to your arrival, the reviewer needs to see evidence that you have done both self study and enrolled...

ScholarshipMoon_Moon - Jun 11, 2025Holt - Jun 12, 2025
Argumentative paper: The Price for Life: A Profit-Driven Healthcare

3 - @tfreeman This was a very detailed and informative script. You did well. Though you should work on the flow...

Writing Feedbacktfreeman - Jun 11, 2025Moon_Moon - Jun 12, 2025
Students in Canada and the US by country of origin: Table graph

2 - The same error exists as in your previous essay. properly identify the image and mention the number of...

Writing FeedbackKany2711 - Jun 11, 2025Holt - Jun 12, 2025
Reasons for migration to and from the UK - Writing task 1: Pie chart

2 - There are 2 mistakes in this immediate presentation: 1. The proper image title was not cited (pie chart)...

Writing FeedbackKany2711 - Jun 11, 2025Holt - Jun 12, 2025
Some people think that competition at work, at school and in daily life is a good thing.

2 - This is an example of an automatic failing final score essay. Once you write less than 250 words, the...

Writing Feedbacklannnnnn - Jun 10, 2025Holt - Jun 10, 2025
The graphs below show the different reasons of two group of students to choose Dorriford University

2 - Task 1 essays should not be more than 200 words in representation. That is because you are given 1...

Writing Feedbackhuyentran123456 - Jun 10, 2025Holt - Jun 10, 2025
How can we add our poetry writing and stories in our college application?

4 - @Kany2711 Hi! Thank you very much for the suggestion. I'd surely follow this. Good luck!...

PoetryAnvita1910 - Jun 10, 2025Anvita1910 - Jun 12, 2025
The essay about the future diplomat! I've written many personal statement, this one calls out to me.

3 - @Holt Hi! Thank you very much for the clarification. But I had a question, should I change the whole...

Writing FeedbackAnvita1910 - Jun 10, 2025Anvita1910 - Jun 10, 2025
'Treatable' - My struggles with OCD and growth - COMMON APP ESSAY

3 - I love your essay! It have that raw emotion and a 'you' element. It tells us about the person...

Undergraduateaalberton - Jun 8, 2025Anvita1910 - Jun 10, 2025
Some famous people are considered as role models, and they are having an increasing influence

2 - While you fulfilled the TA discussion requirements and properly provided a personal opinion based upon the writing instructions, I...

Writing Feedbacknailanaila - Jun 7, 2025Holt - Jun 7, 2025
Discuss both view on the matter of whether children should engaged in some kind of paid work.

2 - Points will be deducted from your TA score because you failed to provide a thesis statement that represents...

Writing Feedbackduydinh - Jun 7, 2025Holt - Jun 7, 2025
ielts writing task1, so hard for a beginner like me

2 - In order to properly write a task 1essay like this one, you need to start by building your English...

Essaysmemehack123 - Jun 6, 2025Holt - Jun 6, 2025
GKS-U personal statement - major in airline services

2 - This is a very interesting and well developed personal statement. It is a beacon of inspiration and truly introduces...

ScholarshipAdeurani - Jun 5, 2025Holt - Jun 5, 2025
Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal.

2 - You have changed the discussion prompt and therefore, failed the Tast Accuracy section of the scoring rubic. The...

Writing Feedbackwiniari - Jun 5, 2025Holt - Jun 5, 2025
Expenditures on food and clothes - IELTS- Writing task 1-Mixed charts

2 - The essay has too many words. You should be writing only 200 words maximum for this task since you...

Writing FeedbackSoradamouse - Jun 2, 2025Holt - Jun 2, 2025
IELTS Writing Task 1 (consumption of spreads)

2 - You should use an Oxford comma when enumerating related items. You partially did this in the summary overview. Points...

Writing FeedbackKellyingeneral - May 31, 2025Holt - May 31, 2025
The Effects of Social Media On Developing Brains

2 - The essay drones on and on and on without actually establishing a thesis statement first. What is the whole...

Research Papersbrennaforeman - May 30, 2025Holt - May 31, 2025
The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now.

2 - Never use references that will require the reader to look at the image. The assumption in the task...

Writing FeedbackMinhhien - May 28, 2025Holt - May 29, 2025
Psychology study plan GKS scholarship

2 - One essay at a time please. I can only offer you official advice regarding your language study plan. Everyone...

ScholarshipEcstacy - May 27, 2025Holt - May 29, 2025
Computer engineering - SOP Statement of Purpose essay help

2 - A statement of purpose is the written interview that the university admissions committee members use to determine your fit...

UndergraduateKaizennk - May 27, 2025Holt - May 28, 2025
Research paper on chronic illness and stress-related disorders

2 - Since you are the best source of information in this case, you should be referring to your plight as...

Research Papersjenniw19 - May 24, 2025Holt - May 28, 2025
Cover letter for international software engineering internship

2 - The cover letter should fit one page using a font size of 12. You do not need to write...

Lettersamans - May 17, 2025Holt - May 18, 2025
Essay about the relationship of the technology to culture

2 - The prompt restatement has 2 problems that I immediately see. It is not correctly restating the prompt. What you...

Writing FeedbackRock Lee - May 13, 2025Holt - May 18, 2025
Research Paper on Divorce. Giving 3 areas of weakness as well as highlights.

2 - I think you should include the children of divorce as one of your target audiences for this paper...

Research Papersamberc - May 10, 2025Holt - May 11, 2025
Research Paper: The War on Palestine and its Effect on Children

2 - The paper is suffering content wise because of the heavy reliance of your writing on cut and paste information...

Research PapersSMonsour - May 10, 2025Holt - May 11, 2025
Biotechnology - MAECI SCHOLARSHIP SIENA AND PAVIA

3 - @Holt Thank you for this advice. that exactly what I am doing, although, I don't have work experience, so...

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