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Camp Green Lake - The lessons we take from obstacles can be fundamental to later success

2 - I was just about to say the same thing. You cannot use the book because not everyone has heard...

UndergraduateLazarus931 - Sep 1, 2024Holt - Sep 2, 2024
[IELTS] ASSIMILATING OF PEOPLE IN ALL OVER THE WORLD ARE BECOME MORE OBVIOUS

2 - I cannot offer you any more advice regarding improving your essay since you are totally disregarding the previous advice...

Writing Feedbackphucan9906 - Sep 1, 2024Holt - Sep 1, 2024
An opportunity to study in China - Schwarzman scholarship essay

2 - This is a combined personal statement and motivation letter. As such, it should focus on your personal insights and...

ScholarshipJaveria123 - Aug 31, 2024Holt - Sep 1, 2024
Motivation letter for Public Policy and Developmental Studies review DAAD

2 - You have mnade the same error that the other DAAD applicants make when writing a letter of motivation. The...

Lettershamzamarwat - Aug 30, 2024Holt - Aug 30, 2024
Chevening Essay on Leadership and Influence - Cybersecurity Background

2 - You have to understand that the leadership qualification you should be presenting is singular but highly notable in terms...

Scholarshipplankton - Aug 29, 2024Holt - Aug 30, 2024
IELTS 2: biodiversity and environment

3 - you should spend more time to enhance your vocabulary range, that may help you not to repeat such a...

Writing Feedbackrimari - Aug 29, 2024phucan9906 - Sep 1, 2024
A forestry graduate - motivation letter for master's studies in Europe

2 - Harish, only paragraph 3 is useful in this case. That is the only aspect that has references to your...

LettersHarishpandey - Aug 29, 2024Holt - Aug 30, 2024
Points on how to write a personal statement for ugrad scholarship program

2 - The writing guide is pretty straightforward regarding what you should be writing about. An effective response essay will be...

Essaysmehreen688 - Aug 28, 2024Holt - Aug 29, 2024
APA format essay, topic: Maternal mortality rates for black women

2 - This is a notable and historical event that should be narrated at the beginning of the research to...

Research Papersjentamp - Aug 28, 2024Holt - Aug 29, 2024
Is Culinary School a Worthwhile Investment for Young Individuals Entering the Field?

2 - Offer a comparative analysis of the fees associated with culinary school at this point. Use the most expensive...

Research Papersash112233445566 - Aug 28, 2024Holt - Aug 28, 2024
These days, people in some countries are living in a throwaway society which means people use things

2 - You should write only 300 words at the most for the task 2 essay since it has a 40...

Writing Feedbacklntramy - Aug 27, 2024Holt - Aug 28, 2024
[B2 FCE WRITING PART 1] An essay: Progress in technology

4 - @THKT666 Your essay doesn't clearly state how the two subjects and how technology has an impact in it according...

Writing FeedbackTHKT666 - Aug 27, 2024Maria22 - Sep 3, 2024
BEYOND BORDERS:How the gks-U scholarship will help unlock my full potential in civil engineering

4 - Merged: Laying the foundation for success:My journey to becoming a civil engineer despite the odds Pursuing a...

ScholarshipMaria22 - Aug 26, 2024Maria22 - Sep 3, 2024
Topic: weekly expenses of families in a country

2 - You cannot use exterior links as a title in your essay. This is a forum rule violation and I...

Writing FeedbackHieu3110 - Aug 26, 2024Holt - Aug 27, 2024
[IELTS] EMPLOYEES 4-WEEK HOLIDAY A YEAR

2 - Limit your writing to only 300 words for the task 2 essay. You have a total of 1 hour...

Writing Feedbackphucan9906 - Aug 26, 2024Holt - Aug 27, 2024
Ielts writing about main fuels in the production in UK from 1981 to 2000

3 - you should add more comparative of each subject to make your response more longer. try to enhance vocabularies field...

Writing Feedbacknhatminhdeptrai - Aug 25, 2024phucan9906 - Aug 26, 2024
Molecular Biology and Public Health - Study Plan for NYCU PhD Application

2 - This is an empty study plan. It does nit tell me what the focus of your dissertation will be...

GraduateSaira Khurshid - Aug 25, 2024Holt - Aug 25, 2024
Applying to Columbia University Undergrad Fly-In Program for the school of Engineering,

2 - Your presentation is highly confusing and difficult to understand because you are trying to respond to several questions within...

UndergraduateBandup123 - Aug 25, 2024Holt - Aug 25, 2024
It is not necessary to travel to other places to learn the culture of other people.

3 - In the first paragraph, you should write your view 'i strongly agree' or 'i disagree' at first, that can...

Writing Feedbacknateq136 - Aug 24, 2024phucan9906 - Aug 26, 2024
Writing Task 2 - Competition vs Cooperation - Discuss both views and give your opinion

2 - The word "each" indicates one, singular. So the term "others" should be in singular form as well (other)...

Writing Feedbackjoohyerin - Aug 23, 2024Holt - Aug 25, 2024
Academic Decathlon - [QuestBridge] Essay about the challenges I have faced

2 - This is a compelling story to share for your application consideration. While it is insightful, I feel like the...

Undergraduatethreeclaws - Aug 23, 2024Holt - Aug 25, 2024
IELTS WRITING TASK 2: Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is...

2 - Kindly remember to follow the correct formatting for the written text. Each paragraph must be separated by a space...

Writing FeedbackBachHocIELTS - Aug 22, 2024Holt - Aug 25, 2024
Men and women should not share the same responsibilities

4 - @nghiadeptrai123 Well, from my own experience, I think that you should have to fix some grammatical errors: - "taking...

Writing Feedbacknghiadeptrai123 - Aug 22, 2024yamitohikari2217 - Sep 7, 2024
CHILDREN AND TV vs. SPENDING TIME OUTDOORS

2 - The writer's opinion did not meet the task accuracy requirements of the presentation. You only repeated the required information...

Writing FeedbackTran Bao Tran - Aug 21, 2024Holt - Aug 22, 2024
Degree in Law in South Korea - Personal statement GKS

2 - You must underscore from the very beginning that you plan to pursue a degree in international law and not...

ScholarshipHenry56 - Aug 21, 2024Holt - Aug 22, 2024
How many exchange students from universities between Europe and Australia - IELTS 1

2 - The trending statement is a bit confusing to read. The lack of reference to what years are being indicated...

Writing Feedbackquanpham - Aug 21, 2024Holt - Aug 22, 2024
[WRITING TASK 1] the number of enquiries in one city over a six months

5 - I suggest a new overall to make your essay more interesting, you could write: Overall, the number of inquiries...

Writing FeedbackDo Duy Hai - Aug 21, 2024pthngannnn - Sep 11, 2024
Free Take Home Naloxone is not a moral dilemma, but an evidenced based life saving measure.

2 - It is best to avoid rhetorical questions when writing your introduction. Keep the focus on the information you are...

Research Papersgen2143524 - Aug 19, 2024Holt - Aug 20, 2024
To become a good student, what qualities are needed? Propose your specific plan for university

2 - Do not focus the discussion in the university, the course you want to take, or the program you plan...

Scholarshipueyreurysjs - Aug 19, 2024Holt - Aug 22, 2024
[IELTS] Drawbacks of lacking reading and writing skill and how government deal with the problem

2 - This is not an acceptable answer. You were asked what the government can do to help the people...

Writing Feedbackphucan9906 - Aug 19, 2024Holt - Aug 22, 2024
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