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What are three weaknesses or improvements I can make to my research paper? Topic : Online Learning ï

2 - The main area for improvement that I can see in this research paper is the need to personalize the...

Research Papersnoe2156918 - May 7, 2025Holt - May 11, 2025
My Data Engineering and Analytics M.Sc. Letter of Purpose

2 - You are supposed to write a statement of purpose. I have not read any purpose related information in your...

Lettersyigitcanh - May 5, 2025Holt - May 11, 2025
IELTS WRITING TASK 1: REDEVELOPMENT PLANS FOR A UNIVERSITY SPORTS CENTRE

2 - The report is over written. You should not write more than 200 words because this is only a 20...

Writing Feedbackalpaca - May 4, 2025Holt - May 11, 2025
Writing task 1 - tourists visiting four different attractions in Scotland

2 - Your report formatting needs work. You have to present your information within 3-4 paragraphs that are clearly separated by...

Writing FeedbackKany2711 - May 4, 2025Holt - May 11, 2025
(IELTS WRITING TASK 2) Many nations have recently decreased the retirement age

2 - Incorrect vocabulary. This should be "themselves", Them is the plural form of "himself" or "herself". Self in plural...

Writing FeedbackPPTran - May 2, 2025Holt - May 11, 2025
The Legalization of Marijuana

2 - I think that the research paper should focus more on the direct relationships between the outdated laws, the lifting...

Research PapersMguevara6239 - May 2, 2025Holt - May 11, 2025
(IELTS WRITING TASK 1) ENERGY CONSUMPTION IN USA

3 - I would like you to play with the words, albeit sentences. Your writing would give you a solid 6.5....

Writing Feedbackksthuw - Apr 30, 2025zob00010 - May 9, 2025
IELTS 2: Financial and social status Vs Old-fashioned values

2 - The essay itself is too long. You only have 40 minutes to complete this writing task. You cannot write...

Writing FeedbackVinh309 - Apr 30, 2025Holt - Apr 30, 2025
gks sop - majoring in biological science

2 - The essay is extremely difficult to follow. I can sense your excitement in writing the essay, which caused you...

ScholarshipIanKookoo - Apr 30, 2025Holt - Apr 30, 2025
Studies and degrees - How will this scholarship contribute to the organisation's human resource

2 - You are totally off base with your response. The question being asked pertains to your current career attachment. Where...

ScholarshipJason12 - Apr 30, 2025Holt - Apr 30, 2025
Why is sustainability important to you? - STEM Scholarship Program Essay

2 - Based on my review of your responses to the first prompt, you should consider combining the first and second...

Scholarshipraemud - Apr 30, 2025Holt - May 11, 2025
Writing task 2: Extinct animals

2 - The essay is not long enough to receive maximum scoring consideration per rubic. if you want to achieve maximum...

Writing FeedbackKany2711 - Apr 29, 2025Holt - Apr 29, 2025
Changes in the library's layout and design - ELTS - MAP

3 - @Holt Can you explain more clearly for me? What should I do to improve my score in this test?...

Writing Feedbackmai11qq - Apr 27, 2025mai11qq - May 4, 2025
The Change Nerualink Can Have

2 - The first half of the paper is an empty discussion that does not move the topic forward nor introduce...

Research PapersYurpin - Apr 26, 2025Holt - Apr 27, 2025
When Choice Becomes a Crime - Abortion Paper

2 - Your introduction to the topic is a redundancy. You appear to be discussing the same information several times in...

Research PapersNaeec - Apr 25, 2025Holt - Apr 27, 2025
IELTS WRITING TASK 2: PEER PRESSURE

2 - This would be considered a failing essay because it altered the prompt discussion requirements. The paraphrasing is incorrect and...

Writing FeedbackDThanh - Apr 24, 2025Holt - Apr 27, 2025
Breaking Down the Divide: Understanding and Ending Gender Inequality

2 - The research is too over reaching. There are way too many topics being discussed, which has led to a...

Writing FeedbackMarvelQueen93 - Apr 21, 2025Holt - Apr 27, 2025
More Than Grades / Mantal Health Research Paper

2 - It is important that you open the discussion regarding this topic with more than just information that can be...

Research PapersANT2192594 - Apr 21, 2025Holt - Apr 27, 2025
Bachelor of Science in Management and Data Science - Motivation Letter for University Application

2 - The motivation letter is good but too generic in terms of the academic and career motivations that led you...

Lettersfranki - Apr 20, 2025Holt - Apr 27, 2025
Master of Entrepreneurship and Innovation - AAS-Why did you choose?

2 - Your response does not show a familiarity with the university, its community, nor the course curriculum. There must be...

Scholarshipnini_Maniva - Apr 17, 2025Holt - Apr 17, 2025
Supply Chain Management Master's Program Motivaston Letter

3 - Thanks a lot for your support....

Letterssimelsylmz - Apr 14, 2025simelsylmz - Apr 17, 2025
The effects of social media on mental health

2 - The introduction feels like you were just constantly restating the same information over several sentences. It was actually very...

Research PapersPvargas4 - Apr 14, 2025Holt - Apr 17, 2025
Export destinations of Vietnam's garment and textile industry

2 - The report is not maximizing the word count allowance to reach a more impressive final score. The simplicity of...

Writing FeedbackNTGB B2 - Apr 13, 2025Holt - Apr 14, 2025
The Road to a Healthier Country

3 - This is an insightful and important perspective on the U.S. healthcare system. I agree that preventative care is key...

Research PapersGracattack00 - Apr 13, 2025emmarose55 - Apr 21, 2025
Excessive social media use causing anxiety and depression in teens

3 - Great post! Excessive social media use can indeed lead to anxiety and depression in teens, with constant comparison and...

Writing Feedbackjoie barrow - Apr 11, 2025emmarose55 - Apr 20, 2025
Profits Over People: How Corporate Lobbying Endangers Public Health and the Environment

2 - The introduction is good. It effectively portrays an explanation of what lobbying it all about and it gives a...

Research Paperskath12 - Apr 6, 2025Holt - Apr 6, 2025
The issues of homelessness and drug use - research paper

3 - @Holt well my idea is that a clean body will give the person one less thing to worry about...

Research PapersMrsmiles40 - Apr 1, 2025Mrsmiles40 - Apr 5, 2025
ECE or CE University of Washington Transfer Personal Statement

3 - @Holt This is my essay for ECE college admissions hopefully it addresses some of the weaknesses. Please start...

UndergraduateMissYam - Apr 1, 2025MissYam - Apr 4, 2025
ICT Help desk Team Leader - Motivation for Applying for an Australia Awards Scholarship

3 - @Holt Thank you for the feedback , I will take into consideration....

Lettersjasirias13 - Apr 1, 2025jasirias13 - Apr 1, 2025
Benefits of Video Games to Cognitive Function

2 - Develop the thesis statement here. What are parents curious about? Why? Does this entice them to play video...

Research PapersSalvadorlop - Mar 31, 2025Holt - Apr 1, 2025
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