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PhD sop - life sciences

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5 - Right: It's always a good idea to ask for clarification from teachers rather than just guessing what they want....

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Discipline, resolution, perfection. - Common App 150 word essay

9 - Then the school bus stops and I wake to reality As the school bus lurches to a stop,...

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Stuck on UC prompt, there is nothing really exciting in my life..

15 - lol Your sentence structure is flawed. For example your second sentence. Your tenses need work. Following your passions. Your...

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A concise narrative about an important event - UF Architecture college essay!

17 - You could leave out the over-used rainbow/rain statement altogether....

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"Combining sports and grades" - UT important issue essay

3 - As Sean said, it's "could have" not "could of." Where does this common error come from? could...

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Argumentative essay on 1984 - Outline

40 - If that were the whole story, there would be no war, no violence, etc. However, watching people fight...

Book Reportsyonman - Jul 16, 2009EF_Sean - Jul 24, 2009
About my environment - admission essay topic

7 - Can you unify all three points with a common thread? That would go a long way towards making the...

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health and personal fitness, interview three people and back ur thesis up!

3 - Indeed. You cannot say that the amount of responsibility alone determines, or is even the main determinant, in how...

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Narrative Essay (Warning: slightly depressing)!

11 - ^Hmm I did not spot that. Well spotted Sean!...

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Pro Con Analysis (Immigrants to Learn English)

19 - Yes, Simone's suggestion is in fact one that comes down squarely on the con side. It...

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My Heritage - in my own country I feel the most foreign. Common App. Essay

10 - No problem. I look forward to reading your next draft....

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Personal statement for Masters degree in Chemical Engineering help

5 - It's not bad at all, but a little bit dull. This essay is supposed to show individuality and give...

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Similarities between myself and any vegetable

17 - If i were you i would use my most favorite vegitable!...

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Stanford Experience Essay

7 - The entire essay sort of suffers from focusing on an experience that stoked your enthusiasm for engineering, when that...

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CBEST: The Age of Invention

6 - thank you! I see your points. Maybe I will add a bit more details to that example to clarify...

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Specific short-term career goals - MBA Admission Essay

4 - Try to say everything you do now in your essay, but in about 70% of the current word count....

Graduateefgeorge18 - Jul 14, 2009EF_Sean - Jul 18, 2009
I'm supposed to argue whether "Stone Angel" is a tragedy or not?

7 - Don't forget to post your latest draft so we can offer you more feedback....

Book Reportsfallin_romeo - Jul 14, 2009EF_Sean - Jul 18, 2009
Law School Admission Essay with Special Circumstances

2 - The term "a statistic" usually refers to somebody who is a high-school dropout or a drug addict or...

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"Panic. Chaos. Insanity." - Stanford Roommate Essay

17 - Did you ever come up with a revised draft for this one?...

Undergraduateaan027 - Jul 14, 2009EF_Sean - Jul 28, 2009
'history and international situations' - UT essay: important issue

9 - Could you demonstrate some of your key points with specific examples? For example? As evidenced...

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Satisfactions from activities as a physician - Columbia University Secondary

35 - As a musician, you might benefit from exposing yourself to as many different genres as possible. Hip hop on...

Undergraduatevietfun2k - Jul 13, 2009EF_Simone - Jul 21, 2009
UCF Admissions essay - family history environment / culture - suggestions / proofread?

21 - "Living in a different country for most of my life forced me to become absorbed into its culture." You...

Undergraduatekrisdp25 - Jul 13, 2009EF_Sean - Jul 26, 2009
research paper "influence of financial status parents on their children" i need

5 - Do you need to actually conduct research or just read and write about studies that others have done. The...

Research Paperskasiya - Jul 13, 2009EF_Simone - Jul 14, 2009
Any suggestions on this "tent" descriptive essay?

5 - Overall this is really quite interesting. Try not to get carried away, though. Sometimes, your imagery becomes a bit...

Writing Feedbackdancer09 - Jul 13, 2009EF_Sean - Jul 14, 2009
"We the People" - Undergrad Admissions Essay for Ivies? Critique =)

29 - How are the other paragraphs? Do I focus too much on the setting of the competition (in the first...

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Good words flagged as bad by spell checkers

15 - Oh. I spent the first seven years of school in French Immersion, so the rule was pretty well ingrained...

Grammar, UsageEF_Simone - Jul 13, 2009EF_Sean - Jul 23, 2009
[TOEFL] Big company vs Small company

6 - Proofreading carefully is the key. It's so easy to use "site" when you mean "cite" or "wright" when you...

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General Ielts: Governments should encourage employers to choose young people?

7 - In your last paragraph, i prefer "In conclusion, ..." instead of "For these reasons...". Reason is, it is more...

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Tools to attract people to work.

6 - thank you sean... and thank all who helped me......

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