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History, Royal Engineer essay.

6 - You also need to work on integrating your quotations better. "The following quote proves my point" is a horrible...

Writing Feedbackeddy9898 - May 23, 2009EF_Sean - May 28, 2009
Toefl: Is this good enough to get 24 score in writing section.

3 - Aye, the more concise the better, as multiple writers have noted. However, your fix for the sentence changes his...

Writing Feedbackbiggestv - May 23, 2009EF_Sean - May 24, 2009
Clep essay-Laws should not be rigid or fixed. Instead, they should be flexible.

4 - Your essay is very general and need specefic examples. Your grammer still need improvement. so I think to improve...

Writing FeedbackIndian - May 22, 2009biggestv - May 27, 2009
Originality means putting old ideas together in new ways

7 - Good work. I liked how you really explored your thesis statement throughout your essay....

EssaysIndian - May 21, 2009Geoff - May 27, 2009
students should work in groups

6 - Peter, You did an excellent job of providing examples for your facts. Good work....

EssaysPeterV - May 21, 2009Geoff - May 28, 2009
TOEFL - Prefer to work for a large company; good material rewards

7 - Actually, it is generally a good idea to avoid labeling your conclusion with one of those phrases. It should...

Writing Feedbackwing - May 22, 2009EF_Sean - Jun 6, 2009
CLEP English Comp. -- "That Government is Best Which Governs Least"

5 - Essay is very nice, I am also planning to take the same test. Your essay helps me knowing some...

Writing FeedbackTWRTW106 - May 21, 2009Indian - May 22, 2009
effective or ineffective decision making and leadership - research question

5 - You'll do best, I think, if you can do as the assignment requires, and write from experience. The assignment...

Research Papersmsennie - May 21, 2009EF_Simone - May 27, 2009
people set the goals in the life which they think they can achieve

6 - Thanks a billion Kevin, I will surely do these things. No I don't have to write sepecifically about...

UndergraduateIndian - May 19, 2009Indian - May 21, 2009
Reading Based and Comparsion

4 - it says to find the period of the style's artwork I cant really seem to find it? Hercules the...

Book ReportsMoeMoe1 - May 20, 2009MoeMoe1 - May 25, 2009
Making this the most persuasive research essay

8 - I'd say your essay needs to deal more with the issue of where graffiti is placed. I don't think...

Research Papersgiovanni33 - May 20, 2009EF_Sean - May 23, 2009
School bus trip - a story

4 - Better yet, write the story so that the theme emerges from it without your protagonist having to reflect on...

Writing Feedbackceberus - May 20, 2009EF_Sean - May 23, 2009
VIETNAM PAPER- Why did we lose?

3 - So, did all of Asia fall under communist rule? Or did the U.S. involvement in Vietnam prevent that?...

Writing FeedbackSmartFelix - May 20, 2009EF_Sean - May 21, 2009
University of Wisconsin essay help - technically I am transferring

6 - I'd say the essays are pretty important, if only because they show how much a student wants to get...

Undergraduatenodnarb402 - May 20, 2009EF_Sean - May 23, 2009
Admission Letter to a master program of Logistics and Supply Chain Management

NEW - This is my admission letter draft to a master program.There is no word limit, and it is 723 words....

Graduatepia - May 20, 2009 -
Essay on Rating TV Shows and Movies

6 - The main objection to the rating system is that the ratings may not reflect what parents think they do....

Writing Feedbacknick94 - May 20, 2009EF_Sean - May 31, 2009
William Blake Poetry Paper

23 - You might want to introduce the idea that Blake presumably viewed God as a creative force Himself, one who...

PoetryTheAnswer - May 19, 2009EF_Sean - Jun 3, 2009
English Comprehension Clep exam - essay to practice

2 - Maybe the tasks other people give us to do are just as difficult . In the next few paragraphs,...

Writing Feedbackakfir - May 19, 2009EF_Kevin - May 21, 2009
Who was the tragic hero in antigone? creon or antigone? 10th grade essay.

4 - This sentence does not make sense: "In the story Antigone, the tragic hero is always the protagonist's flaw." Do...

Book ReportsLMR_jklmnop - May 19, 2009EF_Sean - May 31, 2009
Is father or mother who play the more important role in building up the children

8 - That's a very good idea, Mel! Another possibly useful source is the book Raising Cain, which discusses the...

EssaysTan Huey Yean - May 19, 2009EF_Simone - May 26, 2009
Macbeth Motif essay. How motif develops Lady Macbeth

4 - To make this essay more readable and easy to understand: (1) Put quotes around "fair is foul and...

Book Reportsgeorgexu316 - May 19, 2009EF_Simone - May 23, 2009
'Traveling back in time' - Physician Assistant -- personal statament

8 - Oh thank you. You are right, I also thought the first sentence didn't make much sense but could not...

Graduatediana_pencheva - May 18, 2009diana_pencheva - Jun 1, 2009
Thousand Splendid Suns Essay Argument Points; thesis

6 - I see that Saffant's due date has passed, so I'll just offer advice for any student stuck at the...

Book Reportssaffant - May 18, 2009EF_Simone - May 23, 2009
TOEFL Essay-It can be quite difficult to learn a new language.

7 - I agree with Kevin -- you will pass! Learning a new language is generally enjoyable but at the...

Writing Feedbackwickyeden - May 18, 2009EF_Simone - May 23, 2009
War -- victor or no victor?   2

45 - Yeah, I'm going to keep a low profile in classes where there aren't multiple choice tests, from now on....

Writing FeedbackMustafa1991 - May 18, 2009Mustafa1991 - Jun 11, 2009
Raising a teenage boy vs teenage girl - writing a comparision and contrast essay

5 - You could even perhaps ask parents who have both a son and daughter about their experiences raising them and...

Essaysliiliiyaanaa - May 17, 2009maextra7 - May 26, 2009
self theme in Night by Elie Wiesel and The Princess Bride by William Goldman

3 - There are so many good quotes about the self in Night. I haven't read The Princess Bride so I...

Book ReportsSn00ty - May 17, 2009Notoman - May 17, 2009
Fashion is unique, it's the walking art. Short Essay for Art Institute in Seattle

4 - I am excited about workin g for a company that not only supports their employees ' imagination and creativity,...

UndergraduateMari_Jo - May 17, 2009EF_Kevin - May 18, 2009
MA thesis... literary theory & criticism

5 - Thanks EF_Sean, Well, to be perfectly honest, I've written 25 pages so far, my final deadline is in...

Dissertationsmesmerized - May 17, 2009mesmerized - Sep 12, 2009
nothing wrong - Young people are less interested in studying than in earning money

5 - Thanx for the feedback guys!...

Writing Feedbackceberus - May 17, 2009ceberus - May 20, 2009
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