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Miracle. The birth of a new child. International Baccalaureate Admission paper.

2 - There we lived for a year or so. Then , we moved to Singapore. I suggest that you...

Undergraduateicemaster2340 - Jan 6, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 7, 2009
'Finance major' - International Student Essay - The Ohio State University

4 - Your essays are so good compared to mine T.T I simply don't know how to edit your essays b/c...

Undergraduatestimpsimp - Jan 6, 2009azncat - Jan 12, 2009
Democracy itself guarantees the right to express; ISSUE OF IMPORTANCE

6 - Maybe like this: Democracy is based on the right to express various ideas, and democracy is supposed to...

Undergraduategdtbj2008 - Jan 6, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 8, 2009
Father's love is deep and silent, and always there it is; he influenced me

5 - please give me more detail advice on grammar. I feel all verbs in past tense a bit weird...I wonder...

Undergraduategdtbj2008 - Jan 6, 2009gdtbj2008 - Jan 7, 2009
Common Application essay- Money

3 - Linnus is absolutely right! you can tell us one of your experience with money stuff (something like that) which...

Undergraduatemenamilad - Jan 6, 2009shine lee - Jan 6, 2009
'Liberalisation of aviation' - Airline deregulation essay

2 - The airline industry currently occupies a very important place in the Irish market, due to both the major changes...

Writing FeedbackTizzy - Jan 6, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 7, 2009
Statement of Purpose / Admission Essay for U of Maryland ME Grad Program

2 - This essay is excellent! You cannot help but write an impressive essay, because you truly are a serious student....

GraduateMrDomino - Jan 6, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 7, 2009
'Golfing activity' - common app short answer

9 - It's pretty good, I had trouble writing mine as well. But i don't see your conclusion...

Undergraduatectoy - Jan 6, 2009songhyunwoo - Jan 10, 2009
'Tupac's changes' - NYU short response

4 - I pretty much reached the character limit with this response already. Thanks for the comments!...

UndergraduateLW Trojan - Jan 6, 2009LW Trojan - Jan 10, 2009
Admission Essay Msc in Managerial and Financial Review!

4 - It is definitely informative about you, but I didn't get a huge "WOW" factor out of it. I would...

Graduatecocoamocha - Jan 6, 2009EF_Constance - Jan 7, 2009
COMMON APP ESSAY: FREE TOPIC. "Ingredients"

3 - LOL! Yea... It is a good idea to give us a good 24 hours before you need the paper;...

Undergraduatepenguin8 - Jan 6, 2009EF_Constance - Jan 9, 2009
Essay comments - "invention that has influenced modern society"

2 - Great job!! My suggestions would be other than calling, what else can a cell phone do that significantly improves...

Writing FeedbackJerrySpock - Jan 6, 2009mikedogg90 - Jan 9, 2009
'People use some drugs, always' - essay about drugs.

8 - People always use some kinds of drugs. Despite the effects of drugs, millions of people constantly consume (abuse?) various...

Writing Feedbackjurgita - Jan 6, 2009mikedogg90 - Jan 9, 2009
'a developed and a developing economy' - U of T essay ( issue of importance)

7 - You've got it. You definitely answered the prompt... Just make the final tweaks to the essay and send it!!!...

Undergraduateshamveel - Jan 6, 2009EF_Constance - Jan 7, 2009
U Washington, How to contribute to this community

3 - "I hope to invite schoolmates to my hometown to see how exploded our buses and supermarkets are." Exploded is...

UndergraduateBaiwanyu - Jan 6, 2009EF_Sean - Jan 6, 2009
Villanova University Supp. "Thai boy Chart"

12 - Yes, we are both nerds. :-) Continuing in that vein, I would say that "opposed to" is correct, as...

Undergraduatesolomonsun - Jan 6, 2009EF_Sean - Jan 8, 2009
common app essay: my father

2 - Until I was 15, I thought that I was really lucky to have a father like my daddy. ...

Undergraduateshine lee - Jan 6, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 6, 2009
Essay : Issue of importance (about a pessimistic friend?)

16 - Thankyou so so so much ! Thats just what i needed!...

Undergraduatetasmia01 - Jan 6, 2009tasmia01 - Jan 15, 2009
Sharps and Flats - common app essay...

10 - well, here is a few suggestions, not the best but its all I got. If there is a...

Undergraduateonindo - Jan 6, 2009icemaster2340 - Jan 6, 2009
UT essay ("a pair of the beautiful earnings")

7 - Great, it is strong as long as there is at least one sentence that powerfully stells the central truth...

Undergraduatetasmia01 - Jan 6, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 6, 2009
Odyssey essay; 'Sure God created man before woman...'

6 - Well, for a high school or undergraduate essay... really for any essay... quotes can be added in at the...

Writing Feedbacksczyra - Jan 5, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 6, 2009
Colorado State University Admissions

4 - Kevin's suggestions are excellent, especially the part about beginning with "Now would be a good time to explain how...

UndergraduateCokeShred - Jan 5, 2009EF_Sean - Jan 6, 2009
Peony in love is my favorite book. Take a read of this essay

5 - Jerry, that is some great advice. Actually, the thesis sentence often goes at the end of the first paragraph....

Writing Feedbackjenf3r - Jan 5, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 6, 2009
Writing a term paper in a Rogerian style..

4 - First, introduce the issue in an intro paragraph. Tell what the issue is, and give a little description (in...

EssaysRaYaNe - Jan 5, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 6, 2009
Essay comments - "A place you go to relax"

4 - Thank you two for the feedback! I will change the end of the first paragraph to (my thesis statement):...

Writing FeedbackJerrySpock - Jan 5, 2009JerrySpock - Jan 5, 2009
VCU Personal Statement

2 - Instead of writing "I would like to" twice, change the second one to: I hope to become a...

Undergraduatetiararkelly - Jan 5, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 5, 2009
USC essay "My best friend gone slim" - Tell us about an external influence that affected you

4 - thanks for all the useful comments! i have also found it quite lengthy, thanks for pointing out that too...

Undergraduatesolomonsun - Jan 5, 2009solomonsun - Jan 6, 2009
common app essay, topic of your choice ("Mona Lisa smiles")

4 - heres some suggestions. At least Mona Lisa's smile is a suggestion of happiness. My smile is sometimes...

Undergraduatelee337 - Jan 5, 2009icemaster2340 - Jan 6, 2009
"Food heaven", "financial capital" and "shopping Mecca" - "Issue of local concern" Michigan essay

2 - While Hong Kong does consist of those things, it is also true that... Or: While Hong Kong...

UndergraduateA346 - Jan 5, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 5, 2009
Could you assist me if these question are well answered (the programme)

3 - Yes, good advice! For question #1, add a sentence about the specific sustainable energy initiatives that interest you... and...

Graduateetchinamano - Jan 5, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 5, 2009
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