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statement of purpose for environmental architecture.

3 - At the same time, however, we are realizing problems associated with abnormal weather, pollution of air, water and ground....

Graduatealokshere - Dec 28, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 29, 2008
Why Columbia? (the amazing research facilities)

6 - Great, thanks everyone!...

Undergraduatedsacks - Dec 28, 2008dsacks - Dec 29, 2008
EMORY why essay, thanks a lot for your comments!

6 - Yeah. cm22, I checked through and there's nothing about word limit. I was worried cause mine is not that...

Undergraduatecm22 - Dec 28, 2008skim - Dec 30, 2008
why rice social science? eh it seems too typical...

5 - great advice! I will definitely change it so i can show more passion! thanks cm22 and I hope we...

Undergraduatedebaterchick09 - Dec 28, 2008debaterchick09 - Dec 28, 2008
Penn: Professor and why? 'Mr. Diebold'

9 - its learned not learnt what you have is extremely well written but you dont mention anything specific about...

UndergraduateHiroShima11 - Dec 28, 2008sportsguy884 - Dec 30, 2008
commonapp essay: the park has become my personal therapist

4 - Thanks a bunch guys :] I hope it's really as good as you say it is. I wasn't too...

Undergraduateodangletsbang - Dec 28, 2008odangletsbang - Dec 29, 2008
Research Proposal (Black Entertainers in Japan)

3 - Thanks. I worked pretty hard on it. :-D...

Research PapersPrinny04 - Dec 28, 2008Prinny04 - Jan 8, 2009
Common App - "Childhood's just like a playground. Think about it."

3 - Thank you Sean! And if anyone else has comments, I would like to know how you felt after...

Undergraduaten00bl3t - Dec 28, 2008n00bl3t - Dec 29, 2008
georgia tech essay [taking a year off school before attending college]

3 - If you were to delay going to college by one year, what would you do with that time? And,...

Undergraduateqzhang - Dec 28, 2008adimauro - Dec 31, 2008
Common App Essay - Not specified topic yet.

6 - Wow, thanks you guys very much, I'm influenced by my Vietnamese writing style too much, that's why there are...

Undergraduatekofpower2411 - Dec 28, 2008kofpower2411 - Dec 29, 2008
Entrance Essay - Master of Public Affairs

4 - You've done a great job writing this essay. The grammar is nearly flawless, and your style flows smoothly. I...

Graduatemkp622 - Dec 28, 2008EF_Sean - Jan 5, 2009
Common App Essay - she became my "Best Buddy"

2 - Overall a strong essay. A couple of minor grammatical points: "even as a member of an organization that...

UndergraduateKaytee17 - Dec 28, 2008EF_Sean - Dec 28, 2008
NYU application short answers (cutting the things I wrote down)

7 - Thank you so much Mr.Kevin! :) I was worried about the second one you corrected. Glad I finally...

Undergraduateskim - Dec 28, 2008skim - Dec 29, 2008
Personal Statement, taking pictures as my hobby.

8 - Also, when working on the transitions, you may want to use them to emphasize that the essay is really...

Undergraduatejohnatronecl - Dec 28, 2008EF_Sean - Jan 4, 2009
Common app, two essays on music. Which one's better?

3 - Wow! These are both really fantastic essays! If I had to choose, I would pick the first one because...

Undergraduatecoolshadow888z - Dec 28, 2008PoliChick - Dec 29, 2008
NU statement (Center for Student Involvement)

5 - EF_Kevin, thanks, I will defiantly check it out. I just wonder if anyone could edit my short answers....

Undergraduatejenny08066 - Dec 28, 2008JohnDavid - Dec 29, 2008
Common app short answer - Fiber optics (150 words)

5 - Start with an intro sentence that captures the central truth of the essay. Three-dimensional vision has been used to...

Undergraduateabcdefg - Dec 28, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 29, 2008
NYU 4 Short Answers (family, life at NYU, talent show...)

3 - Maybe Christine is right to suggest cutting this part, but if it is important to you to keep it,...

UndergraduateLimon1909 - Dec 28, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 29, 2008
Brown short answers (Asian culture)

6 - Thanks Kelvin and surfsandiego for your comments!...

Undergraduatekim1234 - Dec 28, 2008kim1234 - Dec 29, 2008
Leadership for University of Bufallo

2 - You need to stop writing in abstract terms and start writing using concrete examples. There were people you idolized...

Undergraduatefelixs07 - Dec 28, 2008EF_Sean - Dec 29, 2008
University of Illlinois (academic interests vs professional goals)

4 - Yes, right on! Sean was probably looking at your thread title: (i.e. academic interests vs professional goals) IT...

Undergraduatemustaa - Dec 28, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 29, 2008
'Good education and hard work ' - my grandma, a significant person

5 - i think that you should include more personal experiences that have been inspired by your grandmother....

Undergraduateuhlyssuh - Dec 28, 2008neonalchemy - Jan 1, 2009
CORNELL SUPPLEMENTAL ESSAY (an interest in the sciences through my courses and activities)

3 - My passion for biology began when I took AP Biology. I found biology to be engaging, because of its...

Undergraduateaj7514 - Dec 28, 2008aj7514 - Dec 29, 2008
NYU Short Answers--(singing, bicycle, summer vacation)

5 - Molly and Christine, please check out the contributor page (link at the bottom of the screen), because you could...

Undergraduatemgbinger - Dec 28, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 29, 2008
common app short answer ("the smallest player on the court")

4 - Standing one inch short of five feet, and always the smallest player on the court, the odds have always...

Undergraduateuhlyssuh - Dec 28, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 29, 2008
most appealing about Columbia (afraid it Doesnt make sense...)

6 - My generation needs to face the fact that the job market is increasingly competitive due to the economic crisis....

Undergraduateyfung91 - Dec 28, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 29, 2008
Rochester supplement (different points of view)

4 - For any foreign students coming to the United States, it is difficult to adapt to the new environment. I...

UndergraduateVeggy - Dec 28, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 29, 2008
Need help with one of the Stanford's prompts?

4 - Thanks for the response. And can anyone tell me how to remove or delete this thread, because all...

Undergraduateavneeeet - Dec 28, 2008avneeeet - Dec 29, 2008
HEOP ESSAY for PARTICIPATION... FREE MONEY.

4 - thank you very much...

Undergraduatefelixs07 - Dec 28, 2008felixs07 - Dec 31, 2008
why swarthmore essay- Quaker backgroung

9 - Kevin, thank you so much for your help! You are amazing :)...

Undergraduatedebaterchick09 - Dec 28, 2008debaterchick09 - Dec 28, 2008
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