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Looking for help - graduate school admission personal statement MSW program

2 - Greetings! Admissions essays can be a bit tricky because most people feel uncomfortable writing about themselves, especially when...

Essayslois - Oct 20, 2006EF_Team2 - Oct 21, 2006
Expository Essay question - choosing and re-writing my essay?

16 - Greetings! Yes, I am very impressed with your progress indeed! You have vastly improved the grammar, punctuation, and...

Undergraduateeconsangel - Oct 20, 2006EF_Team2 - Nov 6, 2006
"One minute for yourself" book!

5 - Oh, Hi ! I am sorry for my late reply, because I am very busy with my final...

Essayseconsangel - Oct 19, 2006econsangel - Nov 6, 2006
Something Deeper - What am I looking for? Why am I here? Meaning of Life?

2 - Greetings! This is an interesting topic! I'll point out a few things I noticed that you might consider...

Writing Feedbackstarphyre - Oct 17, 2006EF_Team2 - Oct 18, 2006
FSU Admission Essay (confidence and leadership)

4 - Greetings! Yes, it is better -- it is very good! (You may have overlooked "aggression" in the last...

UndergraduateConfusedmiamiboy - Oct 17, 2006EF_Team2 - Oct 17, 2006
On the morning I've been waiting for all year!

2 - Greetings! Technically a "run-on sentence" is actually two complete sentences with no punctuation dividing them. I don't see...

Writing Feedbackfiguresk8tingchik - Oct 15, 2006EF_Team2 - Oct 19, 2006
WW1 , the Treaty of Versalilles, WW11

2 - Greetings! You have an excellent start here! I agree that your paragraphs could use just a bit of...

Essaysjoshua_arebalo - Oct 14, 2006EF_Team2 - Oct 14, 2006
Starting to write a paper on the topic: Smoking in public places

5 - Very interesting topic. It is always good to take Mr. ah_Zafari's advice....

EssaysAiguna - Oct 13, 2006amitt - Aug 17, 2012
How to Deal with a Difficult Dissertation Advisor?

NEW - How many of us have shown up to an advisor meeting with a stack of carefully acquired research and...

DissertationsEF_Team - Oct 12, 2006 -
Help, I'm new here. Is it okay to use parenthese around...

2 - Greetings! Sometimes it's a judgment call as to whether quotation marks are required or not, but I think...

EssaysChloeSong - Oct 12, 2006EF_Team2 - Oct 13, 2006
'Woods Riding and The Dirt Bike' - Process essay review

2 - Greetings! You have done a wonderful job of describing the process of riding a dirt bike. I almost...

Writing FeedbackBadAngel299 - Oct 11, 2006EF_Team2 - Oct 12, 2006
Story telling topic; essay based on an interview with a member of your family

12 - Greetings! Your story is definitely progressing and getting better every time you work on it! First, I'll answer...

Undergraduateeconsangel - Oct 11, 2006EF_Team2 - Oct 15, 2006
'The cynic is one' - UA Essay

5 - Greetings! I have to say, your writing is utterly enjoyable to read! I think BOTH your essays show...

UndergraduateViracocha - Oct 11, 2006EF_Team2 - Oct 30, 2006
The Difference Between Personal and Professional Relationship

3 - Greetings! While we do not write essays for students on this site, I'd be happy to give you...

EssaysPraveen - Oct 9, 2006EF_Team2 - Oct 10, 2006
The damnation of the canyon is one man's account

2 - Greetings! You've done a good job of expressing your disagreement with the author's views. I'm guessing "The damnation...

Writing Feedbackarkaudio123 - Oct 4, 2006EF_Team2 - Oct 5, 2006
Future of Media Conclusion - (High School)

5 - Thanks for pointing out those problems, I'll fix up as much as I can and then see if I...

Writing Feedbacknjbignell - Oct 4, 2006njbignell - Oct 4, 2006
Doctor Faustus Essay

2 - Greetings! While I think you have a good rough draft here, I do have a few suggestions that...

Writing Feedbackjeffspears - Oct 2, 2006EF_Team2 - Oct 2, 2006
Paper on an econ. concept that help u understand an issue in ur life

10 - Greetings! You are certainly working hard to improve your writing; that's great! I have to say, I have...

Undergraduateeconsangel - Sep 26, 2006EF_Team2 - Oct 3, 2006
Who is a villain? Need help with essay on Villain of Canadian history

3 - Greetings! When you are looking for someone who is the "most" anything, it is often subjective -- that...

EssaysVlad - Sep 25, 2006EF_Team2 - Sep 25, 2006
'Attack of the Bees' - essay bout a day I will never forget

3 - Greetings! Your essay does, indeed, have details and coherence! Just a few little things pop out to me....

Writing FeedbackBadAngel299 - Sep 24, 2006EF_Team2 - Sep 25, 2006
MOVIE THEME EDITING

5 - Greetings! I think "cause" is the proper word there. The part I have trouble with is "do everything...

Essaysstartanewlife - Sep 17, 2006EF_Team2 - Sep 19, 2006
Paper On Theologians.

5 - Greetings! While I can't give you a lot of information specifically on theologians since I'm not an expert...

EssaysVlad - Sep 16, 2006EF_Team2 - Sep 22, 2006
Nazi Germany was a totalitarian state

2 - Greetings! It is always important to keep in mind that the function of writing is to communicate. If...

Writing Feedbackougoah - Sep 16, 2006EF_Team2 - Sep 16, 2006
The Things They Carried By Tim O'Brien

12 - Greetings! I couldn't quite tell from your post just what your questions are. Can you be more specific?...

Essayssamsung - Sep 16, 2006EF_Team2 - Dec 13, 2006
Some information about Ibesn

4 - Greetings again! Perhaps I should have said The Ibsen Society of America. The information on their site seems...

EssaysEileen - Sep 15, 2006EF_Team2 - Sep 16, 2006
Need help with a university essay (structure and building up)

4 - some people say unis look quite heavily on supplement essays cos its basically the only part where you can...

EssaysVlad - Sep 12, 2006jeziker - Jan 14, 2009
My review on Henrick Ibsen's A Doll's House

3 - Thanks a lot. I'll try to improve my writing....

Book Reportssmskamel - Sep 12, 2006smskamel - Sep 13, 2006
MAJOR CONCERNS on T.S. Eliot's context revealed in The Love Song of J Alfred

3 - Thanks for your suggestion....

Writing Feedbackougoah - Sep 12, 2006ougoah - Sep 13, 2006
Christianity in Beowulf ; Is Beowulf is a Christian poem or not?

2 - Greetings! You have written an excellent essay! While it is impressive and very nearly perfect, I have just...

Writing Feedbackjeffspears - Sep 11, 2006EF_Team2 - Sep 11, 2006
Metaphor; we are constantly hearing and using it in our daily lives

NEW - Although we do not always see it so obviously, we are constantly hearing and using metaphors in our daily...

Grammar, UsageEF_Team - Sep 10, 2006 -
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