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Thesis statement: technology and people; space and isolation

4 - It must be cohesive and coherent. It must contain precise vocabulary. The grammar must be varied and accurate. Each...

Essaysahgrissom - Sep 13, 2007iCan - Oct 4, 2011
Eng101 essay (personal essay); natural disater?

11 - Greetings! I've done some more editing for you: After seeing the baby, we were very excited. But...

Essaysnewworld - Sep 13, 2007EF_Team2 - Oct 5, 2007
Position Paper: Does it need to have only two sides?

2 - Greetings! Normally, in a position paper, you would take a position regarding the issue, and give your opinion...

Essaysenglinquirer - Sep 13, 2007EF_Team2 - Sep 14, 2007
Stereotypes on the music side - Division And Classification

4 - Greetings! Your essay has some interesting information! I have some editing suggestions for you: these Metalheads are...

Writing FeedbackReinhardt - Sep 13, 2007EF_Team2 - Sep 17, 2007
Memory is an attachment to our physical selves; Reincarnation / Process of memory

3 - Greetings, and thank you for your remarks Sarah. Something I would like to add, hopefully making it more...

Writing FeedbackRajiv - Sep 11, 2007Rajiv - Sep 12, 2007
Need help on topic novel "Im not scared" by Niccolo Ammaniti

2 - Greetings! While I haven't read the novel, I can try to get you pointed in the right direction....

Book Reportsstudmaster - Sep 11, 2007EF_Team2 - Sep 12, 2007
'Breeze to find a job after graduation' - FSU admission

NEW - Hello the topic for the essay is (what is the best advice you have ever received, and why?) and...

Undergraduatedarca17 - Sep 10, 2007 -
I want to be able to get as much help as possible in my English class.

NEW - Writing Problem #1 Since I was a child, I have always loved the sound of music. When I...

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organisation competition and environment

2 - Greetings! This is a topic which has stirred quite a lot of debate in the UK. Your paper...

Research Papersousman - Sep 9, 2007EF_Team2 - Sep 10, 2007
The organizational behavior in the Army - help with thesis statement

2 - Greetings! I think you've crafted a very good thesis statement! I have just a few small editing suggestions:...

Writing Feedbackmonifah - Sep 8, 2007EF_Team2 - Sep 8, 2007
Preparing for TOEFL IBT test - need advice on how to write better

2 - Greetings! It's always a challenge to write a good essay, but particularly so when you have to write...

Essaysphuongle - Sep 7, 2007EF_Team2 - Sep 8, 2007
Writing Pro-Con Essays about same sex marriages.

NEW - What cons are there for same-sex marriages? What are the pros for approving same sex marriage? These are the...

EssaysEF_Team - May 15, 2007 -
MLA Style - Quoting Quotes in Documents / Comparative Essays?

12 - Citing information from a research paper that is itself cited within the paper Can anyone provide any advice...

Grammar, UsageMMMarie - Sep 6, 2007chase345 - Mar 4, 2014
Teenage violence in schools

2 - Greetings! You give some good reasons for teen violence. Be careful, though, about making statements which are inaccurate...

Writing Feedbackangeltetra - Sep 4, 2007EF_Team2 - Sep 5, 2007
"Computer or book"? Computer

2 - Greetings! I agree, I think this one is better than the other. You make some good points! One...

Writing Feedbackangeltetra - Sep 4, 2007EF_Team2 - Sep 5, 2007
Eng101 starting essay (personal narrative)

8 - That's a good start. What kind of examples can you think of that illustrate these three items? Regards,...

Writing FeedbackReinhardt - Sep 4, 2007EF_Team5 - Oct 11, 2008
Essay on Margaret Mead - looking at other cultures to better understand the complexities of human

2 - Paper on Margeret Mead, need sources information Hi, Sarah I am doing my paper on Margeret Mead as...

Writing Feedbacksarahmk - Sep 3, 2007sadaf - Oct 20, 2010
A Soft Complaint (A Formal Argumentative/Persuasive Essay, Incomplete)

2 - Greetings! What an excellent essay! I think you've done a very good job of striking the balance; I...

Book Reportssilverystars - Sep 3, 2007EF_Team2 - Sep 4, 2007
DESTRUCTION OF GREENHOUSE; Earth has loosen his source.

6 - The environmentalist movement is merely a manifestation of the human need to adhere to some sort of religious belief....

Writing Feedbackangeltetra - Sep 3, 2007EF_Sean - Oct 21, 2009
how can I analyze articles better?

2 - Greetings! It's a real challenge to understand the underlying meaning of something written in a foreign language. I've...

Research Paperscolla26 - Sep 3, 2007EF_Team2 - Sep 3, 2007
Reading response to "Talking Up Close"

3 - Greetings! I do, indeed, have "a few editing suggestions" for your interesting essay! :-)) Reading Response to...

Writing Feedbackcolla26 - Sep 3, 2007EF_Team2 - Sep 3, 2007
Help with Question about Economic History (Australian)

4 - Greetings! I would suggest researching what types of economic development there have been, and looking for any impact...

EssaysphilipZ1985 - Sep 3, 2007EF_Team2 - Sep 9, 2007
'FFA and FLA Leadership Adventures' - U of Florida admissions

2 - Greetings! I'd be happy to give you some editing suggestions for your excellent essay! :-) I discovered...

Undergraduatelinz24708 - Sep 2, 2007EF_Team2 - Sep 3, 2007
What education fails to teach us - analysis essay

4 - It means we shouldn't distinguish between the "dumb" people and the "smart" people. We are similar; no race is...

Writing Feedbackmukmuk - Aug 30, 2007chessman567 - Feb 24, 2013
Essay on how well reasoned was an argument - scale of 0-5

2 - Greetings! While some of the points you made are true, for example, that it would be helpful to...

Writing Feedbackmukmuk - Aug 30, 2007EF_Team2 - Aug 31, 2007
Employers should observe employees - Analysis essay

2 - Greetings! I think you make some excellent points in your essay! Your reasons why interviews are a good...

Writing Feedbackmukmuk - Aug 30, 2007EF_Team2 - Aug 30, 2007
My essay on analysis of Commercialism. Scale of 0-5.

2 - Greetings! My first response on reading this was that you had not really addressed the question asked; upon...

Writing Feedbackmukmuk - Aug 30, 2007EF_Team2 - Aug 30, 2007
In Response To "Why Don't We Complain?"

4 - Greetings! Yes, you definitely cleared up the confusion! Making the distinction clear not only makes it read better,...

Writing Feedbacksilverystars - Aug 30, 2007EF_Team2 - Sep 1, 2007
World of writings; NYU - creative work that has influenced me

4 - Please refer to to our Disclaimer, Privacy Policy, Terms of Use section, which provides that posts cannot be withdrawn...

Undergraduatelunasea - Aug 29, 2007EF_Team2 - Sep 5, 2007
Essay review on an article called "Pleasantville"

4 - Greetings! Overall, yes, I think you made some good points. It's a little difficult for me to know...

Essayssarahmk - Aug 29, 2007EF_Team2 - Aug 30, 2007
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